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十二、书面表达。（共9分）
科技的发展给我们的日常生活带来了翻天覆地的变化。我们出行、购物、阅读、和亲友沟通的方式都和过去大不相同，生活变得越来越便捷、高效。请以“Great changes in our life”为题，写一篇英语小短文，对比过去与现在的生活。
要求：时态区分一般过去时和一般现在时，不少于6句话，语句通顺，逻辑连贯。
Great changes in our life
科技的发展给我们的日常生活带来了翻天覆地的变化。我们出行、购物、阅读、和亲友沟通的方式都和过去大不相同，生活变得越来越便捷、高效。请以“Great changes in our life”为题，写一篇英语小短文，对比过去与现在的生活。
要求：时态区分一般过去时和一般现在时，不少于6句话，语句通顺，逻辑连贯。
Great changes in our life
答案
One possible version:
Great changes in our life
There are many great changes in our life.
In the past, we went to different places on foot. Now we go out by bus, metro or e-bike.
In the past, we bought things in real shops. Now we shop online at home.
In the past, we read paper books. Now we often read e-books on our smartphones.
In the past, we wrote letters to our friends. Now we write emails and chat online easily.
Technology makes our life better and easier. I love our new life.
Great changes in our life
There are many great changes in our life.
In the past, we went to different places on foot. Now we go out by bus, metro or e-bike.
In the past, we bought things in real shops. Now we shop online at home.
In the past, we read paper books. Now we often read e-books on our smartphones.
In the past, we wrote letters to our friends. Now we write emails and chat online easily.
Technology makes our life better and easier. I love our new life.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求以“Great changes in our life”为题，对比过去与现在的生活，需区分使用一般过去时和一般现在时，且不少于6句话。解题思路：1. 选取生活中常见的场景（如出行、购物、阅读、沟通）作为对比维度；2. 每个维度分别用一般过去时描述过去的生活方式，用一般现在时描述现在的变化；3. 最后添加总结句，点明科技带来的好处，确保语句通顺、逻辑连贯，符合字数要求。
【解析】
按照题目要求，写作步骤如下：1. 开头总起，点明生活中有很多变化；2. 分维度对比：出行方面，过去步行，现在乘坐公交、地铁或电动车；购物方面，过去在实体店购物，现在在家网购；阅读方面，过去读纸质书，现在用智能手机读电子书；沟通方面，过去写信，现在发邮件、在线聊天；3. 结尾总结，表达科技让生活更美好，抒发对新生活的喜爱。
【答案】
One possible version:
Great changes in our life
There are many great changes in our life.
In the past, we went to different places on foot. Now we go out by bus, metro or e-bike.
In the past, we bought things in real shops. Now we shop online at home.
In the past, we read paper books. Now we often read e-books on our smartphones.
In the past, we wrote letters to our friends. Now we write emails and chat online easily.
Technology makes our life better and easier. I love our new life.
【知识点】
英语话题写作；一般过去时；一般现在时
【点评】
本题围绕“生活变化”这一贴近学生日常的话题，要求通过时态对比展现科技带来的改变，既考查学生对一般过去时和一般现在时的运用能力，又锻炼其话题组织与语言表达能力，是基础的英语书面表达题型，易于学生上手完成。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求以“Great changes in our life”为题，对比过去与现在的生活，需区分使用一般过去时和一般现在时，且不少于6句话。解题思路：1. 选取生活中常见的场景（如出行、购物、阅读、沟通）作为对比维度；2. 每个维度分别用一般过去时描述过去的生活方式，用一般现在时描述现在的变化；3. 最后添加总结句，点明科技带来的好处，确保语句通顺、逻辑连贯，符合字数要求。
【解析】
按照题目要求，写作步骤如下：1. 开头总起，点明生活中有很多变化；2. 分维度对比：出行方面，过去步行，现在乘坐公交、地铁或电动车；购物方面，过去在实体店购物，现在在家网购；阅读方面，过去读纸质书，现在用智能手机读电子书；沟通方面，过去写信，现在发邮件、在线聊天；3. 结尾总结，表达科技让生活更美好，抒发对新生活的喜爱。
【答案】
One possible version:
Great changes in our life
There are many great changes in our life.
In the past, we went to different places on foot. Now we go out by bus, metro or e-bike.
In the past, we bought things in real shops. Now we shop online at home.
In the past, we read paper books. Now we often read e-books on our smartphones.
In the past, we wrote letters to our friends. Now we write emails and chat online easily.
Technology makes our life better and easier. I love our new life.
【知识点】
英语话题写作；一般过去时；一般现在时
【点评】
本题围绕“生活变化”这一贴近学生日常的话题，要求通过时态对比展现科技带来的改变，既考查学生对一般过去时和一般现在时的运用能力，又锻炼其话题组织与语言表达能力，是基础的英语书面表达题型，易于学生上手完成。
【难度系数】
0.3
