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主题写作专项 练写作 答案D30
主题词网
提升记忆力
方法
好处
优选词汇
• regularly • repeat • take notes • make a list • context
• summary • exercise • remember • memorize • effective
• healthy • mentally • helpful • relaxed • succeed in
• happy • achieve • improve • good grades • benefit
写作实例
审主题
假如你们班要进行一次关于“如何提高记忆力”的讨论会，请根据下面的内容提示写一篇预备稿。
内容包括：
• 记忆新东西前，先花时间理解；
• 把需要记的东西和已知的东西联系起来；
• 睡眠充足、经常锻炼；
• 其他提高记忆力的方法（请你补充）。
审词数
审要点
审时态：一般现在时
审人称：以第二、三人称为主
要求：1.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数），可适当发挥；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
I think memory plays an important role in our lives.
优秀范文
I think memory plays an important role in our lives. I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory¹.
First², before you remember something new, you’d better spend some time understanding it. Second², it’s a good way to connect what you want to remember¹ with what you have known¹. It can help you remember things for a long time. What’s more², you can try making a picture of it in your mind. It is very helpful. Lastly², healthy food, enough sleep and exercise are also important for improving your memory.
I hope my advice will help you.
亮点评析
①使用“疑问词+不定式”结构和what引导的从句，增强了句式的多样性。
②使用First、Second、What’s more和Lastly分别引出四条建议，使得文章结构更加清晰。
主题词网
提升记忆力
方法
好处
优选词汇
• regularly • repeat • take notes • make a list • context
• summary • exercise • remember • memorize • effective
• healthy • mentally • helpful • relaxed • succeed in
• happy • achieve • improve • good grades • benefit
写作实例
审主题
假如你们班要进行一次关于“如何提高记忆力”的讨论会，请根据下面的内容提示写一篇预备稿。
内容包括：
• 记忆新东西前，先花时间理解；
• 把需要记的东西和已知的东西联系起来；
• 睡眠充足、经常锻炼；
• 其他提高记忆力的方法（请你补充）。
审词数
审要点
审时态：一般现在时
审人称：以第二、三人称为主
要求：1.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数），可适当发挥；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
I think memory plays an important role in our lives.
I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory. First, before you remember something new, you’d better spend some time understanding it. Second, it’s a good way to connect what you want to remember with what you have known. It can help you remember things for a long time. What’s more, you can try making a picture of it in your mind. It is very helpful. Lastly, healthy food, enough sleep and exercise are also important for improving your memory. I hope my advice will help you.
优秀范文
I think memory plays an important role in our lives. I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory¹.
First², before you remember something new, you’d better spend some time understanding it. Second², it’s a good way to connect what you want to remember¹ with what you have known¹. It can help you remember things for a long time. What’s more², you can try making a picture of it in your mind. It is very helpful. Lastly², healthy food, enough sleep and exercise are also important for improving your memory.
I hope my advice will help you.
亮点评析
①使用“疑问词+不定式”结构和what引导的从句，增强了句式的多样性。
②使用First、Second、What’s more和Lastly分别引出四条建议，使得文章结构更加清晰。
答案
优秀范文
I think memory plays an important role in our lives. I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory¹.
First², before you remember something new, you’d better spend some time understanding it. Second², it’s a good way to connect what you want to remember¹ with what you have known¹. It can help you remember things for a long time. What’s more², you can try making a picture of it in your mind. It is very helpful. Lastly², healthy food, enough sleep and exercise are also important for improving your memory.
I hope my advice will help you.
亮点评析
①使用“疑问词+不定式”结构和what引导的从句，增强了句式的多样性。
②使用First、Second、What’s more和Lastly分别引出四条建议，使得文章结构更加清晰。
I think memory plays an important role in our lives. I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory¹.
First², before you remember something new, you’d better spend some time understanding it. Second², it’s a good way to connect what you want to remember¹ with what you have known¹. It can help you remember things for a long time. What’s more², you can try making a picture of it in your mind. It is very helpful. Lastly², healthy food, enough sleep and exercise are also important for improving your memory.
