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3. In the heart of every patient, their hard work shines brighter than fireworks.
翻译:在每位病人的心中,他们的辛勤付出比烟花还要闪耀。
手法分析:比喻修辞。
把医护人员的辛勤付出比作"比烟花还亮的光"。烟花我们都见过,
这样写能让我们一下子明白,医生的付出在病人心里有多么重要和温暖。
答案
3. 翻译:在每位病人的心中,他们的辛勤付出比烟花还要闪耀。
手法分析:比喻修辞。把医护人员的辛勤付出比作"比烟花还亮的光"。烟花我们都见过,这样写能让我们一下子明白,医生的付出在病人心里有多么重要和温暖。
手法分析:比喻修辞。把医护人员的辛勤付出比作"比烟花还亮的光"。烟花我们都见过,这样写能让我们一下子明白,医生的付出在病人心里有多么重要和温暖。
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根据写作指导，完成写作训练。
• 写作任务:Write a short passage about a person on duty during festivals.
• 写作要求:
参考课本When duty shines的结构和技巧，描述一位在节日期间坚守岗位的人（如快递员、交警、超市收银员等）如何在节日里履行职责，体现责任与奉献。
内容:包含人物的身份、节日期间的工作状态、具体行动及内心感受。
语言:句子清晰，语法正确，可运用对比、细节描写、直接引语、比喻等写作手法。
情感:传递对坚守岗位者的敬意，体现“责任闪耀”的核心思想。
• 写作指导:
步骤1:通过回答以下问题来整理你的想法。
(1) Who is the person in your story? (例:A delivery worker/My uncle, a traffic police officer...)
(2) When and where did the story happen? (例:On the morning of the Spring Festival, on the busy street...)
(3) What challenge or problem did you see the person facing? (例:carrying heavy
packages in the cold, guiding traffic in
the rain...)
(4) What did the person do to deal with it?
And what did you do to help? (例: He
kept working with frozen hands, and I
gave him a hot drink.)
(5) How did the person react after your
help? How did you feel? (Describe the
other person's response and your own
feelings.)
步骤2:撰写和修改。
(1) 将步骤1的句子组合成一篇合乎逻辑
的完整短文。
(2) 为你的故事拟一个好标题,例如,A
Warm Delivery on Spring Festival 或
The Traffic Light Keeper on New
Year's Eve。
步骤3:评估并改进。
(1) 内容:包含问题中的所有关键点,句子
清晰,语法正确。
(2) 手法:至少运用1~2种写作手法(如对
比:"Most people were having family
dinners, but he was still delivering
packages.";细节描写:"His nose was
red from the cold, but he kept
smiling.")。
(3) 情感:帮助的流程描述清晰,包含对人
物的敬佩或温暖的感受。
步骤4:分享你的故事。
在课堂上与同学们分享你的短文,并听
取同学们的评价,进一步修改完善。
根据写作指导，完成写作训练。
• 写作任务:Write a short passage about a person on duty during festivals.
• 写作要求:
参考课本When duty shines的结构和技巧，描述一位在节日期间坚守岗位的人（如快递员、交警、超市收银员等）如何在节日里履行职责，体现责任与奉献。
内容:包含人物的身份、节日期间的工作状态、具体行动及内心感受。
语言:句子清晰，语法正确，可运用对比、细节描写、直接引语、比喻等写作手法。
情感:传递对坚守岗位者的敬意，体现“责任闪耀”的核心思想。
• 写作指导:
步骤1:通过回答以下问题来整理你的想法。
(1) Who is the person in your story? (例:A delivery worker/My uncle, a traffic police officer...)
(2) When and where did the story happen? (例:On the morning of the Spring Festival, on the busy street...)
(3) What challenge or problem did you see the person facing? (例:carrying heavy
packages in the cold, guiding traffic in
the rain...)
(4) What did the person do to deal with it?
And what did you do to help? (例: He
kept working with frozen hands, and I
gave him a hot drink.)
(5) How did the person react after your
help? How did you feel? (Describe the
other person's response and your own
feelings.)
步骤2:撰写和修改。
(1) 将步骤1的句子组合成一篇合乎逻辑
的完整短文。
(2) 为你的故事拟一个好标题,例如,A
Warm Delivery on Spring Festival 或
The Traffic Light Keeper on New
Year's Eve。
步骤3:评估并改进。
(1) 内容:包含问题中的所有关键点,句子
清晰,语法正确。
(2) 手法:至少运用1~2种写作手法(如对
比:"Most people were having family
dinners, but he was still delivering
packages.";细节描写:"His nose was
red from the cold, but he kept
smiling.")。
(3) 情感:帮助的流程描述清晰,包含对人
物的敬佩或温暖的感受。
步骤4:分享你的故事。
在课堂上与同学们分享你的短文,并听
取同学们的评价,进一步修改完善。
答案
A Warm Delivery on Spring Festival
For most people, Spring Festival means family dinners and watching the Spring Festival Gala at home. But for Uncle Wang, a delivery worker, the festival only means more packages to send.
It was the morning of Chinese New Year. The street was quiet, with only a few red lanterns swaying in the cold wind. I saw Uncle Wang carrying a big box with frozen hands. His nose was red from the cold, and his coat was covered with a thin layer of snow. "These are New Year gifts. I must send them to people in time," he said, wiping the snow off his face with his sleeve. I went back home and brought him a cup of hot tea. He smiled and said, "Thank you, kid. This tea is warmer than any New Year gift I've received."
Uncle Wang is only one of thousands of delivery workers in China. They walk through the cold streets during festivals, just like moving warm lights, sending happiness to every family.
For most people, Spring Festival means family dinners and watching the Spring Festival Gala at home. But for Uncle Wang, a delivery worker, the festival only means more packages to send.
It was the morning of Chinese New Year. The street was quiet, with only a few red lanterns swaying in the cold wind. I saw Uncle Wang carrying a big box with frozen hands. His nose was red from the cold, and his coat was covered with a thin layer of snow. "These are New Year gifts. I must send them to people in time," he said, wiping the snow off his face with his sleeve. I went back home and brought him a cup of hot tea. He smiled and said, "Thank you, kid. This tea is warmer than any New Year gift I've received."
Uncle Wang is only one of thousands of delivery workers in China. They walk through the cold streets during festivals, just like moving warm lights, sending happiness to every family.
