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Ⅷ. 书面表达(共19分)
(2024·苏州中考)你校 English Reading Club 正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会,本周阅读内容为 Auggie's Story(阅读理解 A 篇)。请从以下两个标题中任选一个,写一篇英文读后感。
选择一:以"Sometimes people surprise us"为题,内容包括:
1. 你对这句话的理解;
2. 结合生活实际举例说明;
3. 你得到的启发。
选择二:以"Trouble is a friend"为题,内容包括:
1. 你对这句话的理解;
2. 结合生活实际举例说明;
3. 你得到的启发。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 请先填写你所选的标题,再写文章;
3. 照抄阅读语篇不得分;
4. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Title:
After reading Auggie's story, I'm really touched.
题中题 054
(2024·苏州中考)你校 English Reading Club 正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会,本周阅读内容为 Auggie's Story(阅读理解 A 篇)。请从以下两个标题中任选一个,写一篇英文读后感。
选择一:以"Sometimes people surprise us"为题,内容包括:
1. 你对这句话的理解;
2. 结合生活实际举例说明;
3. 你得到的启发。
选择二:以"Trouble is a friend"为题,内容包括:
1. 你对这句话的理解;
2. 结合生活实际举例说明;
3. 你得到的启发。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 请先填写你所选的标题,再写文章;
3. 照抄阅读语篇不得分;
4. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Title:
After reading Auggie's story, I'm really touched.
题中题 054
答案
Ⅷ. One possible version:
Title: Trouble is a friend
After reading Auggie's story, I'm really touched. And I think trouble is a friend.
The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.
In my English study last year, my grammar was very bad. That was a big trouble for me because it lowered my English score. But thanks to the help of my deskmate, she helped me make a grammar study schedule and helped me with grammar every week. And I spent an hour studying grammar every day. In the end, my grammar improved greatly.
In my opinion, trouble is bad, but it sometimes makes us better. It reminds us not to give up when facing difficulties and to face them bravely.
思路梳理 审题:本文是一篇话题作文,首先学生需要仔细阅读 Auggie's Story,然后选择一个话题完成写作。无论选择哪个话题,都需要解释自己对话题的理解,结合自身的实际情况举例说明,最后表达自己得到的启发。文章时态为"一般现在时"和"一般过去时";以第一人称为主。写作步骤:第一步,请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解;第二步,结合生活实际举例说明;第三步,最后表达你得到的启发。
Title: Trouble is a friend
After reading Auggie's story, I'm really touched. And I think trouble is a friend.
The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.
In my English study last year, my grammar was very bad. That was a big trouble for me because it lowered my English score. But thanks to the help of my deskmate, she helped me make a grammar study schedule and helped me with grammar every week. And I spent an hour studying grammar every day. In the end, my grammar improved greatly.
In my opinion, trouble is bad, but it sometimes makes us better. It reminds us not to give up when facing difficulties and to face them bravely.
思路梳理 审题:本文是一篇话题作文,首先学生需要仔细阅读 Auggie's Story,然后选择一个话题完成写作。无论选择哪个话题,都需要解释自己对话题的理解,结合自身的实际情况举例说明,最后表达自己得到的启发。文章时态为"一般现在时"和"一般过去时";以第一人称为主。写作步骤:第一步,请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解;第二步,结合生活实际举例说明;第三步,最后表达你得到的启发。
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步要明确题目属性：属于读后感悟类写作，可二选一确定自己更容易展开的标题，严格对应题干给出的三个内容要点完成创作。接下来梳理写作逻辑：1. 先选定标题，承接题干给出的开篇句，直接亮明自己对所选主题句的认同；2. 用通俗易懂的语言解释你对这句话的理解，把抽象的道理讲清楚，贴合主题；3. 选取自己熟悉的校园/生活实例展开叙述，注意叙述过往经历要用一般过去时，保证事例能支撑主题；4. 最后收尾升华，写出自己得到的启发，呼应标题。同时要注意控制词数在100左右，不能照搬阅读原文，也不要出现真实个人信息，保证逻辑连贯即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
步骤1：填写选定的标题，承接题干给出的开头句，直接点明核心观点，比如选Trouble is a friend，就顺承说出自己读完故事后非常认同“麻烦是朋友”这个观点。
步骤2：阐释主题句的内涵，说明麻烦虽然会让人沮丧，但能帮我们发现自身不足，督促我们进步，本质和朋友的作用一致。
步骤3：结合自身真实感强的学习生活事例展开，比如选取英语学习中语法薄弱的经历，讲清楚自己遇到的困难、付出的努力、最终获得的进步，用一般过去时叙述，内容贴合主题。
步骤4：最后总结感悟，点明面对麻烦不要退缩，勇敢应对就能获得成长，呼应标题，完成全文。
参考范文如下：
【答案】
Title: Trouble is a friend
After reading Auggie's story, I'm really touched. And I think trouble is a friend.
