七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
本周末,你将和国际学校的同学一起参观动物园。请你根据以下,写一篇英语短文,向同学介绍你最喜欢的动物。
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1. What's your favourite animal?
2. What do they look like?
3. Do they eat plants or small animals?
4. Something more about the animal.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数80左右;标题已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Animal

[参考范文]
My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is the elephant. I love elephants because they are strong and clever.
Elephants are huge. They have large ears and long trunks. Many elephants have long tusks. But their tusks are valuable ivory, which puts them in great danger. That's not fair because every life counts.
Elephants live in family groups and take care of each other. They can even remember one another and places with food and water after many years. That's amazing.
Would you like to tell me your favourite animal?

【分析】
首先需要仔细审题，明确写作任务：向国际学校的同学介绍自己最喜欢的动物，必须涵盖题目给出的四个提示要点。解题思路如下：
1. 开篇点题：直接点明最喜欢的动物是什么，简单说明喜欢的原因，快速切入主题。
2. 描述外貌：围绕提示的“What do they look like?”，详细描述动物的外形特征，让读者有直观印象。
3. 补充拓展：结合提示的“Something more about the animal”，可以介绍动物的生活习性、独特能力或生存现状，丰富文章内容，提升深度；同时可自然融入饮食相关内容呼应提示要求。
4. 结尾互动：用友好的问句收尾，贴合和同学交流的语境。同时要注意词数控制在80左右，不透露个人真实信息。
【解析】
步骤1：开篇点题，引出核心对象
直接表明最喜欢的动物是大象，并用“strong and clever”简单点明喜爱的原因，开篇简洁明了：My favourite animal is the elephant. I love elephants because they are strong and clever.
步骤2：描述外貌并引出生存危机
详细描述大象的外形：“huge”“large ears”“long trunks”“long tusks”，同时用定语从句说明象牙带来的危险，增加文章的现实意义：Elephants are huge. They have large ears and long trunks. Many elephants have long tusks. But their tusks are valuable ivory, which puts them in great danger. That's not fair because every life counts.
步骤3：介绍习性与独特能力
介绍大象群居、互助的习性，以及长久记忆的能力，体现其聪明的特点，呼应开头的喜爱原因：Elephants live in family groups and take care of each other. They can even remember one another and places with food and water after many years. That's amazing.
步骤4：结尾互动，贴合交流场景
用问句询问对方最喜欢的动物，自然收尾，符合和同学沟通的语境：Would you like to tell me your favourite animal?
【答案】
My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is the elephant. I love elephants because they are strong and clever.
Elephants are huge. They have large ears and long trunks. Many elephants have long tusks. But their tusks are valuable ivory, which puts them in great danger. That's not fair because every life counts.
Elephants live in family groups and take care of each other. They can even remember one another and places with food and water after many years. That's amazing.
Would you like to tell me your favourite animal?
【知识点】
动物类话题写作、英语记叙文结构、实用句式运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，层次分明。内容上不仅介绍了大象的外形、习性，还融入了保护动物的意识，立意积极。语言表达流畅自然，运用了定语从句等句式，提升了文章的表达水平，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6