I hope my advice will help you.
亮点评析
①使用“疑问词+不定式”结构和what引导的从句，增强了句式的多样性。
②使用First、Second、What’s more和Lastly分别引出四条建议，使得文章结构更加清晰。
解析
【分析】
本次写作主题为“如何提高记忆力”，需遵循“开头总述+中间分点建议+结尾期望”的结构。开头要承接给定句，引出关于提高记忆力的建议；中间用First、Second、What’s more、Lastly分点阐述，对应要求的四个要点：①记忆新事物前先花时间理解；②将需记忆内容与已知内容关联；③保证充足睡眠、经常锻炼；④补充合理方法（如脑海中构建图像）；结尾表达对建议的期望。写作时需运用高分句式（如疑问词+不定式、what引导的名词性从句），用连接词使结构清晰，时态用一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主，词数控制在80左右。
【解析】
1. 开头：承接给定句，用“how to improve your memory”引出建议，即“I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.”；
2. 中间分点：
①First对应要点①，写“before you remember something new, you’d better spend some time understanding it”；
②Second对应要点②，运用高分句式写“it’s a good way to connect what you want to remember with what you have known”；
③What’s more补充要点④，写“you can try making a picture of it in your mind”；
④Lastly对应要点③，写“healthy food, enough sleep and exercise are also important for improving your memory”；
3. 结尾用给定句“I hope my advice will help you.”。
整体符合时态、人称、词数要求，结构清晰，要点齐全。
【答案】
I think memory plays an important role in our lives. I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First, before you remember something new, you’d better spend some time understanding it. Second, it’s a good way to connect what you want to remember with what you have known. It can help you remember things for a long time. What’s more, you can try making a picture of it in your mind. It is very helpful. Lastly, healthy food, enough sleep and exercise are also important for improving your memory.
I hope my advice will help you.
【知识点】
英语主题写作、高分句式运用
【点评】
本文结构清晰，逻辑连贯，运用了疑问词+不定式、what引导的从句等多样句式，要点齐全，补充内容合理，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文，适合学生学习借鉴。
【难度系数】
0.3
本次写作主题为“如何提高记忆力”，需遵循“开头总述+中间分点建议+结尾期望”的结构。开头要承接给定句，引出关于提高记忆力的建议；中间用First、Second、What’s more、Lastly分点阐述，对应要求的四个要点：①记忆新事物前先花时间理解；②将需记忆内容与已知内容关联；③保证充足睡眠、经常锻炼；④补充合理方法（如脑海中构建图像）；结尾表达对建议的期望。写作时需运用高分句式（如疑问词+不定式、what引导的名词性从句），用连接词使结构清晰，时态用一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主，词数控制在80左右。
【解析】
1. 开头：承接给定句，用“how to improve your memory”引出建议，即“I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.”；
2. 中间分点：
①First对应要点①，写“before you remember something new, you’d better spend some time understanding it”；
②Second对应要点②，运用高分句式写“it’s a good way to connect what you want to remember with what you have known”；
③What’s more补充要点④，写“you can try making a picture of it in your mind”；
④Lastly对应要点③，写“healthy food, enough sleep and exercise are also important for improving your memory”；
3. 结尾用给定句“I hope my advice will help you.”。
整体符合时态、人称、词数要求，结构清晰，要点齐全。
【答案】
I think memory plays an important role in our lives. I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First, before you remember something new, you’d better spend some time understanding it. Second, it’s a good way to connect what you want to remember with what you have known. It can help you remember things for a long time. What’s more, you can try making a picture of it in your mind. It is very helpful. Lastly, healthy food, enough sleep and exercise are also important for improving your memory.
I hope my advice will help you.
【知识点】
英语主题写作、高分句式运用
【点评】
本文结构清晰，逻辑连贯，运用了疑问词+不定式、what引导的从句等多样句式，要点齐全，补充内容合理，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文，适合学生学习借鉴。
【难度系数】
0.3
