I 学校正在开展以“Should we keep pets?”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇英语议论文,阐述养宠物的利弊,并表明自己的观点。要求80词左右。
要点提示:
1. 养宠物的好处(如陪伴、缓解压力、培养责任感等)。
2. 养宠物的弊端(如花费时间金钱、制造卫生问题等)。
3. 你的观点及理由。
Should we keep pets?
With the development of modern life, more and more people keep pets. Some think it’s a great choice, while others worry about the problems it may bring.
要点提示:
1. 养宠物的好处(如陪伴、缓解压力、培养责任感等)。
2. 养宠物的弊端(如花费时间金钱、制造卫生问题等)。
3. 你的观点及理由。
Should we keep pets?
With the development of modern life, more and more people keep pets. Some think it’s a great choice, while others worry about the problems it may bring.
答案
Pets offer warm company and ease our daily stress. Playing with lovely pets can greatly ease our study or work pressure. What’s more, feeding and cleaning them slowly helps us develop a strong sense of responsibility. However, keeping pets costs much time and money. Besides, animal fur and waste create mess and health troubles.
In my opinion, we can raise pets as long as we make full preparations. If we are willing to take good care of them, we will get endless happiness from our little friends.
In my opinion, we can raise pets as long as we make full preparations. If we are willing to take good care of them, we will get endless happiness from our little friends.
解析
【分析】
本次写作任务是围绕“是否该养宠物”的主题写英语议论文,需涵盖养宠物的利弊及个人观点。解题思路:1. 先梳理养宠物的好处,对应题目给出的陪伴、缓解压力、培养责任感三个要点;2. 再梳理弊端,对应花费时间金钱、制造卫生问题两个要点;3. 最后结合实际表达个人观点,明确合理前提(做好准备再养),确保要点齐全、逻辑连贯,词数符合要求。
【解析】
首先阐述养宠物的益处:宠物提供温暖陪伴,缓解日常压力,喂养和清洁宠物还能培养责任感;接着说明弊端:养宠物耗费时间和金钱,动物毛发和排泄物会造成卫生问题;最后表达个人观点:做好充分准备后可以养宠物,用心照顾能收获快乐。
【答案】
Pets offer warm company and ease our daily stress. Playing with lovely pets can greatly ease our study or work pressure. What’s more, feeding and cleaning them slowly helps us develop a strong sense of responsibility. However, keeping pets costs much time and money. Besides, animal fur and waste create mess and health troubles.
In my opinion, we can raise pets as long as we make full preparations. If we are willing to take good care of them, we will get endless happiness from our little friends.
【知识点】
英语议论文写作、话题类英语写作、要点整合表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题,全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点,结构清晰(先述利弊再亮明观点),语言简洁流畅,符合80词左右的要求,逻辑连贯,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本次写作任务是围绕“是否该养宠物”的主题写英语议论文,需涵盖养宠物的利弊及个人观点。解题思路:1. 先梳理养宠物的好处,对应题目给出的陪伴、缓解压力、培养责任感三个要点;2. 再梳理弊端,对应花费时间金钱、制造卫生问题两个要点;3. 最后结合实际表达个人观点,明确合理前提(做好准备再养),确保要点齐全、逻辑连贯,词数符合要求。
【解析】
首先阐述养宠物的益处:宠物提供温暖陪伴,缓解日常压力,喂养和清洁宠物还能培养责任感;接着说明弊端:养宠物耗费时间和金钱,动物毛发和排泄物会造成卫生问题;最后表达个人观点:做好充分准备后可以养宠物,用心照顾能收获快乐。
【答案】
Pets offer warm company and ease our daily stress. Playing with lovely pets can greatly ease our study or work pressure. What’s more, feeding and cleaning them slowly helps us develop a strong sense of responsibility. However, keeping pets costs much time and money. Besides, animal fur and waste create mess and health troubles.
In my opinion, we can raise pets as long as we make full preparations. If we are willing to take good care of them, we will get endless happiness from our little friends.
【知识点】
英语议论文写作、话题类英语写作、要点整合表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题,全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点,结构清晰(先述利弊再亮明观点),语言简洁流畅,符合80词左右的要求,逻辑连贯,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
Ⅱ.If you have the opportunity to keep a pet, how would you balance
the responsibility of taking care of it with the study pressure of
daily life? Please share your thoughts with the class.
the responsibility of taking care of it with the study pressure of
daily life? Please share your thoughts with the class.
