Ⅳ.书面表达(2024 贵州中考)
成长的道路上，我们努力改变以提升自我。假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正在开展主题为“The Change Made Me ...”(改变让我……)的征文活动。请参考图文信息，积极投稿。
要求：
1. 补全标题；
2. 内容积极向上，不少于 80 词；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
The Change Made Me (Better/Improve/...)

Ⅳ. One possible version：
The Change Made Me Better
There are many things in our lives that can help us to be better. In my opinion, I think my changes have made me better.
I used to be weak because of my bad habits. After communicating with my teacher, I ate regularly every day and often took exercise, so I am strong now. What's more, I was so careless that I made many mistakes in my exams. My teacher advised me to check my answers carefully and develop good learning habits. I'm careful now.
These good changes made me feel better and brave enough to face new challenges.

【解析】
这篇书面表达需紧扣“The Change Made Me ...”的主题，先补全标题为“The Change Made Me Better”，再按照图示从三个层面展开：首先点明成长中改变让自己变得更好；接着讲述自身从体弱到强健、从粗心到细致的具体转变经历，结合老师的帮助体现改变的过程；最后抒发改变带来的积极感受，内容需积极向上，满足词数要求。
【答案】
The Change Made Me Better
There are many things in our lives that can help us to be better. In my opinion, I think my changes have made me better.
I used to be weak because of my bad habits. After communicating with my teacher, I ate regularly every day and often took exercise, so I am strong now. What's more, I was so careless that I made many mistakes in my exams. My teacher advised me to check my answers carefully and develop good learning habits. I'm careful now.
These good changes made me feel better and brave enough to face new challenges.
【知识点】
记叙文写作、话题作文写作、英语句式运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“改变让我更好”的主题，内容完整，层次清晰，合理运用了used to、so...that...等句式，语言流畅自然，符合征文的各项要求，积极展现了成长中的正向改变。
【难度系数】
0.7