Ⅵ. Writing(作文)(本大题共1题,共20分)
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60词的短文)
假如你是李枫。你的好朋友Tom最近因为脸上长了粉刺(pimple)而感到有心理压力,情绪低落,甚至不愿意参加同龄人的聚会。请你给他写一封电子邮件进行安慰和劝导。内容必须包括:
(1)表达你的理解和安慰;
(2)给出至少两条建议帮他缓解压力;
(3)鼓励他走出阴霾,自信面对。

One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I am writing to comfort you. I know you feel stressed because of the pimples on your face. It is normal for teenage boys to have this problem,so please don't be emotional or feel ugly.
Here is some advice for you. Firstly,you shouldn't care too much about your appearance. True friends will not laugh at you. Secondly,please don't hide from your peers. You can talk to a school counsellor to let your pressure out.
Trust me,everything will be fine. Please stay happy and confident!
Yours,
Li Feng

【分析】
本题要求以李枫的身份给因长粉刺而情绪低落的好友Tom写一封安慰劝导的电子邮件。解题思路为：首先，开头需表达对Tom的理解与安慰，点明青春期长粉刺是正常现象，缓解他的负面情绪；其次，给出至少两条具体可行的建议，帮助他缓解压力；最后，鼓励他自信面对，走出低落状态，同时注意邮件格式和词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：以邮件格式称呼Tom，直接表达安慰，说明理解他因粉刺产生的压力，强调青春期出现该情况很正常，安抚他的情绪；
2. 中间：给出两条建议，一是不必过度在意外表，真正的朋友不会嘲笑他，二是不要回避同龄人，可通过找学校辅导员倾诉释放压力；
3. 结尾：鼓励Tom，表达一切会变好，让他保持开心自信，最后署名李枫。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I am writing to comfort you. I know you feel stressed because of the pimples on your face. It is normal for teenage boys to have this problem,so please don't be emotional or feel ugly.
Here is some advice for you. Firstly,you shouldn't care too much about your appearance. True friends will not laugh at you. Secondly,please don't hide from your peers. You can talk to a school counsellor to let your pressure out.
Trust me,everything will be fine. Please stay happy and confident!
Yours,
Li Feng
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题表达（安慰与建议）
【点评】
该作文符合邮件格式，涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，语言通顺自然，能有效安慰和劝导Tom，符合初中生英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】
0.5