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模块写作提优专训 向他人介绍自己喜欢的动物
一 方法指导 介绍自己喜欢的动物，可按“三步三要素法”写作。第一步，开头，引出自己喜爱的动物；第二步，正文，介绍动物的特征、生活习性及动物的特点等三要素；第三步，结尾，表达自己对动物的喜爱之情。
二 素材积累
三 以读促写（阅读范文，补全思维导图，体悟写法）
Animals are our friends. We live on the earth together. I love many animals. But pandas are my favourite. They are black and white. They have got small ears. They are very heavy. But they are very small when they are baby pandas. They love vegetables and fruit. Their favourite food is bamboo. They eat for twelve hours a day. They live in China. They are lovely. I like them very much.
四 小试身手（参照以上范文，自己动手写一写吧）请以“My Favourite Animal”为题，根据下列提示，写一篇短文。要求：条理清楚，语法正确，不少于5句话。
My Favourite Animal
一 方法指导 介绍自己喜欢的动物，可按“三步三要素法”写作。第一步，开头，引出自己喜爱的动物；第二步，正文，介绍动物的特征、生活习性及动物的特点等三要素；第三步，结尾，表达自己对动物的喜爱之情。
二 素材积累
三 以读促写（阅读范文，补全思维导图，体悟写法）
Animals are our friends. We live on the earth together. I love many animals. But pandas are my favourite. They are black and white. They have got small ears. They are very heavy. But they are very small when they are baby pandas. They love vegetables and fruit. Their favourite food is bamboo. They eat for twelve hours a day. They live in China. They are lovely. I like them very much.
四 小试身手（参照以上范文，自己动手写一写吧）请以“My Favourite Animal”为题，根据下列提示，写一篇短文。要求：条理清楚，语法正确，不少于5句话。
My Favourite Animal
答案
1. pandas
2. They are black and white.
3. They are heavy and lovely.
4. They eat for twelve hours a day.
5. They live in China.
四 范文：
My Favourite Animal
There are many animals in the world. They are different. My favourite animal is the dog.
Dogs are our real friends. Some dogs are white. Some are black. Some are yellow. They have got small ears. But they can hear clearly. They live in the houses. They can look after the houses for people. They are very clever. They can help people do different things. They love eating meat and bones.
Dogs are very helpful. I love them very much.
2. They are black and white.
3. They are heavy and lovely.
4. They eat for twelve hours a day.
5. They live in China.
四 范文：
My Favourite Animal
There are many animals in the world. They are different. My favourite animal is the dog.
Dogs are our real friends. Some dogs are white. Some are black. Some are yellow. They have got small ears. But they can hear clearly. They live in the houses. They can look after the houses for people. They are very clever. They can help people do different things. They love eating meat and bones.
Dogs are very helpful. I love them very much.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语写作题，要求以“My Favourite Animal”为题，参照范文用“三步三要素法”写作，不少于5句话。解题思路：第一步，开头直接点明自己最喜欢的动物；第二步，正文从动物的外形特征、生活习性、特点三个方面展开介绍；第三步，结尾表达对该动物的喜爱之情，需注意语法正确、条理清晰，可模仿范文的句式和结构完成写作。
【解析】
按照“三步三要素法”写作：1. 开头：引出最喜欢的动物，如“My favourite animal is the dog”；2. 正文：①外形：描述颜色、五官等（如“Some dogs are white. They have got small ears”）；②生活习性：说明居住环境、食物（如“They live in houses. They love eating meat and bones”）；③特点：介绍动物的作用或特质（如“They are clever and can look after houses”）；3. 结尾：总结并表达喜爱（如“I love them very much”），确保句子数量不少于5句，语法正确。
【答案】
My Favourite Animal
There are many animals in the world. They are different. My favourite animal is the dog.
Dogs are our real friends. Some dogs are white. Some are black. Some are yellow. They have got small ears. But they can hear clearly. They live in the houses. They can look after the houses for people. They are very clever. They can help people do different things. They love eating meat and bones.
Dogs are very helpful. I love them very much.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、形容词运用、简单句结构
【点评】
本题是英语写作提优训练题，围绕“介绍喜欢的动物”展开，要求学生掌握介绍类文章的结构，运用所学词汇和句式表达内容，既考查动物相关词汇的积累，又锻炼书面表达的条理性，符合基础写作能力提升的训练目标。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语写作题，要求以“My Favourite Animal”为题，参照范文用“三步三要素法”写作，不少于5句话。解题思路：第一步，开头直接点明自己最喜欢的动物；第二步，正文从动物的外形特征、生活习性、特点三个方面展开介绍；第三步，结尾表达对该动物的喜爱之情，需注意语法正确、条理清晰，可模仿范文的句式和结构完成写作。
【解析】
按照“三步三要素法”写作：1. 开头：引出最喜欢的动物，如“My favourite animal is the dog”；2. 正文：①外形：描述颜色、五官等（如“Some dogs are white. They have got small ears”）；②生活习性：说明居住环境、食物（如“They live in houses. They love eating meat and bones”）；③特点：介绍动物的作用或特质（如“They are clever and can look after houses”）；3. 结尾：总结并表达喜爱（如“I love them very much”），确保句子数量不少于5句，语法正确。
【答案】
My Favourite Animal
There are many animals in the world. They are different. My favourite animal is the dog.
Dogs are our real friends. Some dogs are white. Some are black. Some are yellow. They have got small ears. But they can hear clearly. They live in the houses. They can look after the houses for people. They are very clever. They can help people do different things. They love eating meat and bones.
Dogs are very helpful. I love them very much.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、形容词运用、简单句结构
【点评】
本题是英语写作提优训练题，围绕“介绍喜欢的动物”展开，要求学生掌握介绍类文章的结构，运用所学词汇和句式表达内容，既考查动物相关词汇的积累，又锻炼书面表达的条理性，符合基础写作能力提升的训练目标。
【难度系数】
0.5
