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孔子教导我们：“言必信，行必果。”诚信，是刻在我们血脉里的精神基因，是跨越时空的文明传承。在日常生活中，诚信同样闪烁着耀眼的光芒：或许是考试时抵制诱惑的坚守，或许是犯错后主动承认错误的勇气，又或许是拾金不昧的纯粹本心。请你以“An experience of being honest”为题，回顾发生在你身上的一次有关诚信的经历。
Word bank：make a promise 许诺 keep a promise 守诺 admit my mistake 承认我的错误
win trust 赢得信任 be brave enough to face the temptation 勇敢地面对诱惑
be responsible for ... 对……负责 be thankful for ... 对……心存感激
An experience of being honest
Word bank：make a promise 许诺 keep a promise 守诺 admit my mistake 承认我的错误
win trust 赢得信任 be brave enough to face the temptation 勇敢地面对诱惑
be responsible for ... 对……负责 be thankful for ... 对……心存感激
An experience of being honest
Yesterday, I went to buy a new ruler. The ruler was 5 yuan, and I gave the shopkeeper 10 yuan. However, she was too busy and gave me back 10 yuan instead of 5 yuan.
I wanted to go away quietly with the money. I thought, "Great! I can buy ice cream now!" But then, I stopped. It was not my money. And the shopkeeper worked hard all day. She would be sad about the lost money.
I walked back to the shopkeeper and told her the truth. She smiled at me and said thank you. I gave the 10-yuan note back to her, and she finally gave me the correct 5-yuan change.
I felt good because I was brave enough to face the temptation and be honest. Honesty is very important.
答案
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参考范文：
An experience of being honest
Yesterday, I went to buy a new ruler. The ruler was 5 yuan, and I gave the shopkeeper 10 yuan. However, she was too busy and gave me back 10 yuan instead of 5 yuan.
I wanted to go away quietly with the money. I thought, "Great! I can buy ice cream now!" But then, I stopped. It was not my money. And the shopkeeper worked hard all day. She would be sad about the lost money.
I walked back to the shopkeeper and told her the truth. She smiled at me and said thank you. I gave the 10-yuan note back to her, and she finally gave me the correct 5-yuan change.
I felt good because I was brave enough to face the temptation and be honest. Honesty is very important.
参考范文：
An experience of being honest
Yesterday, I went to buy a new ruler. The ruler was 5 yuan, and I gave the shopkeeper 10 yuan. However, she was too busy and gave me back 10 yuan instead of 5 yuan.
I wanted to go away quietly with the money. I thought, "Great! I can buy ice cream now!" But then, I stopped. It was not my money. And the shopkeeper worked hard all day. She would be sad about the lost money.
I walked back to the shopkeeper and told her the truth. She smiled at me and said thank you. I gave the 10-yuan note back to her, and she finally gave me the correct 5-yuan change.
I felt good because I was brave enough to face the temptation and be honest. Honesty is very important.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“An experience of being honest”为题，写一篇关于自身诚信经历的英语记叙文。解题思路：1. 审题确定核心：围绕“诚实经历”展开，用第一人称、一般过去时写作；2. 选材贴近生活：选取购物时多找钱这类易引发内心挣扎的小事，易体现诚信主题；3. 结构规划：开头交代事件背景，中间写面对诱惑的心理矛盾，结尾写行动与感悟；4. 运用给定词汇丰富表达，贴合题目要求。
【解析】
按照记叙文“背景-冲突-行动-感悟”的结构写作：
1. 开头交代事件：Yesterday, I went to buy a new ruler. The ruler was 5 yuan, and I gave the shopkeeper 10 yuan. However, she was too busy and gave me back 10 yuan instead of 5 yuan.
2. 中间写内心挣扎：I wanted to go away quietly with the money. I thought, "Great! I can buy ice cream now!" But then, I stopped. It was not my money. And the shopkeeper worked hard all day. She would be sad about the lost money.
3. 行动与结果：I walked back to the shopkeeper and told her the truth. She smiled at me and said thank you. I gave the 10-yuan note back to her, and she finally gave me the correct 5-yuan change.
4. 结尾感悟：I felt good because I was brave enough to face the temptation and be honest. Honesty is very important.
【答案】
An experience of being honest
Yesterday, I went to buy a new ruler. The ruler was 5 yuan, and I gave the shopkeeper 10 yuan. However, she was too busy and gave me back 10 yuan instead of 5 yuan.
I wanted to go away quietly with the money. I thought, "Great! I can buy ice cream now!" But then, I stopped. It was not my money. And the shopkeeper worked hard all day. She would be sad about the lost money.
I walked back to the shopkeeper and told her the truth. She smiled at me and said thank you. I gave the 10-yuan note back to her, and she finally gave me the correct 5-yuan change.
I felt good because I was brave enough to face the temptation and be honest. Honesty is very important.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用、诚信主题英语表达
【点评】
范文选取贴近日常的小事，通过具体的心理活动与行动展现诚信品质，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合题目要求，能传递诚信的核心意义。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“An experience of being honest”为题，写一篇关于自身诚信经历的英语记叙文。解题思路：1. 审题确定核心：围绕“诚实经历”展开，用第一人称、一般过去时写作；2. 选材贴近生活：选取购物时多找钱这类易引发内心挣扎的小事，易体现诚信主题；3. 结构规划：开头交代事件背景，中间写面对诱惑的心理矛盾，结尾写行动与感悟；4. 运用给定词汇丰富表达，贴合题目要求。
【解析】
按照记叙文“背景-冲突-行动-感悟”的结构写作：
1. 开头交代事件：Yesterday, I went to buy a new ruler. The ruler was 5 yuan, and I gave the shopkeeper 10 yuan. However, she was too busy and gave me back 10 yuan instead of 5 yuan.
2. 中间写内心挣扎：I wanted to go away quietly with the money. I thought, "Great! I can buy ice cream now!" But then, I stopped. It was not my money. And the shopkeeper worked hard all day. She would be sad about the lost money.
3. 行动与结果：I walked back to the shopkeeper and told her the truth. She smiled at me and said thank you. I gave the 10-yuan note back to her, and she finally gave me the correct 5-yuan change.
4. 结尾感悟：I felt good because I was brave enough to face the temptation and be honest. Honesty is very important.
【答案】
An experience of being honest
Yesterday, I went to buy a new ruler. The ruler was 5 yuan, and I gave the shopkeeper 10 yuan. However, she was too busy and gave me back 10 yuan instead of 5 yuan.
I wanted to go away quietly with the money. I thought, "Great! I can buy ice cream now!" But then, I stopped. It was not my money. And the shopkeeper worked hard all day. She would be sad about the lost money.
I walked back to the shopkeeper and told her the truth. She smiled at me and said thank you. I gave the 10-yuan note back to her, and she finally gave me the correct 5-yuan change.
I felt good because I was brave enough to face the temptation and be honest. Honesty is very important.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用、诚信主题英语表达
【点评】
范文选取贴近日常的小事，通过具体的心理活动与行动展现诚信品质，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合题目要求，能传递诚信的核心意义。
【难度系数】
0.6
