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八、(2024·南通启东期中)书面表达
《学英语》报社正在举行英语征文比赛，大赛主题为“My best friend”。假如你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英文写一篇短文，介绍你的好朋友Jack，并去参赛。
要求:1.内容完整,可适当发挥;2.表达清楚,意思连贯,符合逻辑;3.80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My best friend
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I want to tell you something about my best friend, Jack.
《学英语》报社正在举行英语征文比赛，大赛主题为“My best friend”。假如你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英文写一篇短文，介绍你的好朋友Jack，并去参赛。
要求:1.内容完整,可适当发挥;2.表达清楚,意思连贯,符合逻辑;3.80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My best friend
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I want to tell you something about my best friend, Jack.
答案
One possible version：
My best friend
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I want to tell you something about my best friend, Jack.
Jack is my best friend. He is twelve years old. He is in Class 3, Grade 7. He is tall and strong. He has short hair. In his free time, he likes listening to music. He can sing very well. He also likes playing basketball and he is a member of the school basketball team.
He likes all the subjects and he is good at Geography. He has many friends. The teachers are all very nice to him.
Yao Ming is his hero. He wants to play basketball with him one day. I hope his dream will come true.
My best friend
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I want to tell you something about my best friend, Jack.
Jack is my best friend. He is twelve years old. He is in Class 3, Grade 7. He is tall and strong. He has short hair. In his free time, he likes listening to music. He can sing very well. He also likes playing basketball and he is a member of the school basketball team.
He likes all the subjects and he is good at Geography. He has many friends. The teachers are all very nice to him.
Yao Ming is his hero. He wants to play basketball with him one day. I hope his dream will come true.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份介绍好友Jack，需结合表格提示信息完成书面表达。解题思路为：1. 承接给定开头，先介绍Jack的基本信息（年龄、班级）；2. 补充至少两点外貌特征；3. 描述兴趣爱好；4. 说明学校生活相关内容；5. 阐述梦想；6. 确保表达连贯、符合逻辑，词数约80词，适当发挥细节。
【解析】
1. 承接开头介绍基本信息：He is twelve years old. He is in Class 3, Grade 7.
2. 描写外貌：He is tall and strong. He has short hair.
3. 介绍兴趣爱好：In his free time, he likes listening to music. He can sing very well. He also likes playing basketball and he is a member of the school basketball team.
4. 说明学校生活：He likes all the subjects and he is good at Geography. He has many friends. The teachers are all very nice to him.
5. 阐述梦想：Yao Ming is his hero. He wants to play basketball with him one day. I hope his dream will come true.
【答案】
My best friend
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I want to tell you something about my best friend, Jack.
Jack is my best friend. He is twelve years old. He is in Class 3, Grade 7. He is tall and strong. He has short hair. In his free time, he likes listening to music. He can sing very well. He also likes playing basketball and he is a member of the school basketball team.
He likes all the subjects and he is good at Geography. He has many friends. The teachers are all very nice to him.
Yao Ming is his hero. He wants to play basketball with him one day. I hope his dream will come true.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物介绍写作、词汇句型运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“My best friend”主题，内容完整，涵盖表格所有要点并适当补充细节，表达清晰连贯，符合七年级英语水平，满足征文要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求以李华的身份介绍好友Jack，需结合表格提示信息完成书面表达。解题思路为：1. 承接给定开头，先介绍Jack的基本信息（年龄、班级）；2. 补充至少两点外貌特征；3. 描述兴趣爱好；4. 说明学校生活相关内容；5. 阐述梦想；6. 确保表达连贯、符合逻辑，词数约80词，适当发挥细节。
【解析】
1. 承接开头介绍基本信息：He is twelve years old. He is in Class 3, Grade 7.
2. 描写外貌：He is tall and strong. He has short hair.
3. 介绍兴趣爱好：In his free time, he likes listening to music. He can sing very well. He also likes playing basketball and he is a member of the school basketball team.
4. 说明学校生活：He likes all the subjects and he is good at Geography. He has many friends. The teachers are all very nice to him.
5. 阐述梦想：Yao Ming is his hero. He wants to play basketball with him one day. I hope his dream will come true.
【答案】
My best friend
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I want to tell you something about my best friend, Jack.
Jack is my best friend. He is twelve years old. He is in Class 3, Grade 7. He is tall and strong. He has short hair. In his free time, he likes listening to music. He can sing very well. He also likes playing basketball and he is a member of the school basketball team.
He likes all the subjects and he is good at Geography. He has many friends. The teachers are all very nice to him.
Yao Ming is his hero. He wants to play basketball with him one day. I hope his dream will come true.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物介绍写作、词汇句型运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“My best friend”主题，内容完整，涵盖表格所有要点并适当补充细节，表达清晰连贯，符合七年级英语水平，满足征文要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
