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爆竹声中一岁除,春风送暖入屠苏。春节就要到了,珊珊一家正在忙着做准备。请你根据图片提示,发挥想象,写一篇英文小短文介绍珊珊一家正在进行的活动以及感受。(10 分)
要求:1. 短文须包含图中所有的信息,可适当发挥;2. 语句通顺、连贯,书写规范;3. 不少于35词(不含已给出内容)。
Chinese New Year is coming soon.
Shanshan's family are all busy now. Look!
爆竹声中一岁除,春风送暖入屠苏。春节就要到了,珊珊一家正在忙着做准备。请你根据图片提示,发挥想象,写一篇英文小短文介绍珊珊一家正在进行的活动以及感受。(10 分)
要求:1. 短文须包含图中所有的信息,可适当发挥;2. 语句通顺、连贯,书写规范;3. 不少于35词(不含已给出内容)。
Chinese New Year is coming soon.
Shanshan's family are all busy now. Look!
答案
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Chinese New Year is coming soon.
Shanshan's family are all busy now. Look!
Shanshan is cleaning the door. Her father is
cleaning the window. Her grandpa is watering
the flowers. Where are Shanshan's grandma and
mother? They're in the kitchen. Her grandma is
making jiaozi, and her mother is cooking nice
food. They're very busy but happy!
Chinese New Year is coming soon.
Shanshan's family are all busy now. Look!
Shanshan is cleaning the door. Her father is
cleaning the window. Her grandpa is watering
the flowers. Where are Shanshan's grandma and
mother? They're in the kitchen. Her grandma is
making jiaozi, and her mother is cooking nice
food. They're very busy but happy!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要先仔细观察图片，梳理出图中所有人物和对应的活动：一共5位家庭成员，分别是擦门的珊珊、擦窗户的爸爸、浇花的爷爷、包饺子的奶奶、灶台边做饭的妈妈，所有信息都不能遗漏。第二步确定核心时态，题目要求介绍正在进行的活动，所以全程使用现在进行时（be+动词现在分词）来写作。第三步安排行文逻辑：先依次介绍客厅区域三位家人的活动，再用过渡句引出厨房的两位家人，分别说明她们的活动，最后补充全家人的节日感受，保证语句连贯、词数达标，契合除夕的温馨氛围。
【解析】
1. 承接题干给出的开头，首先点明图中小女孩珊珊的动作：Shanshan is cleaning the door.
2. 接着介绍站在凳子上擦窗户的爸爸，覆盖第二位人物的活动：Her father is cleaning the window.
3. 接下来介绍左下角正在浇花的爷爷，完成客厅第三位人物的动作描述：Her grandpa is watering the flowers.
4. 用过渡问句自然引出剩余的两位家人，衔接右侧厨房场景：Where are Shanshan's grandma and mother? 随后回答说明她们的位置：They're in the kitchen.
5. 分别介绍厨房两人的活动，覆盖全部剩余信息：Her grandma is making jiaozi, and her mother is cooking nice food.
6. 最后收尾补充整体感受，升华节日氛围：They're very busy but happy! 让短文完整流畅。
【答案】
Shanshan is cleaning the door. Her father is cleaning the window. Her grandpa is watering the flowers. Where are Shanshan's grandma and mother? They're in the kitchen. Her grandma is making jiaozi, and her mother is cooking nice food. They're very busy but happy!
【知识点】
现在进行时，情景写作，节日表达
【点评】
本篇短文完整覆盖了图片所有人物的活动信息，正确使用现在进行时描述正在发生的动作，行文逻辑清晰，从客厅场景过渡到厨房场景自然流畅，最后点出全家忙碌又愉悦的除夕氛围，完全符合题目的各项要求，语句通顺，词数符合规定。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先要先仔细观察图片，梳理出图中所有人物和对应的活动：一共5位家庭成员，分别是擦门的珊珊、擦窗户的爸爸、浇花的爷爷、包饺子的奶奶、灶台边做饭的妈妈，所有信息都不能遗漏。第二步确定核心时态，题目要求介绍正在进行的活动，所以全程使用现在进行时（be+动词现在分词）来写作。第三步安排行文逻辑：先依次介绍客厅区域三位家人的活动，再用过渡句引出厨房的两位家人，分别说明她们的活动，最后补充全家人的节日感受，保证语句连贯、词数达标，契合除夕的温馨氛围。
【解析】
1. 承接题干给出的开头，首先点明图中小女孩珊珊的动作：Shanshan is cleaning the door.
2. 接着介绍站在凳子上擦窗户的爸爸，覆盖第二位人物的活动：Her father is cleaning the window.
3. 接下来介绍左下角正在浇花的爷爷，完成客厅第三位人物的动作描述：Her grandpa is watering the flowers.
4. 用过渡问句自然引出剩余的两位家人，衔接右侧厨房场景：Where are Shanshan's grandma and mother? 随后回答说明她们的位置：They're in the kitchen.
5. 分别介绍厨房两人的活动，覆盖全部剩余信息：Her grandma is making jiaozi, and her mother is cooking nice food.
6. 最后收尾补充整体感受，升华节日氛围：They're very busy but happy! 让短文完整流畅。
【答案】
Shanshan is cleaning the door. Her father is cleaning the window. Her grandpa is watering the flowers. Where are Shanshan's grandma and mother? They're in the kitchen. Her grandma is making jiaozi, and her mother is cooking nice food. They're very busy but happy!
【知识点】
现在进行时，情景写作，节日表达
【点评】
本篇短文完整覆盖了图片所有人物的活动信息，正确使用现在进行时描述正在发生的动作，行文逻辑清晰，从客厅场景过渡到厨房场景自然流畅，最后点出全家忙碌又愉悦的除夕氛围，完全符合题目的各项要求，语句通顺，词数符合规定。
【难度系数】
0.7
