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[开头句]
1. I'd like to share with you my true self. (点题)
2. I suppose everyone has something they don't like about themselves. (心理描写)
[中间句]
1. I'm not tall or short. I'm of medium height. (外貌)
2. I used to be shy, but now I enjoy communicating with others. (变化)
[结尾句]
1. I believe I will become better and better in the future. (希望)
2. Everyone can be a Su-perman! (希望)
[名言警句]
Don't judge from appearances.
不要以貌取人。
写作演练＞＞
怎样成为更好的自己？请你根据以下思维导图，以“How to be a better person”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，词数80～100(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
[思路点拨]
1. 时态:以一般现在时为主。2. 人称:以第一人称为主。3 注意 first, second, third 等序数词的使用。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
How to be a better person
Hello, everyone!
Thank you!
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
[开头句]
1. I'd like to share with you my true self. (点题)
2. I suppose everyone has something they don't like about themselves. (心理描写)
[中间句]
1. I'm not tall or short. I'm of medium height. (外貌)
2. I used to be shy, but now I enjoy communicating with others. (变化)
[结尾句]
1. I believe I will become better and better in the future. (希望)
2. Everyone can be a Su-perman! (希望)
[名言警句]
Don't judge from appearances.
不要以貌取人。
写作演练＞＞
怎样成为更好的自己？请你根据以下思维导图，以“How to be a better person”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，词数80～100(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
[思路点拨]
1. 时态:以一般现在时为主。2. 人称:以第一人称为主。3 注意 first, second, third 等序数词的使用。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
How to be a better person
Hello, everyone!
Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better person.
In order to be a better teenager, we should do the following things. First, we should develop some good habits. Only in this way can we live and study well.
Second, we should make a study plan and put it into action so that we can learn better.
Third, we should make friends with others. When they are in need, we should give a helping hand. In addition, we should develop good interests and take part in more voluntary activities.
Teenagers are the hope of our country.
So let's all try our best to be better teenagers and serve our country in the future.
Thank you!
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案
One possible version：
How to be a better person
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better person.
In order to be a better teenager, we should do the following things. First, we should develop some good habits. Only in this way can we live and study well. Second, we should make a study plan and put it into action so that we can learn better. Third, we should make friends with others. When they are in need, we should give a helping hand. In addition, we should develop good interests and take part in more voluntary activities.
Teenagers are the hope of our country. So let's all try our best to be better teenagers and serve our country in the future.
Thank you!
How to be a better person
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better person.
In order to be a better teenager, we should do the following things. First, we should develop some good habits. Only in this way can we live and study well. Second, we should make a study plan and put it into action so that we can learn better. Third, we should make friends with others. When they are in need, we should give a helping hand. In addition, we should develop good interests and take part in more voluntary activities.
Teenagers are the hope of our country. So let's all try our best to be better teenagers and serve our country in the future.
Thank you!
解析
【分析】本题为英语演讲稿写作题，要求以“How to be a better person”为题，结合给定思路（时态用一般现在时、人称用第一人称、用序数词分点）补充中间内容，词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出。解题思路：首先承接开头引出“如何成为更好的人”的主题；其次用first、second、third等序数词分点阐述具体做法，结合素材中的习惯培养、学习规划、交友互助等要点；最后结尾升华，符合演讲稿的语气与结构，确保逻辑连贯、词数达标。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头句，引出“分享如何成为更好的人”的主题；2. 用序数词分点说明具体做法：首先培养好习惯，其次制定学习计划并落实，第三主动交友并在他人需要时伸出援手，补充发展兴趣、参与志愿活动；3. 结尾升华，鼓励大家努力成为更好的人，符合演讲稿正式语气，控制词数在要求范围内，时态和人称符合要求。
【答案】How to be a better person
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better person.
In order to be a better teenager, we should do the following things. First, we should develop some good habits. Only in this way can we live and study well. Second, we should make a study plan and put it into action so that we can learn better. Third, we should make friends with others. When they are in need, we should give a helping hand. In addition, we should develop good interests and take part in more voluntary activities.
Teenagers are the hope of our country. So let's all try our best to be better teenagers and serve our country in the future.
Thank you!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语话题表达
【点评】本题考查英语演讲稿写作能力，给定思路点拨降低了写作难度，要求学生掌握话题写作的逻辑结构，适合巩固英语应用文写作的基本方法，提升话题表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头句，引出“分享如何成为更好的人”的主题；2. 用序数词分点说明具体做法：首先培养好习惯，其次制定学习计划并落实，第三主动交友并在他人需要时伸出援手，补充发展兴趣、参与志愿活动；3. 结尾升华，鼓励大家努力成为更好的人，符合演讲稿正式语气，控制词数在要求范围内，时态和人称符合要求。
【答案】How to be a better person
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better person.
In order to be a better teenager, we should do the following things. First, we should develop some good habits. Only in this way can we live and study well. Second, we should make a study plan and put it into action so that we can learn better. Third, we should make friends with others. When they are in need, we should give a helping hand. In addition, we should develop good interests and take part in more voluntary activities.
Teenagers are the hope of our country. So let's all try our best to be better teenagers and serve our country in the future.
Thank you!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语话题表达
【点评】本题考查英语演讲稿写作能力，给定思路点拨降低了写作难度，要求学生掌握话题写作的逻辑结构，适合巩固英语应用文写作的基本方法，提升话题表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5
