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七、书面表达
俗话说：“没有规矩，不成方圆。”日常生活中我们有家规，有校规。请你从健康、学习、生活等方面用英语写一篇 60 词左右的短文，描述一下你校校规。开头已给出，不计入总词数。内容需包括以下要点：
1. What are the rules?
2. What do you think of these rules?
Rules are everywhere.
俗话说：“没有规矩，不成方圆。”日常生活中我们有家规，有校规。请你从健康、学习、生活等方面用英语写一篇 60 词左右的短文，描述一下你校校规。开头已给出，不计入总词数。内容需包括以下要点：
1. What are the rules?
2. What do you think of these rules?
Rules are everywhere.
答案
One possible version:
Rules are everywhere. There are many rules in my school. We must wear school uniforms to school. We must go to school on time. In class, we can't talk or eat, so we have to be quiet and listen to the teachers carefully. After class, we can't run in the hallway or fight with classmates, and we should get on well with others. Also, we have to take exercise every day to keep healthy.
School rules are good for our study. We must follow the rules.
Rules are everywhere. There are many rules in my school. We must wear school uniforms to school. We must go to school on time. In class, we can't talk or eat, so we have to be quiet and listen to the teachers carefully. After class, we can't run in the hallway or fight with classmates, and we should get on well with others. Also, we have to take exercise every day to keep healthy.
School rules are good for our study. We must follow the rules.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先明确核心要求：一是内容要覆盖两个指定要点：说明校规具体内容、表达自己对校规的看法，还要从健康、学习、生活三个维度选取内容，总词数控制在60词左右，给定开头不计入词数。首先第一步先搭建框架：开头承接给定的"Rules are everywhere."，先总述我校有不少校规；第二步分维度列举规则：学习维度可以写按时到校、课上保持认真听讲的相关要求，生活维度写穿校服、课后不在走廊追逐打闹、和同学友好相处的要求，健康维度写每日锻炼的要求；第三步收尾表达对校规的正面评价，说明校规的意义，点明我们要遵守规则，最后通读检查语法和词数，调整语句让表达通顺自然。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇承接给定开头，总起说明我的学校有很多校规，自然引出下文的规则列举。
2. 分维度逐条清晰列举校规：
① 入校相关：我们必须穿校服上学，必须按时到校；
② 学习相关：课上不能交谈、吃东西，要保持安静认真听老师讲课；
③ 校园生活相关：课后不能在走廊奔跑，不能和同学打架，要和他人友好相处；
④ 健康相关：我们每天必须锻炼来保持健康。
3. 收尾表达个人观点：说明校规对我们的学习有益，我们必须遵守这些规则。
全程使用一般现在时表述常规规则，人称统一用第一人称we，保证语句通顺、无拼写语法错误，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Rules are everywhere. There are many rules in my school. We must wear school uniforms to school. We must go to school on time. In class, we can't talk or eat, so we have to be quiet and listen to the teachers carefully. After class, we can't run in the hallway or fight with classmates, and we should get on well with others. Also, we have to take exercise every day to keep healthy.
School rules are good for our study. We must follow the rules.
【知识点】
校规类话题写作；一般现在时应用；要点作文谋篇
【点评】
本题属于初中英语基础类书面表达，难度较低，只需要紧扣题干给出的两个核心要点，从健康、学习、生活三个指定方向选取贴合校园实际的规则内容，保证要点无遗漏，语句连贯无低级语法错误，就可以完成符合要求的短文，日常积累相关校园规则的常用表达就能轻松应对这类题目。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先明确核心要求：一是内容要覆盖两个指定要点：说明校规具体内容、表达自己对校规的看法，还要从健康、学习、生活三个维度选取内容，总词数控制在60词左右，给定开头不计入词数。首先第一步先搭建框架：开头承接给定的"Rules are everywhere."，先总述我校有不少校规；第二步分维度列举规则：学习维度可以写按时到校、课上保持认真听讲的相关要求，生活维度写穿校服、课后不在走廊追逐打闹、和同学友好相处的要求，健康维度写每日锻炼的要求；第三步收尾表达对校规的正面评价，说明校规的意义，点明我们要遵守规则，最后通读检查语法和词数，调整语句让表达通顺自然。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇承接给定开头，总起说明我的学校有很多校规，自然引出下文的规则列举。
2. 分维度逐条清晰列举校规：
① 入校相关：我们必须穿校服上学，必须按时到校；
② 学习相关：课上不能交谈、吃东西，要保持安静认真听老师讲课；
③ 校园生活相关：课后不能在走廊奔跑，不能和同学打架，要和他人友好相处；
④ 健康相关：我们每天必须锻炼来保持健康。
3. 收尾表达个人观点：说明校规对我们的学习有益，我们必须遵守这些规则。
全程使用一般现在时表述常规规则，人称统一用第一人称we，保证语句通顺、无拼写语法错误，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Rules are everywhere. There are many rules in my school. We must wear school uniforms to school. We must go to school on time. In class, we can't talk or eat, so we have to be quiet and listen to the teachers carefully. After class, we can't run in the hallway or fight with classmates, and we should get on well with others. Also, we have to take exercise every day to keep healthy.
School rules are good for our study. We must follow the rules.
【知识点】
校规类话题写作；一般现在时应用；要点作文谋篇
【点评】
本题属于初中英语基础类书面表达，难度较低，只需要紧扣题干给出的两个核心要点，从健康、学习、生活三个指定方向选取贴合校园实际的规则内容，保证要点无遗漏，语句连贯无低级语法错误，就可以完成符合要求的短文，日常积累相关校园规则的常用表达就能轻松应对这类题目。
【难度系数】
0.7
