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七、书面表达。
梦虽遥,追则能达;愿虽艰,持则可圆(Dreams and wishes may be far, but they can be fulfilled with dedicated pursuit.)。梦想是心灵的火种,点燃激情,照亮前行的路。心怀梦想,脚踏实地,每一步都是通往成功的阶梯。请以"Never Give Up on Dreams"为题,根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
要求:1. 文中不得出现所在学校名称和学生姓名；
2. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Never Give up on Dreams
Everyone has dreams. Although they seem far away, we can achieve them as long as we keep working hard for them.
梦虽遥,追则能达;愿虽艰,持则可圆(Dreams and wishes may be far, but they can be fulfilled with dedicated pursuit.)。梦想是心灵的火种,点燃激情,照亮前行的路。心怀梦想,脚踏实地,每一步都是通往成功的阶梯。请以"Never Give Up on Dreams"为题,根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
要求:1. 文中不得出现所在学校名称和学生姓名；
2. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Never Give up on Dreams
Everyone has dreams. Although they seem far away, we can achieve them as long as we keep working hard for them.
My dream is to be a scientist. To make my dream come true, I study Maths and Science hard every day. I also read science books to learn more knowledge.
However, I face difficulties. I can't balance my study and hobbies well. Sometimes I feel too tired to keep going.
To solve these problems, I make a study plan to manage my time. I also talk to my teachers and parents when I feel upset.
I believe I will never give up. With hard work, my dream will come true one day.
答案
One possible version：
Never Give up on Dreams
Everyone has dreams. Although they seem far away, we can achieve them as long as we keep working hard for them.
My dream is to be a scientist. To make my dream come true, I study Maths and Science hard every day. I also read science books to learn more knowledge.
However, I face difficulties. I can't balance my study and hobbies well. Sometimes I feel too tired to keep going.
To solve these problems, I make a study plan to manage my time. I also talk to my teachers and parents when I feel upset.
I believe I will never give up. With hard work, my dream will come true one day.
Never Give up on Dreams
Everyone has dreams. Although they seem far away, we can achieve them as long as we keep working hard for them.
My dream is to be a scientist. To make my dream come true, I study Maths and Science hard every day. I also read science books to learn more knowledge.
However, I face difficulties. I can't balance my study and hobbies well. Sometimes I feel too tired to keep going.
To solve these problems, I make a study plan to manage my time. I also talk to my teachers and parents when I feel upset.
I believe I will never give up. With hard work, my dream will come true one day.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题书面表达，主题是“Never Give Up on Dreams”，需结合给定的表格要点（梦想、为梦想付出的行动、遇到的困难、解决困难的措施、决心）完成短文，开头已给出，要求词数100左右，不得出现学校和学生姓名。解题思路：1. 先明确自己的梦想（如成为科学家）；2. 对应表格内容依次展开：写为实现梦想要学好的学科、做的额外准备；3. 写出遇到的困难（如学业与爱好难平衡）；4. 提出解决困难的具体措施；5. 表达自己坚持梦想的决心，确保语言通顺，要点齐全，符合词数要求。
【解析】首先确定梦想为成为科学家，接着说明为实现梦想，要努力学习数学和科学，还会阅读科学书籍积累知识；然后指出遇到的困难是难以平衡学业与爱好，有时会疲惫；再说明解决措施是制定学习计划管理时间，向老师和家长倾诉；最后表达自己不会放弃，相信通过努力梦想会实现。写作时注意使用正确的英语句式，避免语法错误，覆盖所有要点，控制词数。
【答案】One possible version：
Never Give up on Dreams
Everyone has dreams. Although they seem far away, we can achieve them as long as we keep working hard for them.
My dream is to be a scientist. To make my dream come true, I study Maths and Science hard every day. I also read science books to learn more knowledge.
However, I face difficulties. I can't balance my study and hobbies well. Sometimes I feel too tired to keep going.
To solve these problems, I make a study plan to manage my time. I also talk to my teachers and parents when I feel upset.
I believe I will never give up. With hard work, my dream will come true one day.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文（梦想）、要点写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖了题目要求的所有要点，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先确定梦想为成为科学家，接着说明为实现梦想，要努力学习数学和科学，还会阅读科学书籍积累知识；然后指出遇到的困难是难以平衡学业与爱好，有时会疲惫；再说明解决措施是制定学习计划管理时间，向老师和家长倾诉；最后表达自己不会放弃，相信通过努力梦想会实现。写作时注意使用正确的英语句式，避免语法错误，覆盖所有要点，控制词数。
【答案】One possible version：
Never Give up on Dreams
Everyone has dreams. Although they seem far away, we can achieve them as long as we keep working hard for them.
My dream is to be a scientist. To make my dream come true, I study Maths and Science hard every day. I also read science books to learn more knowledge.
However, I face difficulties. I can't balance my study and hobbies well. Sometimes I feel too tired to keep going.
To solve these problems, I make a study plan to manage my time. I also talk to my teachers and parents when I feel upset.
I believe I will never give up. With hard work, my dream will come true one day.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文（梦想）、要点写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖了题目要求的所有要点，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5
