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主题写作专项 --练写作 答案D24
主题词网
初中英语
七年级
上册
沪教牛津版
优选词汇
城市
介绍
·modern city
·great view
旅游指南
游览
活动
·busy street
·beautiful park
·long history
·clean river
·special food
·take photos
·visit museums
·try local food
·go shopping
·watch a show
·take a walk
·enjoy the view
·buy souvenirs
·explore the old town
感受
评价
·excited
·busy but fun
·delicious food
·happy to be here
·learn a lot
·wonderful
·feel relaxed
·great experience
·can’t wait to come again
写作实例
用英语讲好中国故事是每个中学生义不容辞的责任和光荣使命。淅川是南水北调渠首所在地，它吸引着全国各地的游客。请你根据以下写作要点，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下自己的家乡淅川，推荐大家来淅川游玩。 审主题
写作要点:1.家乡的地理位置、气候特点以及著名景区等；
2.友好善良的家乡人等；
3.表达自己对家乡的情感并欢迎大家来家乡观光旅游。 审要点
审人称: 以第三人称为主
审时态: 以一般现在时为主
写作要求:1.包含所给要点,可适当发挥;2.条理清晰,语句通顺,句法正确,书写规范;3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;4.不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 审词数
参考词汇:香严寺 Xiangyan Temple;坐禅谷 Meditation Valley;丹江大观苑 Danjiang Grand View Garden
Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about my hometown—Xichuan.
写作支架
开头
打招呼，并引出自己的家乡
Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about my hometown—Xichuan.
中间
具体介绍自己的家乡
Xichuan is a beautiful county .
The climate here is . It is .
There are also many historic sites, such as .（高分句式1）
They are very beautiful and the people here are .
The local food is . You can also .
结尾
表达对家乡的情感，并欢迎大家来旅游
If you come to Xichuan, I am sure you will .（高分句式2）
I love my hometown and welcome to .
8
智慧背囊
Visiting China helps foreigners understand one of the world’s oldest civilizations, and it brings them closer to Chinese people and traditions. 访问中国有助于外国人了解世界上最古老的文明之一，还能让他们更贴近中国人以及中国的传统。
教材原文
P92 There are also many historic sites, such as the Yuewang Temple.
P92 If you come to Hangzhou, I am sure you will love this beautiful city at first sight.
P92 Welcome to my hometown—Hangzhou.
优秀范文
Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about my hometown—Xichuan.
Xichuan is a beautiful county in the south of② Henan. The climate here is very nice①. It is not too hot in summer nor too cold in winter. There are also many historic sites②, such as② Xiangyan Temple, Meditation Valley and Danjiang Grand View Garden. They are very beautiful and the people here are very friendly. The local food is also delicious. You can also buy some for your friends. If you come to Xichuan, I am sure you will love this beautiful county at first sight.③
I love my hometown and welcome to my hometown—Xichuan.
亮点评析
①介绍当地气候时语言简洁精炼，条理清晰。
②亮点词汇 in the south of、historic sites、such as 的使用让文章的得分档次提升。
③I am sure...主从复合句的使用为文章增色不少。
主题词网
初中英语
七年级
上册
沪教牛津版
优选词汇
城市
介绍
·modern city
·great view
旅游指南
游览
活动
·busy street
·beautiful park
·long history
·clean river
·special food
·take photos
·visit museums
·try local food
·go shopping
·watch a show
·take a walk
·enjoy the view
·buy souvenirs
·explore the old town
感受
评价
·excited
·busy but fun
·delicious food
·happy to be here
·learn a lot
·wonderful
·feel relaxed
·great experience
·can’t wait to come again
写作实例
用英语讲好中国故事是每个中学生义不容辞的责任和光荣使命。淅川是南水北调渠首所在地，它吸引着全国各地的游客。请你根据以下写作要点，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下自己的家乡淅川，推荐大家来淅川游玩。 审主题
写作要点:1.家乡的地理位置、气候特点以及著名景区等；
2.友好善良的家乡人等；
3.表达自己对家乡的情感并欢迎大家来家乡观光旅游。 审要点
审人称: 以第三人称为主
审时态: 以一般现在时为主
写作要求:1.包含所给要点,可适当发挥;2.条理清晰,语句通顺,句法正确,书写规范;3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;4.不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 审词数
参考词汇:香严寺 Xiangyan Temple;坐禅谷 Meditation Valley;丹江大观苑 Danjiang Grand View Garden
Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about my hometown—Xichuan.
写作支架
开头
打招呼，并引出自己的家乡
Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about my hometown—Xichuan.
