Ⅳ.书面表达
假如你是彼得(Peter),你的朋友吉尔(Jill)发来电子邮件向你抱怨她的家规太严格。以下是吉尔的邮件,请你据此用英语给她回一封邮件并给出相关建议。不少于70词。

Dear Jill,
Yours,
Peter
假如你是彼得(Peter),你的朋友吉尔(Jill)发来电子邮件向你抱怨她的家规太严格。以下是吉尔的邮件,请你据此用英语给她回一封邮件并给出相关建议。不少于70词。
Dear Jill,
Here are some ideas for you.
It is a good habit to get up early and go to bed early. But sometimes when you feel tired, you can get up a little late on weekends. Everyone knows that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. You can hang out with friends on weekends.
Why not talk about it with your parents first? And then do your best to study well.
I'm sure you can live a happy life.
Yours,
Peter
答案
One possible version:
Dear Jill,
Here are some ideas for you.
It is a good habit to get up early and go to bed early. But sometimes when you feel tired, you can get up a little late on weekends. Everyone knows that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. You can hang out with friends on weekends. Why not talk about it with your parents first? And then do your best to study well. I'm sure you can live a happy life.
Yours,
Peter
Dear Jill,
Here are some ideas for you.
It is a good habit to get up early and go to bed early. But sometimes when you feel tired, you can get up a little late on weekends. Everyone knows that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. You can hang out with friends on weekends. Why not talk about it with your parents first? And then do your best to study well. I'm sure you can live a happy life.
Yours,
Peter
解析
【分析】
作为彼得,需先回应吉尔的抱怨,针对她提到的家规(早睡早起、不能夜间和朋友闲逛、要学好所有科目)给出合理可行的建议,同时遵循英语邮件的格式,确保内容连贯、符合要求(不少于70词),建议要贴合吉尔的实际情况,语言自然得体。
【解析】
1. 开头回应吉尔的烦恼,引出要给出建议;
2. 针对“早睡早起”:肯定该习惯的好处,建议周末可适当调整作息(如稍微晚起);
3. 针对“不能夜间和朋友闲逛”:结合“劳逸结合”的道理,建议周末和朋友外出;
4. 针对“要学好所有科目”:建议和父母沟通想法,同时自己努力学习;
5. 结尾表达祝福,符合邮件格式。
【答案】
Dear Jill,
Here are some ideas for you.
It is a good habit to get up early and go to bed early. But sometimes when you feel tired, you can get up a little late on weekends. Everyone knows that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. You can hang out with friends on weekends. Why not talk about it with your parents first? And then do your best to study well. I'm sure you can live a happy life.
Yours,
Peter
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、建议表达、日常话题应用
【点评】
本题为建议类英语书面表达题,要求学生根据朋友的烦恼给出合理可行的建议,考查学生的英语应用能力与逻辑思维,贴合初中英语写作的常见考查方向,注重语言的实用性与得体性。
【难度系数】
0.5
作为彼得,需先回应吉尔的抱怨,针对她提到的家规(早睡早起、不能夜间和朋友闲逛、要学好所有科目)给出合理可行的建议,同时遵循英语邮件的格式,确保内容连贯、符合要求(不少于70词),建议要贴合吉尔的实际情况,语言自然得体。
【解析】
1. 开头回应吉尔的烦恼,引出要给出建议;
2. 针对“早睡早起”:肯定该习惯的好处,建议周末可适当调整作息(如稍微晚起);
3. 针对“不能夜间和朋友闲逛”:结合“劳逸结合”的道理,建议周末和朋友外出;
4. 针对“要学好所有科目”:建议和父母沟通想法,同时自己努力学习;
5. 结尾表达祝福,符合邮件格式。
【答案】
Dear Jill,
Here are some ideas for you.
It is a good habit to get up early and go to bed early. But sometimes when you feel tired, you can get up a little late on weekends. Everyone knows that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. You can hang out with friends on weekends. Why not talk about it with your parents first? And then do your best to study well. I'm sure you can live a happy life.
Yours,
Peter
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、建议表达、日常话题应用
【点评】
本题为建议类英语书面表达题,要求学生根据朋友的烦恼给出合理可行的建议,考查学生的英语应用能力与逻辑思维,贴合初中英语写作的常见考查方向,注重语言的实用性与得体性。
【难度系数】
0.5
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