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某英语报正开展以“My hero”为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华，请根据下面表格所给的信息，写一篇英语短文介绍屠呦呦(Tu Youyou)的生平事迹，并向该英文报投稿。
Fact Box: Tu Youyou
1930 was born in Ningbo, Zhejiang
1951—1955 studied in Beijing Medical College
1969 led a team to find a cure(治愈) for malaria(疟疾)
1972 managed to extract(提取) qinghaosu from a Chinese herb(草药)
2015 won the Nobel Prize
注意:1. 文中必须包含所给的要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数:80～100。
某英语报正开展以“My hero”为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华，请根据下面表格所给的信息，写一篇英语短文介绍屠呦呦(Tu Youyou)的生平事迹，并向该英文报投稿。
Fact Box: Tu Youyou
1930 was born in Ningbo, Zhejiang
1951—1955 studied in Beijing Medical College
1969 led a team to find a cure(治愈) for malaria(疟疾)
1972 managed to extract(提取) qinghaosu from a Chinese herb(草药)
2015 won the Nobel Prize
注意:1. 文中必须包含所给的要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数:80～100。
答案
One possible version:
Everyone has a hero in their heart, and mine is Tu Youyou—a great scientist who has touched millions of lives with her work.
Tu Youyou was born in Ningbo, Zhejiang in 1930. From 1951 to 1955, she studied at Beijing Medical College, building a solid base for her future research. In 1969, she led a team to find a cure for malaria, a dangerous disease. After years of hard efforts, she successfully extracted qinghaosu from a Chinese herb in 1972. This discovery saved countless people around the world, and in 2015, she won the Nobel Prize for her great achievement.
To me, Tu Youyou is not just a scientist but a role model. It is her persistence and devotion that teach me an important lesson: no matter how hard the task is, as long as we stick to our goals and work hard, we can make a difference to the world. She makes me want to pursue my dreams with courage and effort.
Everyone has a hero in their heart, and mine is Tu Youyou—a great scientist who has touched millions of lives with her work.
Tu Youyou was born in Ningbo, Zhejiang in 1930. From 1951 to 1955, she studied at Beijing Medical College, building a solid base for her future research. In 1969, she led a team to find a cure for malaria, a dangerous disease. After years of hard efforts, she successfully extracted qinghaosu from a Chinese herb in 1972. This discovery saved countless people around the world, and in 2015, she won the Nobel Prize for her great achievement.
To me, Tu Youyou is not just a scientist but a role model. It is her persistence and devotion that teach me an important lesson: no matter how hard the task is, as long as we stick to our goals and work hard, we can make a difference to the world. She makes me want to pursue my dreams with courage and effort.
解析
【分析】首先审题，明确征文主题为“My hero”，需介绍屠呦呦，必须包含表格中所有生平要点，词数80～100，不得出现真实信息。接着构思结构：采用“总-分-总”结构，开头点明屠呦呦是自己的英雄；中间按时间顺序梳理其出生、求学、研究疟疾、提取青蒿素、获诺奖的经历；结尾表达敬佩，呼应主题。写作时需适当发挥，控制词数，语言符合中学生英语水平。
【解析】按照构思的结构写作：开头总起，引出屠呦呦是自己的英雄；中间按时间线依次介绍屠呦呦1930年出生于浙江宁波，1951-1955年在北京医学院学习，1969年带队研究疟疾治疗方法，1972年成功提取青蒿素，2015年获诺贝尔奖；结尾升华，表达对屠呦呦的敬佩，点明其为榜样，呼应主题，确保涵盖所有要点，词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Everyone has a hero in their heart, and mine is Tu Youyou—a great scientist who has touched millions of lives with her work.
Tu Youyou was born in Ningbo, Zhejiang in 1930. From 1951 to 1955, she studied at Beijing Medical College, building a solid base for her future research. In 1969, she led a team to find a cure for malaria, a dangerous disease. After years of hard efforts, she successfully extracted qinghaosu from a Chinese herb in 1972. This discovery saved countless people around the world, and in 2015, she won the Nobel Prize for her great achievement.
To me, Tu Youyou is not just a scientist but a role model. It is her persistence and devotion that teach me an important lesson: no matter how hard the task is, as long as we stick to our goals and work hard, we can make a difference to the world. She makes me want to pursue my dreams with courage and effort.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、人物介绍类作文、时间顺序叙事
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有给定信息，采用时间顺序使文章条理清晰，语言流畅自然，结尾升华了对英雄的崇敬之情，符合征文的各项要求，是一篇优秀的参赛范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照构思的结构写作：开头总起，引出屠呦呦是自己的英雄；中间按时间线依次介绍屠呦呦1930年出生于浙江宁波，1951-1955年在北京医学院学习，1969年带队研究疟疾治疗方法，1972年成功提取青蒿素，2015年获诺贝尔奖；结尾升华，表达对屠呦呦的敬佩，点明其为榜样，呼应主题，确保涵盖所有要点，词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Everyone has a hero in their heart, and mine is Tu Youyou—a great scientist who has touched millions of lives with her work.
Tu Youyou was born in Ningbo, Zhejiang in 1930. From 1951 to 1955, she studied at Beijing Medical College, building a solid base for her future research. In 1969, she led a team to find a cure for malaria, a dangerous disease. After years of hard efforts, she successfully extracted qinghaosu from a Chinese herb in 1972. This discovery saved countless people around the world, and in 2015, she won the Nobel Prize for her great achievement.
To me, Tu Youyou is not just a scientist but a role model. It is her persistence and devotion that teach me an important lesson: no matter how hard the task is, as long as we stick to our goals and work hard, we can make a difference to the world. She makes me want to pursue my dreams with courage and effort.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、人物介绍类作文、时间顺序叙事
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有给定信息，采用时间顺序使文章条理清晰，语言流畅自然，结尾升华了对英雄的崇敬之情，符合征文的各项要求，是一篇优秀的参赛范文。
【难度系数】0.6