中间
具体介绍自己的家乡
Xichuan is a beautiful county .
The climate here is . It is .
There are also many historic sites, such as .（高分句式1）
They are very beautiful and the people here are .
The local food is . You can also .
结尾
表达对家乡的情感，并欢迎大家来旅游
If you come to Xichuan, I am sure you will .（高分句式2）
I love my hometown and welcome to .
8
智慧背囊
Visiting China helps foreigners understand one of the world’s oldest civilizations, and it brings them closer to Chinese people and traditions. 访问中国有助于外国人了解世界上最古老的文明之一，还能让他们更贴近中国人以及中国的传统。
教材原文
P92 There are also many historic sites, such as the Yuewang Temple.
P92 If you come to Hangzhou, I am sure you will love this beautiful city at first sight.
P92 Welcome to my hometown—Hangzhou.
优秀范文
Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about my hometown—Xichuan.
Xichuan is a beautiful county in the south of② Henan. The climate here is very nice①. It is not too hot in summer nor too cold in winter. There are also many historic sites②, such as② Xiangyan Temple, Meditation Valley and Danjiang Grand View Garden. They are very beautiful and the people here are very friendly. The local food is also delicious. You can also buy some for your friends. If you come to Xichuan, I am sure you will love this beautiful county at first sight.③
I love my hometown and welcome to my hometown—Xichuan.
亮点评析
①介绍当地气候时语言简洁精炼，条理清晰。
②亮点词汇 in the south of、historic sites、such as 的使用让文章的得分档次提升。
③I am sure...主从复合句的使用为文章增色不少。
答案
【解析】：这是一篇介绍家乡的主题写作题，符合七年级上册的写作要求：① 体裁为介绍类说明文，以第三人称为主，整体使用一般现在时；② 需要覆盖全部指定写作要点：介绍淅川的地理位置、气候特点、知名景区，描述当地友善的居民，抒发对家乡的喜爱并向读者发出游玩邀请；③ 可以灵活使用题干给出的优选词汇、参考景点名称，借助给出的高分句式丰富表达，保证语句通顺、词数不少于80，不出现真实姓名和校名。写作时使用in the south of、historic sites等亮点词汇，以及There are also...、I am sure...的高分主从复合句，能让文章条理更清晰、表达更出彩，提升得分档次。
【答案】：
写作支架填空答案：
1. in the south of Henan
2. very nice
3. not too hot in summer nor too cold in winter
4. Xiangyan Temple, Meditation Valley and Danjiang Grand View Garden
5. very friendly
6. also delicious
7. buy some for your friends
8. love this beautiful county at first sight
9. my hometown—Xichuan
完整参考范文：
Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about my hometown—Xichuan.
Xichuan is a beautiful county in the south of Henan. The climate here is very nice. It is not too hot in summer nor too cold in winter. There are also many historic sites, such as Xiangyan Temple, Meditation Valley and Danjiang Grand View Garden. They are very beautiful and the people here are very friendly. The local food is also delicious. You can also buy some for your friends. If you come to Xichuan, I am sure you will love this beautiful county at first sight.
I love my hometown and welcome to my hometown—Xichuan.
【答案】：
写作支架填空答案：
1. in the south of Henan
2. very nice
3. not too hot in summer nor too cold in winter
4. Xiangyan Temple, Meditation Valley and Danjiang Grand View Garden
5. very friendly
6. also delicious
7. buy some for your friends
8. love this beautiful county at first sight
9. my hometown—Xichuan
完整参考范文：
Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about my hometown—Xichuan.
Xichuan is a beautiful county in the south of Henan. The climate here is very nice. It is not too hot in summer nor too cold in winter. There are also many historic sites, such as Xiangyan Temple, Meditation Valley and Danjiang Grand View Garden. They are very beautiful and the people here are very friendly. The local food is also delicious. You can also buy some for your friends. If you come to Xichuan, I am sure you will love this beautiful county at first sight.
I love my hometown and welcome to my hometown—Xichuan.
