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四、书面表达(真题·宁波余姚)
42.请你描述曾经度过的一个难忘的暑假,内容如下:
要求:(1)包含提示,内容充实,可适当发挥;(2)条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;(3)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Unforgettable Summer Holiday
Last summer, I spent an unforgettable holiday.
42.请你描述曾经度过的一个难忘的暑假,内容如下:
要求:(1)包含提示,内容充实,可适当发挥;(2)条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;(3)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Unforgettable Summer Holiday
Last summer, I spent an unforgettable holiday.
First, I read more books. I also wrote down interesting things that happened in my life, like funny stories with my friends or special moments with my family. Besides, I did lots of outdoor activities to stay healthy and active. I enjoyed going for bike rides with my dad and playing soccer with my friends. Moreover, I helped my parents with housework more often. I did the dishes after meals, swept the floor, and even tried to cook simple meals. It's important to learn these skills.
The most interesting thing is that I went to Beijing with my parents on holiday. By travelling, my summer holiday became both enjoyable and meaningful.
I learnt a lot from my unforgettable holiday. It's helpful for me to improve myself and it helps me to know how to keep healthy. It gives me a good chance to experience a different life.
The most interesting thing is that I went to Beijing with my parents on holiday. By travelling, my summer holiday became both enjoyable and meaningful.
I learnt a lot from my unforgettable holiday. It's helpful for me to improve myself and it helps me to know how to keep healthy. It gives me a good chance to experience a different life.
答案
42. One possible version:
My Unforgettable Summer Holiday
Last summer, I spent an unforgettable holiday. First, I read more books. I also wrote down interesting things that happened in my life, like funny stories with my friends or special moments with my family. Besides, I did lots of outdoor activities to stay healthy and active. I enjoyed going for bike rides with my dad and playing soccer with my friends. Moreover, I helped my parents with housework more often. I did the dishes after meals, swept the floor, and even tried to cook simple meals. It's important to learn these skills.
The most interesting thing is that I went to Beijing with my parents on holiday. By travelling, my summer holiday became both enjoyable and meaningful.
I learnt a lot from my unforgettable holiday. It's helpful for me to improve myself and it helps me to know how to keep healthy. It gives me a good chance to experience a different life.
(147 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】
本题要求描述曾经一个难忘的暑假。描述暑假活动和感受，用一般过去时和一般现在时。用第一人称。
【提纲演示】
| 开门见山 | ... an unforgettable holiday. |
| ---- | ---- |
| 分享经历 | read books; write down funny things help parents do some housework do outside activities go on holiday |
| 情绪体验 | know a lot be helpful keep healthy experience a different life |
My Unforgettable Summer Holiday
Last summer, I spent an unforgettable holiday. First, I read more books. I also wrote down interesting things that happened in my life, like funny stories with my friends or special moments with my family. Besides, I did lots of outdoor activities to stay healthy and active. I enjoyed going for bike rides with my dad and playing soccer with my friends. Moreover, I helped my parents with housework more often. I did the dishes after meals, swept the floor, and even tried to cook simple meals. It's important to learn these skills.
The most interesting thing is that I went to Beijing with my parents on holiday. By travelling, my summer holiday became both enjoyable and meaningful.
I learnt a lot from my unforgettable holiday. It's helpful for me to improve myself and it helps me to know how to keep healthy. It gives me a good chance to experience a different life.
(147 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】
本题要求描述曾经一个难忘的暑假。描述暑假活动和感受，用一般过去时和一般现在时。用第一人称。
【提纲演示】
| 开门见山 | ... an unforgettable holiday. |
| ---- | ---- |
| 分享经历 | read books; write down funny things help parents do some housework do outside activities go on holiday |
| 情绪体验 | know a lot be helpful keep healthy experience a different life |
解析
【分析】
本题要求描述难忘的暑假，需结合表格中的活动（读书、写趣事、做家务、户外活动、度假）和对应感受（学到很多、有帮助、保持健康、体验不同生活），用第一人称，以一般过去时描述过去的活动，适当表达感受。解题思路：先承接开头句，依次列举表格中的活动，对应写出每个活动的感受，最后总结假期的意义，确保内容充实、语句通顺，符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头句，点明假期难忘；
2. 按顺序描述表格中的活动：读书并记录生活趣事、帮父母做家务、开展户外活动、外出度假，每个活动对应表格里的感受；
3. 使用第一人称，以一般过去时叙述过去的经历，用first、besides、moreover等连接词使条理清晰；
4. 结尾总结假期收获，呼应“难忘”主题，保证语法正确、内容完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Unforgettable Summer Holiday
Last summer, I spent an unforgettable holiday. First, I read more books. I also wrote down interesting things that happened in my life, like funny stories with my friends or special moments with my family. Besides, I did lots of outdoor activities to stay healthy and active. I enjoyed going for bike rides with my dad and playing soccer with my friends. Moreover, I helped my parents with housework more often. I did the dishes after meals, swept the floor, and even tried to cook simple meals. It's important to learn these skills.
The most interesting thing is that I went to Beijing with my parents on holiday. By travelling, my summer holiday became both enjoyable and meaningful.
I learnt a lot from my unforgettable holiday. It's helpful for me to improve myself and it helps me to know how to keep healthy. It gives me a good chance to experience a different life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般过去时运用、话题写作
【点评】
本题为话题类书面表达，要求结合给定提示完成写作，需注意人称、时态的正确使用，合理组织活动与感受，体现假期意义，是初中英语常见题型，考查语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求描述难忘的暑假，需结合表格中的活动（读书、写趣事、做家务、户外活动、度假）和对应感受（学到很多、有帮助、保持健康、体验不同生活），用第一人称，以一般过去时描述过去的活动，适当表达感受。解题思路：先承接开头句，依次列举表格中的活动，对应写出每个活动的感受，最后总结假期的意义，确保内容充实、语句通顺，符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头句，点明假期难忘；
2. 按顺序描述表格中的活动：读书并记录生活趣事、帮父母做家务、开展户外活动、外出度假，每个活动对应表格里的感受；
3. 使用第一人称，以一般过去时叙述过去的经历，用first、besides、moreover等连接词使条理清晰；
4. 结尾总结假期收获，呼应“难忘”主题，保证语法正确、内容完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Unforgettable Summer Holiday
Last summer, I spent an unforgettable holiday. First, I read more books. I also wrote down interesting things that happened in my life, like funny stories with my friends or special moments with my family. Besides, I did lots of outdoor activities to stay healthy and active. I enjoyed going for bike rides with my dad and playing soccer with my friends. Moreover, I helped my parents with housework more often. I did the dishes after meals, swept the floor, and even tried to cook simple meals. It's important to learn these skills.
The most interesting thing is that I went to Beijing with my parents on holiday. By travelling, my summer holiday became both enjoyable and meaningful.
I learnt a lot from my unforgettable holiday. It's helpful for me to improve myself and it helps me to know how to keep healthy. It gives me a good chance to experience a different life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般过去时运用、话题写作
【点评】
本题为话题类书面表达，要求结合给定提示完成写作，需注意人称、时态的正确使用，合理组织活动与感受，体现假期意义，是初中英语常见题型，考查语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
