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请根据图片提示，以“过去和现在”为主题，写一篇英语小短文对比赵太太(Mrs Zhao)过去和现在在在生活方式上的变化。不少于50词。
请根据图片提示，以“过去和现在”为主题，写一篇英语小短文对比赵太太(Mrs Zhao)过去和现在在在生活方式上的变化。不少于50词。
There are a lot of changes in Mrs Zhao's life.
Ten years ago, Mrs Zhao went to the shops and bought new clothes for her family. At that time, she paid in cash.
But now she often shops online at home and pays on her smartphone.
In the past, she used the telephone at home or in the office to call people. Now she uses her mobile phone to call people anywhere.
I think these changes are great!
答案
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参考范文：
There are a lot of changes in Mrs Zhao's life.
Ten years ago, Mrs Zhao went to the shops and bought new clothes for her family. At that time, she paid in cash. But now she often shops online at home and pays on her smartphone. In the past, she used the telephone at home or in the office to call people. Now she uses her mobile phone to call people anywhere.
I think these changes are great!
参考范文：
There are a lot of changes in Mrs Zhao's life.
Ten years ago, Mrs Zhao went to the shops and bought new clothes for her family. At that time, she paid in cash. But now she often shops online at home and pays on her smartphone. In the past, she used the telephone at home or in the office to call people. Now she uses her mobile phone to call people anywhere.
I think these changes are great!
解析
【分析】首先观察四幅图片，明确每幅图对应的场景：第一幅是过去赵太太去实体店购物，第二幅是现在在家网购，第三幅是过去用固定电话通话，第四幅是现在用手机随时随地通话。解题时需围绕“过去和现在”的主题，分别用一般过去时描述过去的生活方式，用一般现在时描述现在的变化，最后可加入简单的评价，确保短文不少于50词，贴合图片提示完成写作。
【解析】根据图片信息，确定写作主题为赵太太生活方式的过去与现在对比。先写过去的情况：去实体店买衣服，用固定电话联系；再写现在的变化：在家网购，用手机随时通话；最后表达对这些变化的看法。注意时态正确，语句通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】There are a lot of changes in Mrs Zhao's life.
Ten years ago, Mrs Zhao went to the shops and bought new clothes for her family. At that time, she paid in cash. But now she often shops online at home and pays on her smartphone. In the past, she used the telephone at home or in the office to call people. Now she uses her mobile phone to call people anywhere.
I think these changes are great!
【知识点】英语写作、时态运用
【点评】该范文结合图片内容，清晰对比了赵太太购物和通讯方式的变化，时态使用准确，语句流畅，符合题目要求，是一篇合格的英语小短文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】根据图片信息，确定写作主题为赵太太生活方式的过去与现在对比。先写过去的情况：去实体店买衣服，用固定电话联系；再写现在的变化：在家网购，用手机随时通话；最后表达对这些变化的看法。注意时态正确，语句通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】There are a lot of changes in Mrs Zhao's life.
Ten years ago, Mrs Zhao went to the shops and bought new clothes for her family. At that time, she paid in cash. But now she often shops online at home and pays on her smartphone. In the past, she used the telephone at home or in the office to call people. Now she uses her mobile phone to call people anywhere.
I think these changes are great!
【知识点】英语写作、时态运用
【点评】该范文结合图片内容，清晰对比了赵太太购物和通讯方式的变化，时态使用准确，语句流畅，符合题目要求，是一篇合格的英语小短文。
【难度系数】0.5