The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.
In my English study last year, my grammar was very bad. That was a big trouble for me because it lowered my English score. But thanks to the help of my deskmate, she helped me make a grammar study schedule and helped me with grammar every week. And I spent an hour studying grammar every day. In the end, my grammar improved greatly.
In my opinion, trouble is bad, but it sometimes makes us better. It reminds us not to give up when facing difficulties and to face them bravely.
【知识点】
英语读后感写作，时态灵活运用，写作要点覆盖
【点评】
本题是中考典型的读后输出类写作题，设置二选一的主题降低了写作门槛，既考查学生的英语表达能力，也引导学生结合自身经历正向思考人生道理。写作时只要严格对应题干给出的三个要点，事例贴合学生真实生活，时态使用准确，逻辑通顺，避免照搬阅读原文，就能拿到较高分数。
【难度系数】
0.65
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步要明确题目属性：属于读后感悟类写作，可二选一确定自己更容易展开的标题，严格对应题干给出的三个内容要点完成创作。接下来梳理写作逻辑：1. 先选定标题，承接题干给出的开篇句，直接亮明自己对所选主题句的认同；2. 用通俗易懂的语言解释你对这句话的理解，把抽象的道理讲清楚，贴合主题；3. 选取自己熟悉的校园/生活实例展开叙述，注意叙述过往经历要用一般过去时，保证事例能支撑主题；4. 最后收尾升华，写出自己得到的启发，呼应标题。同时要注意控制词数在100左右，不能照搬阅读原文，也不要出现真实个人信息，保证逻辑连贯即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
步骤1：填写选定的标题，承接题干给出的开头句，直接点明核心观点，比如选Trouble is a friend，就顺承说出自己读完故事后非常认同“麻烦是朋友”这个观点。
步骤2：阐释主题句的内涵，说明麻烦虽然会让人沮丧，但能帮我们发现自身不足，督促我们进步，本质和朋友的作用一致。
步骤3：结合自身真实感强的学习生活事例展开，比如选取英语学习中语法薄弱的经历，讲清楚自己遇到的困难、付出的努力、最终获得的进步，用一般过去时叙述，内容贴合主题。
步骤4：最后总结感悟，点明面对麻烦不要退缩，勇敢应对就能获得成长，呼应标题，完成全文。
参考范文如下：
【答案】
Title: Trouble is a friend
After reading Auggie's story, I'm really touched. And I think trouble is a friend.
The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.
In my English study last year, my grammar was very bad. That was a big trouble for me because it lowered my English score. But thanks to the help of my deskmate, she helped me make a grammar study schedule and helped me with grammar every week. And I spent an hour studying grammar every day. In the end, my grammar improved greatly.
In my opinion, trouble is bad, but it sometimes makes us better. It reminds us not to give up when facing difficulties and to face them bravely.
【知识点】
英语读后感写作，时态灵活运用，写作要点覆盖
【点评】
本题是中考典型的读后输出类写作题，设置二选一的主题降低了写作门槛，既考查学生的英语表达能力，也引导学生结合自身经历正向思考人生道理。写作时只要严格对应题干给出的三个要点，事例贴合学生真实生活，时态使用准确，逻辑通顺，避免照搬阅读原文，就能拿到较高分数。
【难度系数】
0.65