答案
参考示例:
If I have the opportunity to keep a pet, I will make a clear and reasonable daily plan first. On school days, I will finish my homework and review my schoolwork carefully as soon as I get home, then spend 20 to 30 minutes feeding, playing with or walking my pet. This process can help me shake off the tiredness from long hours of study and relax my mind. When I need to prepare for important exams, I will ask my parents to help take care of the pet for a short period. Actually, staying with the lovely pet can reduce my study pressure a lot, and make me more energetic to focus on my later study. In this way, I can take good care of my pet and won't fall behind on my schoolwork.
If I have the opportunity to keep a pet, I will make a clear and reasonable daily plan first. On school days, I will finish my homework and review my schoolwork carefully as soon as I get home, then spend 20 to 30 minutes feeding, playing with or walking my pet. This process can help me shake off the tiredness from long hours of study and relax my mind. When I need to prepare for important exams, I will ask my parents to help take care of the pet for a short period. Actually, staying with the lovely pet can reduce my study pressure a lot, and make me more energetic to focus on my later study. In this way, I can take good care of my pet and won't fall behind on my schoolwork.
解析
【分析】本题要求围绕“平衡养宠物的责任与日常学习压力”展开表达,解题思路为:首先明确核心方法是制定合理的日常计划;其次分日常上学、备考等不同场景说明具体安排;最后点明养宠物对缓解学习压力的积极作用,让内容逻辑连贯、贴合主题,清晰展现平衡的方式。
【解析】按照上述思路,先提出制定清晰合理的每日计划:上学日先完成学业任务,再花固定时间照顾宠物;备考时可请家人临时帮忙照料;同时说明与宠物相处能缓解学习疲劳,实现学业与养宠的平衡,具体表达如下:If I have the opportunity to keep a pet, I will make a clear and reasonable daily plan first. On school days, I will finish my homework and review my schoolwork carefully as soon as I get home, then spend 20 to 30 minutes feeding, playing with or walking my pet. This process can help me shake off the tiredness from long hours of study and relax my mind. When I need to prepare for important exams, I will ask my parents to help take care of the pet for a short period. Actually, staying with the lovely pet can reduce my study pressure a lot, and make me more energetic to focus on my later study. In this way, I can take good care of my pet and won't fall behind on my schoolwork.
【答案】If I have the opportunity to keep a pet, I will make a clear and reasonable daily plan first. On school days, I will finish my homework and review my schoolwork carefully as soon as I get home, then spend 20 to 30 minutes feeding, playing with or walking my pet. This process can help me shake off the tiredness from long hours of study and relax my mind. When I need to prepare for important exams, I will ask my parents to help take care of the pet for a short period. Actually, staying with the lovely pet can reduce my study pressure a lot, and make me more energetic to focus on my later study. In this way, I can take good care of my pet and won't fall behind on my schoolwork.
【知识点】英语话题写作、逻辑表达
【点评】本题结合学生生活实际,考查学生的语言组织与逻辑思维能力,引导学生思考责任与规划的关系,内容贴近生活,易于学生展开表达。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照上述思路,先提出制定清晰合理的每日计划:上学日先完成学业任务,再花固定时间照顾宠物;备考时可请家人临时帮忙照料;同时说明与宠物相处能缓解学习疲劳,实现学业与养宠的平衡,具体表达如下:If I have the opportunity to keep a pet, I will make a clear and reasonable daily plan first. On school days, I will finish my homework and review my schoolwork carefully as soon as I get home, then spend 20 to 30 minutes feeding, playing with or walking my pet. This process can help me shake off the tiredness from long hours of study and relax my mind. When I need to prepare for important exams, I will ask my parents to help take care of the pet for a short period. Actually, staying with the lovely pet can reduce my study pressure a lot, and make me more energetic to focus on my later study. In this way, I can take good care of my pet and won't fall behind on my schoolwork.
【答案】If I have the opportunity to keep a pet, I will make a clear and reasonable daily plan first. On school days, I will finish my homework and review my schoolwork carefully as soon as I get home, then spend 20 to 30 minutes feeding, playing with or walking my pet. This process can help me shake off the tiredness from long hours of study and relax my mind. When I need to prepare for important exams, I will ask my parents to help take care of the pet for a short period. Actually, staying with the lovely pet can reduce my study pressure a lot, and make me more energetic to focus on my later study. In this way, I can take good care of my pet and won't fall behind on my schoolwork.
【知识点】英语话题写作、逻辑表达
【点评】本题结合学生生活实际,考查学生的语言组织与逻辑思维能力,引导学生思考责任与规划的关系,内容贴近生活,易于学生展开表达。
【难度系数】0.5
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