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近来,世界多地自然灾害频发,引发了人们对保护地球的思考。请以“The Earth Is Our Home”为题,
审时态:一般现在时 审人称:第一人称、第三人称
写一篇英语短文,内容包括地球目前的现状、造成这种现状的原因以及我们应该采取的措施。要点如下表:
注意事项:1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
The Earth Is Our Home
The Earth is our home and we only have one Earth.
写作支架
0
智慧
智囊
a drop in the ocean 意为“沧海一粟”或“九牛一毛”,形容数量极少,微不足道。
plenty of fish in the sea 意为“天涯何处无芳草”,比喻在爱情或机会中,总会有其他选择。
审时态:一般现在时 审人称:第一人称、第三人称
写一篇英语短文,内容包括地球目前的现状、造成这种现状的原因以及我们应该采取的措施。要点如下表:
注意事项:1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
The Earth Is Our Home
The Earth is our home and we only have one Earth.
写作支架
0
智慧
智囊
a drop in the ocean 意为“沧海一粟”或“九牛一毛”,形容数量极少,微不足道。
plenty of fish in the sea 意为“天涯何处无芳草”,比喻在爱情或机会中,总会有其他选择。
答案
The Earth Is Our Home
The Earth is our home and we only have one Earth.
But our home is in danger now. People cut down too many trees to make more farmland and buildings. This leads to less and less living space for wild animals. People even kill them for their fur or meat. More and more natural disasters happen around the world every year, so many people and animals lose their lives in the disasters.
It's time for us to save the Earth now.
First, the government should make strict laws to stop these people. Second, we shouldn't hunt or kill wild animals any more. Last, we should live a green life to protect our environment, such as saving water and choosing public transport more often.
The Earth is our home and we only have one Earth.
But our home is in danger now. People cut down too many trees to make more farmland and buildings. This leads to less and less living space for wild animals. People even kill them for their fur or meat. More and more natural disasters happen around the world every year, so many people and animals lose their lives in the disasters.
It's time for us to save the Earth now.
First, the government should make strict laws to stop these people. Second, we shouldn't hunt or kill wild animals any more. Last, we should live a green life to protect our environment, such as saving water and choosing public transport more often.
解析
本题是译林版八年级上册环保主题的命题写作题，写作要求如下：1. 时态以一般现在时为主，使用第一、第三人称叙事；2. 内容必须覆盖三个核心部分：地球当前的现状（自然灾害增多、野生动物濒危）、造成该现状的人为原因（乱砍滥伐树木、猎杀野生动物）、可行的地球保护措施；3. 词数控制在100左右，行文连贯，使用题干给出的高分句式提升作文质量，不得出现真实个人信息。我们可以按照给出的写作支架搭建行文结构：承接开头先点明地球正处于危险中，接着阐述人类的破坏行为对应的后果，最后分点提出合理的环保举措，所有表达均选用八年级已学词汇，符合学段难度要求。
