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3. I like to be your friend. And you?
实战演练
校报英文版正在为其栏目“你所熟悉的身边人”征稿。请根据下表提供的信息，以“My friend”为题撰写一篇稿件，介绍你的好朋友 Andy。
要求:1. 内容全面,包含所有要点;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确,意思连贯完整;
3. 词数 60 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【写作指导】
本文要写一篇自我介绍,按照如下思路写作即可:① 人称:用第一人称;② 时态:用一般现在时;③ 写作顺序:从上到下逐条书写;④ 写作技巧:注意长短句的搭配使用。
【写作提纲】
【小试身手】
My friend
I have a good friend.
实战演练
校报英文版正在为其栏目“你所熟悉的身边人”征稿。请根据下表提供的信息，以“My friend”为题撰写一篇稿件，介绍你的好朋友 Andy。
要求:1. 内容全面,包含所有要点;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确,意思连贯完整;
3. 词数 60 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【写作指导】
本文要写一篇自我介绍,按照如下思路写作即可:① 人称:用第一人称;② 时态:用一般现在时;③ 写作顺序:从上到下逐条书写;④ 写作技巧:注意长短句的搭配使用。
【写作提纲】
【小试身手】
My friend
I have a good friend.
His name is Andy. He is 14 years old now. He was born in America and he lives in China now. He is in Class 9, Grade 7.
He is tall and strong. He doesn't wear glasses.
He is good at singing and swimming.
He likes listening to music and reading books.
He is in his school reading club.
Do you want to make a friend with him?
答案
Period 7 Assessment & Further study(单元主题写作)
One possible version:
My friend
I have a good friend. His name is Andy. He is 14 years old now. He was born in America and he lives in China now. He is in Class 9, Grade 7. He is tall and strong. He doesn't wear glasses.
He is good at singing and swimming. He likes listening to music and reading books. He is in his school reading club.
Do you want to make a friend with him?
One possible version:
My friend
I have a good friend. His name is Andy. He is 14 years old now. He was born in America and he lives in China now. He is in Class 9, Grade 7. He is tall and strong. He doesn't wear glasses.
He is good at singing and swimming. He likes listening to music and reading books. He is in his school reading club.
Do you want to make a friend with him?
解析
【分析】本题为英语单元主题写作题，要求以“My friend”为题介绍好友Andy，需用第一人称、一般现在时写作，内容涵盖朋友的基本信息、外貌、爱好等要点，词数约60，开头已给出。解题思路：先承接开头补充朋友的身份类基本信息，再描述外貌特征，接着介绍爱好与参与的社团，最后以邀请交友收尾，确保语句通顺、语法正确、要点齐全。
【解析】1. 承接开头“I have a good friend.”，依次介绍朋友基本信息：His name is Andy. He is 14 years old now. He was born in America and he lives in China now. He is in Class 9, Grade 7. 2. 描述外貌：He is tall and strong. He doesn't wear glasses. 3. 介绍爱好与社团：He is good at singing and swimming. He likes listening to music and reading books. He is in his school reading club. 4. 结尾邀请交友：Do you want to make a friend with him? 确保内容全面、语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】My friend
I have a good friend. His name is Andy. He is 14 years old now. He was born in America and he lives in China now. He is in Class 9, Grade 7. He is tall and strong. He doesn't wear glasses.
He is good at singing and swimming. He likes listening to music and reading books. He is in his school reading club.
Do you want to make a friend with him?
【知识点】英语单元写作、一般现在时运用、信息整合表达
【点评】本题结合校报征稿情境，考查学生的英语综合写作能力，要求整合给定信息、运用正确时态与语句结构完成写作，符合初中英语写作的训练目标，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 承接开头“I have a good friend.”，依次介绍朋友基本信息：His name is Andy. He is 14 years old now. He was born in America and he lives in China now. He is in Class 9, Grade 7. 2. 描述外貌：He is tall and strong. He doesn't wear glasses. 3. 介绍爱好与社团：He is good at singing and swimming. He likes listening to music and reading books. He is in his school reading club. 4. 结尾邀请交友：Do you want to make a friend with him? 确保内容全面、语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】My friend
I have a good friend. His name is Andy. He is 14 years old now. He was born in America and he lives in China now. He is in Class 9, Grade 7. He is tall and strong. He doesn't wear glasses.
He is good at singing and swimming. He likes listening to music and reading books. He is in his school reading club.
Do you want to make a friend with him?
【知识点】英语单元写作、一般现在时运用、信息整合表达
【点评】本题结合校报征稿情境，考查学生的英语综合写作能力，要求整合给定信息、运用正确时态与语句结构完成写作，符合初中英语写作的训练目标，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.6