解析
【分析】
本题是七年级英语介绍家乡的主题写作题，解题思路为：1. 明确写作要求：需覆盖家乡的地理位置、气候特点、知名景区、当地居民特点、特色食物，最后抒发对家乡的喜爱并发出游玩邀请；2. 遵循给定的写作支架结构，结合参考词汇和范文内容，对应每个空格填写合适内容；3. 使用题目给出的高分句式（There are...such as...、I am sure...），确保时态为一般现在时、人称以第三人称为主，语句通顺且符合词数要求。
【解析】
这是一篇介绍类说明文，按以下步骤完成写作：① 确定体裁、时态与人称：以第三人称为主，整体用一般现在时；② 对应写作支架空格填写内容：1. 介绍淅川地理位置填“in the south of Henan”；2. 描述气候特点填“very nice”；3. 补充气候细节填“not too hot in summer nor too cold in winter”；4. 列举景点（高分句式1）填“Xiangyan Temple, Meditation Valley and Danjiang Grand View Garden”；5. 描述当地人特点填“very friendly”；6. 说明当地食物填“also delicious”；7. 补充食物相关活动填“buy some for your friends”；8. 表达游玩感受（高分句式2）填“love this beautiful county at first sight”；9. 结尾欢迎填“my hometown—Xichuan”；③ 组合成完整短文，确保覆盖所有要点，使用亮点词汇提升表达效果。
【答案】
写作支架填空答案：
1. in the south of Henan
2. very nice
3. not too hot in summer nor too cold in winter
4. Xiangyan Temple, Meditation Valley and Danjiang Grand View Garden
5. very friendly
6. also delicious
7. buy some for your friends
8. love this beautiful county at first sight
9. my hometown—Xichuan
完整参考范文：
Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about my hometown—Xichuan.
Xichuan is a beautiful county in the south of Henan. The climate here is very nice. It is not too hot in summer nor too cold in winter. There are also many historic sites, such as Xiangyan Temple, Meditation Valley and Danjiang Grand View Garden. They are very beautiful and the people here are very friendly. The local food is also delicious. You can also buy some for your friends. If you come to Xichuan, I am sure you will love this beautiful county at first sight.
I love my hometown and welcome to my hometown—Xichuan.
【知识点】
初中英语写作、一般现在时运用、英语介绍类短文写作
【点评】
本题通过写作支架降低了七年级学生介绍家乡的写作难度，范文覆盖所有指定要点，使用了亮点词汇和高分句式，结构清晰，适合学生学习和模仿介绍类短文的写作方法。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题是七年级英语介绍家乡的主题写作题，解题思路为：1. 明确写作要求：需覆盖家乡的地理位置、气候特点、知名景区、当地居民特点、特色食物，最后抒发对家乡的喜爱并发出游玩邀请；2. 遵循给定的写作支架结构，结合参考词汇和范文内容，对应每个空格填写合适内容；3. 使用题目给出的高分句式（There are...such as...、I am sure...），确保时态为一般现在时、人称以第三人称为主，语句通顺且符合词数要求。
【解析】
这是一篇介绍类说明文，按以下步骤完成写作：① 确定体裁、时态与人称：以第三人称为主，整体用一般现在时；② 对应写作支架空格填写内容：1. 介绍淅川地理位置填“in the south of Henan”；2. 描述气候特点填“very nice”；3. 补充气候细节填“not too hot in summer nor too cold in winter”；4. 列举景点（高分句式1）填“Xiangyan Temple, Meditation Valley and Danjiang Grand View Garden”；5. 描述当地人特点填“very friendly”；6. 说明当地食物填“also delicious”；7. 补充食物相关活动填“buy some for your friends”；8. 表达游玩感受（高分句式2）填“love this beautiful county at first sight”；9. 结尾欢迎填“my hometown—Xichuan”；③ 组合成完整短文，确保覆盖所有要点，使用亮点词汇提升表达效果。
【答案】
写作支架填空答案：
1. in the south of Henan
2. very nice
3. not too hot in summer nor too cold in winter
4. Xiangyan Temple, Meditation Valley and Danjiang Grand View Garden
5. very friendly
6. also delicious
7. buy some for your friends
8. love this beautiful county at first sight
9. my hometown—Xichuan
完整参考范文：
Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about my hometown—Xichuan.
Xichuan is a beautiful county in the south of Henan. The climate here is very nice. It is not too hot in summer nor too cold in winter. There are also many historic sites, such as Xiangyan Temple, Meditation Valley and Danjiang Grand View Garden. They are very beautiful and the people here are very friendly. The local food is also delicious. You can also buy some for your friends. If you come to Xichuan, I am sure you will love this beautiful county at first sight.
I love my hometown and welcome to my hometown—Xichuan.
【知识点】
初中英语写作、一般现在时运用、英语介绍类短文写作
【点评】
本题通过写作支架降低了七年级学生介绍家乡的写作难度，范文覆盖所有指定要点，使用了亮点词汇和高分句式，结构清晰，适合学生学习和模仿介绍类短文的写作方法。
【难度系数】
0.7
