雪可以给我们带来快乐,但同时我们也应该懂得如何在暴雪天气保护自己。请你结合下面图示信息,以“How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow”为题,根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,向校刊的英语专栏投稿。

要求:1. 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 90词左右(开头已经给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:cleats 防滑鞋
【写作指导】
本文是一篇材料作文,要求根据提示内容介绍如何在暴雪天气保护自己,适当增加细节:① 人称:用第一人称;② 时态:用一般现在时;③ 首先引出话题;然后详细介绍在暴雪天气保护自己的措施;最后书写结语。
【写作提纲】

【小试身手】
How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow
It is quite normal to have heavy snow in winter.
要求:1. 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 90词左右(开头已经给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:cleats 防滑鞋
【写作指导】
本文是一篇材料作文,要求根据提示内容介绍如何在暴雪天气保护自己,适当增加细节:① 人称:用第一人称;② 时态:用一般现在时;③ 首先引出话题;然后详细介绍在暴雪天气保护自己的措施;最后书写结语。
【写作提纲】
【小试身手】
How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow
It is quite normal to have heavy snow in winter.
However, when there is heavy snow, it is also very dangerous, such as falling down and so on.
How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow? Here are some suggestions. First, stay away from snow-covered trees and billboards because they can fall and hurt people.
Second, it is best to wear cleats to avoid falling down. Third, we had better not go out. If we have to go out, we must pay attention to safety.
Also, we must be careful of holes under the snow.
Snow can bring us happiness if we learn to protect ourselves.
答案
How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow
It is quite normal to have heavy snow in winter. However, when there is heavy snow, it is also very dangerous, such as falling down and so on.
How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow? Here are some suggestions. First, stay away from snow-covered trees and billboards because they can fall and hurt people. Second, it is best to wear cleats to avoid falling down. Third, we had better not go out. If we have to go out, we must pay attention to safety. Also, we must be careful of holes under the snow.
Snow can bring us happiness if we learn to protect ourselves.
It is quite normal to have heavy snow in winter. However, when there is heavy snow, it is also very dangerous, such as falling down and so on.
How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow? Here are some suggestions. First, stay away from snow-covered trees and billboards because they can fall and hurt people. Second, it is best to wear cleats to avoid falling down. Third, we had better not go out. If we have to go out, we must pay attention to safety. Also, we must be careful of holes under the snow.
Snow can bring us happiness if we learn to protect ourselves.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题为暴雪天气的自我保护,要求用第一人称、一般现在时,90词左右。解题思路:1. 承接开头引出暴雪天气的危险性;2. 分点阐述保护措施(远离积雪树木/广告牌、穿防滑鞋、尽量不外出、注意雪下的洞);3. 结尾总结,强调安全才能享受雪的快乐,确保包含所有提示信息,适当补充细节。
【解析】写作时先承接开头,点明暴雪天气的危险;再分条列出保护措施:远离积雪覆盖的树木和广告牌避免被砸,穿防滑鞋防摔倒,尽量不外出,外出时注意雪下的坑;最后总结呼应主题,符合字数、时态、人称要求,使用参考词汇cleats。
【答案】How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow
It is quite normal to have heavy snow in winter. However, when there is heavy snow, it is also very dangerous, such as falling down and so on.
How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow? Here are some suggestions. First, stay away from snow-covered trees and billboards because they can fall and hurt people. Second, it is best to wear cleats to avoid falling down. Third, we had better not go out. If we have to go out, we must pay attention to safety. Also, we must be careful of holes under the snow.
Snow can bring us happiness if we learn to protect ourselves.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、话题作文、词汇运用
【点评】本文紧扣主题,结构清晰,分点明确地给出暴雪天气的自我保护方法,语言简洁规范,符合字数要求,时态、人称正确,适当补充细节,符合校刊投稿的要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时先承接开头,点明暴雪天气的危险;再分条列出保护措施:远离积雪覆盖的树木和广告牌避免被砸,穿防滑鞋防摔倒,尽量不外出,外出时注意雪下的坑;最后总结呼应主题,符合字数、时态、人称要求,使用参考词汇cleats。
【答案】How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow
It is quite normal to have heavy snow in winter. However, when there is heavy snow, it is also very dangerous, such as falling down and so on.
How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow? Here are some suggestions. First, stay away from snow-covered trees and billboards because they can fall and hurt people. Second, it is best to wear cleats to avoid falling down. Third, we had better not go out. If we have to go out, we must pay attention to safety. Also, we must be careful of holes under the snow.
Snow can bring us happiness if we learn to protect ourselves.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、话题作文、词汇运用
【点评】本文紧扣主题,结构清晰,分点明确地给出暴雪天气的自我保护方法,语言简洁规范,符合字数要求,时态、人称正确,适当补充细节,符合校刊投稿的要求。
【难度系数】0.6
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