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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D17
假如你是李华,你上初三以来遇到了一些问题,想给电台主持人Betty写封邮件寻求帮助,请她给你一些建议。
你的问题:1.缺少与父母的沟通,有时甚至会吵架;2.喜欢打篮球,但是作业增多;3.学习压力很大,晚上经常睡不着。
要求:1.适当补充你的感受;2.词数80左右,文章开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Betty,
I'm very glad to write to you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你上初三以来遇到了一些问题,想给电台主持人Betty写封邮件寻求帮助,请她给你一些建议。
你的问题:1.缺少与父母的沟通,有时甚至会吵架;2.喜欢打篮球,但是作业增多;3.学习压力很大,晚上经常睡不着。
要求:1.适当补充你的感受;2.词数80左右,文章开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Betty,
I'm very glad to write to you.
I have had some problems since I was in the ninth grade. I seldom communicate with my parents. So we even have an argument sometimes.
I am a boy who likes playing basketball very much, but my homework is getting more and more.
I don't have time to play and relax any longer.
Now I have a lot of pressure from my schoolwork so that I often can't fall asleep at night.
I am really tired.
What should I do? Could you please give me some advice? Thanks a lot.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
答案
基础版范文
Dear Betty,
I'm very glad to write to you. I have had some problems since I was in the ninth grade. I seldom communicate with my parents. So we even have an argument sometimes.
I am a boy who likes playing basketball very much, but my homework is getting more and more. I don't have time to play and relax any longer. Now I have a lot of pressure from my schoolwork so that I often can't fall asleep at night. I am really tired.
What should I do? Could you please give me some advice? Thanks a lot.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
进阶版范文
Dear Betty,
I'm very glad to write to you. Since I entered the ninth grade, I have met a series of problems. I rarely engage in communication with my parents. As a result, we even have arguments on certain occasions.
I am a boy who loves playing basketball. However, my homework has been increasing. Then, I no longer have any time for playing basketball. At present, I am under a lot of pressure, so I find it difficult to fall asleep at night. I am truly tired.
I am at a loss. Would you offer me some valuable advice? I would be most grateful.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Dear Betty,
I'm very glad to write to you. I have had some problems since I was in the ninth grade. I seldom communicate with my parents. So we even have an argument sometimes.
I am a boy who likes playing basketball very much, but my homework is getting more and more. I don't have time to play and relax any longer. Now I have a lot of pressure from my schoolwork so that I often can't fall asleep at night. I am really tired.
What should I do? Could you please give me some advice? Thanks a lot.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
进阶版范文
Dear Betty,
I'm very glad to write to you. Since I entered the ninth grade, I have met a series of problems. I rarely engage in communication with my parents. As a result, we even have arguments on certain occasions.
I am a boy who loves playing basketball. However, my homework has been increasing. Then, I no longer have any time for playing basketball. At present, I am under a lot of pressure, so I find it difficult to fall asleep at night. I am truly tired.
I am at a loss. Would you offer me some valuable advice? I would be most grateful.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题要求以初三学生李华的身份给电台主持人Betty写求助邮件，需涵盖三个核心问题：与父母沟通少易吵架、喜爱打篮球但作业增多无时间、学习压力大夜间失眠，同时要补充个人感受，词数约80，开头结尾已固定。解题思路：先点明初三以来遇到的问题，再分别阐述三个问题及对应感受，最后礼貌请求建议，语言需符合初三英语水平，结构清晰、表达准确。
【解析】首先承接开头，说明自进入初三以来遇到了一些问题；接着阐述与父母的沟通问题：很少和父母交流，有时会发生争吵，补充自身的状态；然后说明爱好与学业的矛盾：热爱打篮球但作业量增加，没有时间放松；再提及学习压力：作业多导致压力大，夜间难以入睡，感到疲惫；最后礼貌请求Betty给出建议，符合邮件的礼貌语气。
【答案】基础版范文
Dear Betty,
I'm very glad to write to you. I have had some problems since I was in the ninth grade. I seldom communicate with my parents. So we even have an argument sometimes.
I am a boy who likes playing basketball very much, but my homework is getting more and more. I don't have time to play and relax any longer. Now I have a lot of pressure from my schoolwork so that I often can't fall asleep at night. I am really tired.
What should I do? Could you please give me some advice? Thanks a lot.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、话题表达（个人问题与求助）
【点评】本题贴合初三学生的真实生活场景，考查学生运用英语清晰表达个人问题、合理补充感受并礼貌求助的能力，符合初中英语写作的考查方向，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】首先承接开头，说明自进入初三以来遇到了一些问题；接着阐述与父母的沟通问题：很少和父母交流，有时会发生争吵，补充自身的状态；然后说明爱好与学业的矛盾：热爱打篮球但作业量增加，没有时间放松；再提及学习压力：作业多导致压力大，夜间难以入睡，感到疲惫；最后礼貌请求Betty给出建议，符合邮件的礼貌语气。
【答案】基础版范文
Dear Betty,
I'm very glad to write to you. I have had some problems since I was in the ninth grade. I seldom communicate with my parents. So we even have an argument sometimes.
I am a boy who likes playing basketball very much, but my homework is getting more and more. I don't have time to play and relax any longer. Now I have a lot of pressure from my schoolwork so that I often can't fall asleep at night. I am really tired.
What should I do? Could you please give me some advice? Thanks a lot.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、话题表达（个人问题与求助）
【点评】本题贴合初三学生的真实生活场景，考查学生运用英语清晰表达个人问题、合理补充感受并礼貌求助的能力，符合初中英语写作的考查方向，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.7
