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端午节是我国的传统佳节之一。请你根据表格提示，用英文简单介绍你家乡端午节的情况。
要求:1. 表达中必须包含所给要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。2. 词数90左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]1. 文体:记叙文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:以第三人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Of all the festivals,
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端午节是我国的传统佳节之一。请你根据表格提示，用英文简单介绍你家乡端午节的情况。
要求:1. 表达中必须包含所给要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。2. 词数90左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]1. 文体:记叙文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:以第三人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Of all the festivals,
I like the Dragon Boat Festival best. It's an important traditional festival in China.
It usually comes in June every year. Most Chinese families celebrate it.
People get together with family members and have a big dinner.
They eat a kind of special food—rice dumplings.
There are different kinds of rice dumplings in my hometown.
On that day, there are lots of activities, like watching dragon boat races.
It is really wonderful.
Everyone has a good time on that day.
答案
One possible version:
Of all the festivals, I like the Dragon Boat Festival best. It's an important traditional festival in China.
It usually comes in June every year. Most Chinese families celebrate it. People get together with family members and have a big dinner. They eat a kind of special food—rice dumplings. There are different kinds of rice dumplings in my hometown. On that day, there are lots of activities, like watching dragon boat races.
It is really wonderful. Everyone has a good time on that day.
Of all the festivals, I like the Dragon Boat Festival best. It's an important traditional festival in China.
It usually comes in June every year. Most Chinese families celebrate it. People get together with family members and have a big dinner. They eat a kind of special food—rice dumplings. There are different kinds of rice dumplings in my hometown. On that day, there are lots of activities, like watching dragon boat races.
It is really wonderful. Everyone has a good time on that day.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作要求：介绍家乡端午节，文体为记叙文，时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主，词数90左右，需包含指定要点且适当发挥不生硬翻译。解题思路：1. 开头点明最喜欢的节日是端午节，说明其作为中国重要传统节日的地位；2. 依次介绍节日时间、家庭团聚聚餐的习俗、家乡粽子的特点；3. 提及端午节的传统活动（赛龙舟）；4. 收尾表达节日的美好感受，确保所有要点完整，语言自然流畅。
【解析】
按照写作逻辑分段落完成：第一段引出端午节，说明其是中国重要传统节日；第二段介绍节日时间（六月）、家庭团聚聚餐、吃粽子（家乡粽子种类多）、赛龙舟活动；第三段总结节日的美好，大家都开心。全程使用一般现在时，紧扣主题，适当补充细节使内容更丰富。
【答案】
One possible version:
Of all the festivals, I like the Dragon Boat Festival best. It's an important traditional festival in China.
It usually comes in June every year. Most Chinese families celebrate it. People get together with family members and have a big dinner. They eat a kind of special food—rice dumplings. There are different kinds of rice dumplings in my hometown. On that day, there are lots of activities, like watching dragon boat races.
It is really wonderful. Everyone has a good time on that day.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、节日话题英语表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文紧扣端午节主题，涵盖了节日时间、家庭活动、特色食物、传统活动等核心要点，时态正确统一，语言流畅自然，适当补充家乡粽子的细节让内容更具体，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作要求：介绍家乡端午节，文体为记叙文，时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主，词数90左右，需包含指定要点且适当发挥不生硬翻译。解题思路：1. 开头点明最喜欢的节日是端午节，说明其作为中国重要传统节日的地位；2. 依次介绍节日时间、家庭团聚聚餐的习俗、家乡粽子的特点；3. 提及端午节的传统活动（赛龙舟）；4. 收尾表达节日的美好感受，确保所有要点完整，语言自然流畅。
【解析】
按照写作逻辑分段落完成：第一段引出端午节，说明其是中国重要传统节日；第二段介绍节日时间（六月）、家庭团聚聚餐、吃粽子（家乡粽子种类多）、赛龙舟活动；第三段总结节日的美好，大家都开心。全程使用一般现在时，紧扣主题，适当补充细节使内容更丰富。
【答案】
One possible version:
Of all the festivals, I like the Dragon Boat Festival best. It's an important traditional festival in China.
It usually comes in June every year. Most Chinese families celebrate it. People get together with family members and have a big dinner. They eat a kind of special food—rice dumplings. There are different kinds of rice dumplings in my hometown. On that day, there are lots of activities, like watching dragon boat races.
It is really wonderful. Everyone has a good time on that day.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、节日话题英语表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文紧扣端午节主题，涵盖了节日时间、家庭活动、特色食物、传统活动等核心要点，时态正确统一，语言流畅自然，适当补充家乡粽子的细节让内容更具体，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
