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《Teen’s Talk Magazine》向中学生征集有关“环保”话题的投稿。假如你是李华，请以“Protecting the forests”为题，从森林的重要性、人类活动对它的影响以及它面临的问题等方面撰写一篇文章，呼吁人们保护森林。
注意:1. 短文必须包含以上内容,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
2. 90词左右(首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
【写作指导】
本文为半命题应用文,需围绕“保护森林”主题展开。写作时需注意:① 人称:第三人称;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 首先介绍森林的重要性,以及它现在面临的严峻问题,接着给出解决方案,最后呼吁人们行动起来,保护森林。
【写作提纲】
【小试身手】
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance.
《Teen’s Talk Magazine》向中学生征集有关“环保”话题的投稿。假如你是李华，请以“Protecting the forests”为题，从森林的重要性、人类活动对它的影响以及它面临的问题等方面撰写一篇文章，呼吁人们保护森林。
注意:1. 短文必须包含以上内容,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
2. 90词左右(首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
【写作指导】
本文为半命题应用文,需围绕“保护森林”主题展开。写作时需注意:① 人称:第三人称;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 首先介绍森林的重要性,以及它现在面临的严峻问题,接着给出解决方案,最后呼吁人们行动起来,保护森林。
【写作提纲】
【小试身手】
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance.
They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming and logging very fast. This breaks the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die.
To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper.
Telling more people about protecting forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
答案
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance. They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming and logging very fast. This breaks the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Telling more people about protecting forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
Forests are of great importance. They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming and logging very fast. This breaks the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Telling more people about protecting forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
解析
【分析】
写作时需紧扣“Protecting the forests”主题，按照给定的提纲（重要性、问题、措施、呼吁）展开，首句已给出，需先承接首句说明森林的重要性，结合表格信息补充细节；接着转折说明森林面临的危机，明确砍树的原因及危害；然后提出具体保护措施；最后发出行动呼吁，确保内容完整、连贯，符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接首句“Forests are of great importance.”，阐述森林的重要性：作为动植物的家园，提供新鲜空气，还能防止水土流失、调节气候；
2. 转折过渡，说明森林面临的问题：人们为农耕、伐木大量砍树，破坏动植物家园，导致物种死亡；
3. 提出保护措施：多种树、少用纸、宣传保护森林；
4. 结尾呼吁行动，加入保护活动，做出改变，确保行文连贯，符合90词左右的要求。
【答案】
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance. They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming and logging very fast. This breaks the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Telling more people about protecting forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、环境保护话题、语句衔接
【点评】
本文结构清晰，紧扣主题，内容完整覆盖要求的重要性、问题、措施、呼吁，语言简洁流畅，符合中学生写作规范，能有效传递保护森林的理念。
【难度系数】
0.5
写作时需紧扣“Protecting the forests”主题，按照给定的提纲（重要性、问题、措施、呼吁）展开，首句已给出，需先承接首句说明森林的重要性，结合表格信息补充细节；接着转折说明森林面临的危机，明确砍树的原因及危害；然后提出具体保护措施；最后发出行动呼吁，确保内容完整、连贯，符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接首句“Forests are of great importance.”，阐述森林的重要性：作为动植物的家园，提供新鲜空气，还能防止水土流失、调节气候；
2. 转折过渡，说明森林面临的问题：人们为农耕、伐木大量砍树，破坏动植物家园，导致物种死亡；
3. 提出保护措施：多种树、少用纸、宣传保护森林；
4. 结尾呼吁行动，加入保护活动，做出改变，确保行文连贯，符合90词左右的要求。
【答案】
Protecting the forests
Forests are of great importance. They are home to countless animals and plants, and provide us with fresh air. Moreover, forests help prevent soil erosion and regulate the climate.
However, forests are facing serious problems. People are cutting down trees for farming and logging very fast. This breaks the homes of animals and makes many kinds of plants and animals die. To save forests, we can plant more trees and use less paper. Telling more people about protecting forests is also very important.
Let's take action now. Join forest protection campaigns and make a difference.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、环境保护话题、语句衔接
【点评】
本文结构清晰，紧扣主题，内容完整覆盖要求的重要性、问题、措施、呼吁，语言简洁流畅，符合中学生写作规范，能有效传递保护森林的理念。
【难度系数】
0.5
