51.树立远大理想,营造榜样氛围。近来学校开展征文活动。请以“When Dreams Meet Heroes”为题撰写一篇英文文章投稿。

注意:(1)词数:80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;(2)内容包含表格中的所有要求;(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
When Dreams Meet Heroes
Dreams are often lit up by the light of heroes.
注意:(1)词数:80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;(2)内容包含表格中的所有要求;(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
When Dreams Meet Heroes
Dreams are often lit up by the light of heroes.
答案
One possible version:
When Dreams Meet Heroes
Dreams are often lit up by the light of heroes.My dream is to become a scientist like Qian Xuesen.
Qian Xuesen is my role model.He gave up a good life abroad and returned to China.He worked tirelessly to make great contributions to our country's aerospace science and technology.His love for his country and hard work inspired me.
To realize my dream, I will not only study hard to enrich myself, but also never give up when facing difficulties.
I hope I can make my dream come true one day.
When Dreams Meet Heroes
Dreams are often lit up by the light of heroes.My dream is to become a scientist like Qian Xuesen.
Qian Xuesen is my role model.He gave up a good life abroad and returned to China.He worked tirelessly to make great contributions to our country's aerospace science and technology.His love for his country and hard work inspired me.
To realize my dream, I will not only study hard to enrich myself, but also never give up when facing difficulties.
I hope I can make my dream come true one day.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题征文写作,主题是“When Dreams Meet Heroes”,需围绕表格要求的三个维度展开:首先明确自己的梦想职业(What);接着说明激励自己的榜样(如重要人物或偶像)及崇拜的原因(Why);最后阐述实现梦想的方法(How)。写作时要承接给定开头,控制词数在80左右,不得透露个人信息,确保内容完整、逻辑清晰。
【解析】写作时,先承接开头句,点明梦想职业是成为像钱学森那样的科学家;再介绍钱学森作为榜样的事迹:放弃国外优渥生活回国,为国家航天科技事业奉献,他的爱国情怀和不懈努力是激励自己的原因;最后说明实现梦想的方法:努力学习充实自己,遇到困难不放弃。
【答案】When Dreams Meet Heroes
Dreams are often lit up by the light of heroes.My dream is to become a scientist like Qian Xuesen.
Qian Xuesen is my role model.He gave up a good life abroad and returned to China.He worked tirelessly to make great contributions to our country's aerospace science and technology.His love for his country and hard work inspired me.
To realize my dream, I will not only study hard to enrich myself, but also never give up when facing difficulties.
I hope I can make my dream come true one day.
【知识点】英语话题作文、英语应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题,完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点,结构清晰,语言简洁流畅,符合词数要求,是一篇符合征文要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时,先承接开头句,点明梦想职业是成为像钱学森那样的科学家;再介绍钱学森作为榜样的事迹:放弃国外优渥生活回国,为国家航天科技事业奉献,他的爱国情怀和不懈努力是激励自己的原因;最后说明实现梦想的方法:努力学习充实自己,遇到困难不放弃。
【答案】When Dreams Meet Heroes
Dreams are often lit up by the light of heroes.My dream is to become a scientist like Qian Xuesen.
Qian Xuesen is my role model.He gave up a good life abroad and returned to China.He worked tirelessly to make great contributions to our country's aerospace science and technology.His love for his country and hard work inspired me.
To realize my dream, I will not only study hard to enrich myself, but also never give up when facing difficulties.
I hope I can make my dream come true one day.
【知识点】英语话题作文、英语应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题,完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点,结构清晰,语言简洁流畅,符合词数要求,是一篇符合征文要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5
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