九、书面表达
假设你是顾华,英国学生苏珊给你写了一封邮件介绍自己,同时也想了解你的生活。请认真阅读苏珊的邮件,并写一封邮件回复她。词数不少于70,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Susan,
Thank you for your email. I am happy to tell you about my life.
My dream is to be
What is your dream? What do you like best about your school life?
Please write soon.
Best wishes,
Gu Hua
假设你是顾华,英国学生苏珊给你写了一封邮件介绍自己,同时也想了解你的生活。请认真阅读苏珊的邮件,并写一封邮件回复她。词数不少于70,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Susan,
Thank you for your email. I am happy to tell you about my life.
I am in Grade 7 too. My new school is beautiful. I love it. My favourite subject is Geography. For me, it is cool. I have a good friend at school. He is smart, and he likes sport.
We often play basketball together after school. I like playing the piano best, and I usually spend two hours practising it at the weekend. It makes me feel happy.
My dream is to be
a pianist
in the future.What is your dream? What do you like best about your school life?
Please write soon.
Best wishes,
Gu Hua
答案
Sample writing:
Dear Susan,
Thank you for your email. I am happy to tell you about my life.
I am in Grade 7 too. My new school is beautiful. I love it. My favourite subject is Geography. For me, it is cool. I have a good friend at school. He is smart, and he likes sport.
We often play basketball together after school. I like playing the piano best, and I usually spend two hours practising it at the weekend. It makes me feel happy. My dream is to be a pianist in the future.
What is your dream? What do you like best about your school life?
Please write soon.
Best wishes,
Gu Hua
Dear Susan,
Thank you for your email. I am happy to tell you about my life.
I am in Grade 7 too. My new school is beautiful. I love it. My favourite subject is Geography. For me, it is cool. I have a good friend at school. He is smart, and he likes sport.
We often play basketball together after school. I like playing the piano best, and I usually spend two hours practising it at the weekend. It makes me feel happy. My dream is to be a pianist in the future.
What is your dream? What do you like best about your school life?
Please write soon.
Best wishes,
Gu Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语邮件回复写作题,需以顾华的身份回复苏珊的邮件。解题思路:1. 先呼应苏珊邮件中提到的信息(如读七年级),说明自身年级情况;2. 结合苏珊的问题(爱好、梦想、学校生活喜好),补充自身的学校情况、最喜欢的科目、爱好(如运动、乐器)、朋友相关内容;3. 最后写出自己的梦想,确保内容连贯,符合七年级英语的表达水平,满足词数要求。
【解析】
根据题目要求,以顾华的身份回复苏珊,需紧扣对方邮件内容,补充合理的自身生活信息:首先说明自己也读七年级,介绍新学校的情况;接着说明自己最喜欢的科目是地理,认为它很有趣;然后介绍自己的爱好,比如和朋友放学后打篮球,自己周末花两小时练习钢琴,这让自己很开心;最后写出自己的梦想是成为一名钢琴家,同时回应苏珊的问题,确保内容连贯,符合七年级英语的表达规范,词数达标。
【答案】
Dear Susan,
Thank you for your email. I am happy to tell you about my life.
I am in Grade 7 too. My new school is beautiful. I love it. My favourite subject is Geography. For me, it is cool. I have a good friend at school. He is smart, and he likes sport.
We often play basketball together after school. I like playing the piano best, and I usually spend two hours practising it at the weekend. It makes me feel happy. My dream is to be a pianist in the future.
What is your dream? What do you like best about your school life?
Please write soon.
Best wishes,
Gu Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作;七年级英语应用
【点评】
本题考查英语邮件的回复写作,要求学生能结合对方邮件内容,合理补充自身生活信息,回应对方的问题,符合七年级学生的英语表达能力,注重内容的连贯性与逻辑性,是基础的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语邮件回复写作题,需以顾华的身份回复苏珊的邮件。解题思路:1. 先呼应苏珊邮件中提到的信息(如读七年级),说明自身年级情况;2. 结合苏珊的问题(爱好、梦想、学校生活喜好),补充自身的学校情况、最喜欢的科目、爱好(如运动、乐器)、朋友相关内容;3. 最后写出自己的梦想,确保内容连贯,符合七年级英语的表达水平,满足词数要求。
【解析】
根据题目要求,以顾华的身份回复苏珊,需紧扣对方邮件内容,补充合理的自身生活信息:首先说明自己也读七年级,介绍新学校的情况;接着说明自己最喜欢的科目是地理,认为它很有趣;然后介绍自己的爱好,比如和朋友放学后打篮球,自己周末花两小时练习钢琴,这让自己很开心;最后写出自己的梦想是成为一名钢琴家,同时回应苏珊的问题,确保内容连贯,符合七年级英语的表达规范,词数达标。
【答案】
Dear Susan,
Thank you for your email. I am happy to tell you about my life.
I am in Grade 7 too. My new school is beautiful. I love it. My favourite subject is Geography. For me, it is cool. I have a good friend at school. He is smart, and he likes sport.
We often play basketball together after school. I like playing the piano best, and I usually spend two hours practising it at the weekend. It makes me feel happy. My dream is to be a pianist in the future.
What is your dream? What do you like best about your school life?
Please write soon.
Best wishes,
Gu Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作;七年级英语应用
【点评】
本题考查英语邮件的回复写作,要求学生能结合对方邮件内容,合理补充自身生活信息,回应对方的问题,符合七年级学生的英语表达能力,注重内容的连贯性与逻辑性,是基础的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
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