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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D24
寒假将至,假如你是李华,你的加拿大朋友John准备来北京过寒假。请你用英文写一篇短文向他简要介绍一下北京。
要点:(1)北京的天气怎么样？(2)有什么名胜古迹？适合参加哪些活动？(3)春节期间人们做什么？
要求:(1)内容包括所有要点,可适当发挥;(2)语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯,80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Dear John,
I'm very glad to tell you something about Beijing.
Yours,
Li Hua
寒假将至,假如你是李华,你的加拿大朋友John准备来北京过寒假。请你用英文写一篇短文向他简要介绍一下北京。
要点:(1)北京的天气怎么样？(2)有什么名胜古迹？适合参加哪些活动？(3)春节期间人们做什么？
要求:(1)内容包括所有要点,可适当发挥;(2)语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯,80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Dear John,
I'm very glad to tell you something about Beijing.
Beijing is the capital city of China. It has a long history and it is very beautiful.
You can see Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum and the Great Wall.
The winter in Beijing is cold and snowy.
You can go skating or make a snowman.
When the Spring Festival comes, people in Beijing usually eat dumplings and get together with their family and friends.
Welcome to Beijing!
I hope you can have fun in Beijing.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
Dear John,
I'm very glad to tell you something about Beijing.
Beijing is the capital city of China. It has a long history and it is very beautiful. You can see Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. The winter in Beijing is cold and snowy. You can go skating or make a snowman. When the Spring Festival comes, people in Beijing usually eat dumplings and get together with their family and friends.
Welcome to Beijing! I hope you can have fun in Beijing.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear John,
I'm very glad to tell you something about Beijing.
Beijing is the capital city of China. It is a city with a long history, amazing views and delicious food. There are many places of interest, such as Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. They are famous all around the world. The winter in Beijing is cold and snowy. You can go skating or make a snowman with friends. When the Spring Festival comes, people in Beijing usually eat dumplings and get together with their family and friends.
Welcome to Beijing! I'm sure you will love this beautiful city.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 基础版范文
Dear John,
I'm very glad to tell you something about Beijing.
Beijing is the capital city of China. It has a long history and it is very beautiful. You can see Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. The winter in Beijing is cold and snowy. You can go skating or make a snowman. When the Spring Festival comes, people in Beijing usually eat dumplings and get together with their family and friends.
Welcome to Beijing! I hope you can have fun in Beijing.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear John,
I'm very glad to tell you something about Beijing.
Beijing is the capital city of China. It is a city with a long history, amazing views and delicious food. There are many places of interest, such as Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. They are famous all around the world. The winter in Beijing is cold and snowy. You can go skating or make a snowman with friends. When the Spring Festival comes, people in Beijing usually eat dumplings and get together with their family and friends.
Welcome to Beijing! I'm sure you will love this beautiful city.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给加拿大朋友John写一封介绍北京的英文书信，需覆盖三个核心要点：北京冬季的天气、名胜古迹及对应活动、春节期间的习俗，同时要符合书信格式（开头结尾已给出）、语言通顺、80词左右的要求。解题思路为：先承接开头介绍北京的基本概况，再依次回应三个要点，最后发出欢迎与祝愿，确保内容完整、语言自然，符合题目所有要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，介绍北京的基本属性：作为中国首都，拥有悠久历史；
2. 说明北京冬季天气特点为寒冷多雪，对应可参与的活动如滑冰、堆雪人；
3. 列举北京著名的名胜古迹：天安门广场、故宫、长城；
4. 介绍春节期间北京的习俗：吃饺子、与家人朋友团聚；
5. 结尾表达对John的欢迎与祝愿，控制总词数在要求范围内，保证语言准确连贯。
【答案】
Dear John,
I'm very glad to tell you something about Beijing.
Beijing is the capital city of China. It has a long history and it is very beautiful. You can see Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. The winter in Beijing is cold and snowy. You can go skating or make a snowman. When the Spring Festival comes, people in Beijing usually eat dumplings and get together with their family and friends.
Welcome to Beijing! I hope you can have fun in Beijing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题介绍类写作、节日习俗表达
【点评】
本题为英语书信写作专项练习，考查学生介绍类话题的语言组织能力，要求覆盖指定要点、符合书信格式与字数要求，同时融入中国春节文化，兼具实用性与文化传播性，适合巩固英语应用文写作技能。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以李华的身份给加拿大朋友John写一封介绍北京的英文书信，需覆盖三个核心要点：北京冬季的天气、名胜古迹及对应活动、春节期间的习俗，同时要符合书信格式（开头结尾已给出）、语言通顺、80词左右的要求。解题思路为：先承接开头介绍北京的基本概况，再依次回应三个要点，最后发出欢迎与祝愿，确保内容完整、语言自然，符合题目所有要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，介绍北京的基本属性：作为中国首都，拥有悠久历史；
2. 说明北京冬季天气特点为寒冷多雪，对应可参与的活动如滑冰、堆雪人；
3. 列举北京著名的名胜古迹：天安门广场、故宫、长城；
4. 介绍春节期间北京的习俗：吃饺子、与家人朋友团聚；
5. 结尾表达对John的欢迎与祝愿，控制总词数在要求范围内，保证语言准确连贯。
【答案】
Dear John,
I'm very glad to tell you something about Beijing.
Beijing is the capital city of China. It has a long history and it is very beautiful. You can see Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. The winter in Beijing is cold and snowy. You can go skating or make a snowman. When the Spring Festival comes, people in Beijing usually eat dumplings and get together with their family and friends.
Welcome to Beijing! I hope you can have fun in Beijing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题介绍类写作、节日习俗表达
【点评】
本题为英语书信写作专项练习，考查学生介绍类话题的语言组织能力，要求覆盖指定要点、符合书信格式与字数要求，同时融入中国春节文化，兼具实用性与文化传播性，适合巩固英语应用文写作技能。
【难度系数】
0.5
