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假设你是七年级的学生李华,新学期开始了,你对新学期充满美好的憧憬,你有很多计划和打算。请写一篇80词左右的短文,描述你新学期的打算。
参考词汇: make a plan for; study hard; improve; learn from mistakes; achieve good results
[思路点拨]
1. 文体:说明文。
2. 时态:以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
3. 人称:以第一人称为主。
4. 要点提示:先制订目标,再根据目标制订计划。
[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]

One possible version:
Hello, my name is Li Hua. I am a seventh-grade student. The new semester has started, and I have made a plan for it. Firstly, I will study hard and try my best to improve my studies. I will also learn from my mistakes and correct them. Secondly, I will take part in more activities to broaden my horizons. Lastly, I hope to achieve good results in all kinds of activities. With hard work, I believe I can make this term a successful one.

【分析】
本题要求以七年级学生李华的身份，写一篇关于新学期计划的短文。解题思路：1. 开头介绍身份，点明新学期已制订计划；2. 分两部分阐述：一是学习相关的目标与计划（努力学习、提高学业、从错误中学习并改正），二是活动相关的计划（参加更多活动拓宽视野）；3. 结尾表达信念，呼应主题，确保字数在80词左右，使用第一人称，时态以一般现在和一般将来时为主，紧扣参考词汇。
【解析】
1. 开头：介绍身份（I am a seventh-grade student），说明新学期制订了计划（I have made a plan for it）；
2. 学习部分：用一般将来时写计划，如study hard, improve my studies, learn from my mistakes and correct them；
3. 活动部分：写take part in more activities to broaden my horizons；
4. 结尾：表达信念（I believe I can make this term a successful one），确保结构清晰，要点齐全，符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, my name is Li Hua. I am a seventh-grade student. The new semester has started, and I have made a plan for it. Firstly, I will study hard and try my best to improve my studies. I will also learn from my mistakes and correct them. Secondly, I will take part in more activities to broaden my horizons. Lastly, I hope to achieve good results in all kinds of activities. With hard work, I believe I can make this term a successful one.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；新学期计划类短文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，涵盖所有要点，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合七年级学生的写作水平，正确运用了参考词汇，时态和人称使用准确，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5