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五、书面表达
生活中，总有这样一位榜样：在你迷茫时指引方向，在你消沉时给予鼓励……那么，谁是你心中的榜样？假如你是李华，请结合下面的提示，写一篇100词左右的演讲稿，分享榜样带给你的力量。文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：1. Introduce the role model and his/her achievements.
2. Share his/her influence on you.
Dear teachers and classmates,
I'm Li Hua. Today I want to share my role model—.
That's all. Thank you.
生活中，总有这样一位榜样：在你迷茫时指引方向，在你消沉时给予鼓励……那么，谁是你心中的榜样？假如你是李华，请结合下面的提示，写一篇100词左右的演讲稿，分享榜样带给你的力量。文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：1. Introduce the role model and his/her achievements.
2. Share his/her influence on you.
Dear teachers and classmates,
I'm Li Hua. Today I want to share my role model—.
That's all. Thank you.
答案
Dear teachers and classmates,
I'm Li Hua. Today I want to share my role model—Helen Keller.
When Helen Keller was very young, a terrible fever took away her ability to hear and see. Facing these great challenges, she never gave up and kept learning with a strong will. She learned to read, write and speak, and later became a famous writer. Countless readers all over the world are encouraged by her book Three Days to See.
Helen Keller's story has influenced me a lot. She teaches me to stay positive towards life and never lose hope. Whenever I face difficulties, I will think of her and keep going. She is truly my role model.
That's all. Thank you.
I'm Li Hua. Today I want to share my role model—Helen Keller.
When Helen Keller was very young, a terrible fever took away her ability to hear and see. Facing these great challenges, she never gave up and kept learning with a strong will. She learned to read, write and speak, and later became a famous writer. Countless readers all over the world are encouraged by her book Three Days to See.
Helen Keller's story has influenced me a lot. She teaches me to stay positive towards life and never lose hope. Whenever I face difficulties, I will think of her and keep going. She is truly my role model.
That's all. Thank you.
解析
【分析】
解题思路：首先选取典型且符合“榜样”定义的人物海伦·凯勒，紧扣题目提示的两个要点展开；先介绍她的经历与成就（幼年患病失聪失明，凭借顽强意志学习，成为著名作家，著有《假如给我三天光明》），再阐述她对自己的积极影响（教会自己面对困难要积极乐观、永不放弃）；最后注意演讲稿的语气，衔接自然，控制字数在要求范围内，补全中间内容即可。
【解析】
1. 补全开头的榜样人物：Helen Keller；
2. 介绍海伦·凯勒的经历与成就：When Helen Keller was very young, a terrible fever took away her ability to hear and see. Facing these great challenges, she never gave up and kept learning with a strong will. She learned to read, write and speak, and later became a famous writer. Countless readers all over the world are encouraged by her book Three Days to See；
3. 阐述她对自己的影响：Helen Keller's story has influenced me a lot. She teaches me to stay positive towards life and never lose hope. Whenever I face difficulties, I will think of her and keep going. She is truly my role model；
4. 确保内容符合演讲稿要求，衔接流畅，字数达标，补全后完成写作。
【答案】
Dear teachers and classmates,
I'm Li Hua. Today I want to share my role model—Helen Keller.
When Helen Keller was very young, a terrible fever took away her ability to hear and see. Facing these great challenges, she never gave up and kept learning with a strong will. She learned to read, write and speak, and later became a famous writer. Countless readers all over the world are encouraged by her book Three Days to See.
Helen Keller's story has influenced me a lot. She teaches me to stay positive towards life and never lose hope. Whenever I face difficulties, I will think of her and keep going. She is truly my role model.
That's all. Thank you.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物介绍类写作、演讲稿写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目提示，内容具体充实，情感真挚，符合演讲稿的格式与语气要求，清晰展现了榜样的力量，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达作品。
【难度系数】
0.6
解题思路：首先选取典型且符合“榜样”定义的人物海伦·凯勒，紧扣题目提示的两个要点展开；先介绍她的经历与成就（幼年患病失聪失明，凭借顽强意志学习，成为著名作家，著有《假如给我三天光明》），再阐述她对自己的积极影响（教会自己面对困难要积极乐观、永不放弃）；最后注意演讲稿的语气，衔接自然，控制字数在要求范围内，补全中间内容即可。
【解析】
1. 补全开头的榜样人物：Helen Keller；
2. 介绍海伦·凯勒的经历与成就：When Helen Keller was very young, a terrible fever took away her ability to hear and see. Facing these great challenges, she never gave up and kept learning with a strong will. She learned to read, write and speak, and later became a famous writer. Countless readers all over the world are encouraged by her book Three Days to See；
3. 阐述她对自己的影响：Helen Keller's story has influenced me a lot. She teaches me to stay positive towards life and never lose hope. Whenever I face difficulties, I will think of her and keep going. She is truly my role model；
4. 确保内容符合演讲稿要求，衔接流畅，字数达标，补全后完成写作。
【答案】
Dear teachers and classmates,
I'm Li Hua. Today I want to share my role model—Helen Keller.
When Helen Keller was very young, a terrible fever took away her ability to hear and see. Facing these great challenges, she never gave up and kept learning with a strong will. She learned to read, write and speak, and later became a famous writer. Countless readers all over the world are encouraged by her book Three Days to See.
Helen Keller's story has influenced me a lot. She teaches me to stay positive towards life and never lose hope. Whenever I face difficulties, I will think of her and keep going. She is truly my role model.
That's all. Thank you.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物介绍类写作、演讲稿写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目提示，内容具体充实，情感真挚，符合演讲稿的格式与语气要求，清晰展现了榜样的力量，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达作品。
【难度系数】
0.6
