2026年考必胜江苏省小学毕业升学考试试卷精选六年级英语第193页答案
六、书面表达。(10分)
每个人都有自己的梦想。有的人想成为科学家,有的人想成为医生……梦想或大或小,因人而异。你的梦想是什么呢?请以"My dream"为题,写一写你的梦想。
要求:1. 包含思维导图中3个方面的要点,并适当发挥想象;2. 条理清晰,语法正确,语句通顺,用词恰当;3. 书写工整规范,正确使用标点符号;4. 不少于50个单词。

My dream





答案

六、One possible version:
My dream
Everyone has a dream. My dream is to
become a policeman, because I admire their
courage. They are always ready to protect
people and keep them safe.
To achieve my dream, I need to work hard.
First, I will study all my subjects carefully at
school, especially PE. Second, I'll try to join in
some activities that can improve my ability to
solve problems. Besides, I'll read books about
policemen to learn more about their work.
I believe that as long as I keep working
hard, my dream will come true one day.

解析

【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,要求以“My dream”为题,需覆盖思维导图的三个核心要点(What:梦想是什么、Why:为什么有这个梦想、How:如何实现梦想),同时满足字数、语法、语句通顺等要求。解题思路:1. 确定具体梦想,明确What部分;2. 结合自身感受说明选择该梦想的原因,对应Why部分;3. 列举实现梦想的具体方法,对应How部分;最后表达对实现梦想的信心,确保内容完整、符合要求。
【解析】写作步骤:1. 开篇点题,引出每个人都有梦想,明确自己的梦想是成为警察(对应What);2. 阐述原因:敬佩警察的勇气,他们时刻准备保护人民、保障安全(对应Why);3. 说明实现方法:在校认真学习各科(尤其是体育),参加提升解决问题能力的活动,阅读警察相关书籍(对应How);4. 结尾表达坚持努力就能实现梦想的信念,确保语句通顺、语法正确,满足字数要求。
【答案】My dream
Everyone has a dream. My dream is to become a policeman, because I admire their courage. They are always ready to protect people and keep them safe.
To achieve my dream, I need to work hard. First, I will study all my subjects carefully at school, especially PE. Second, I'll try to join in some activities that can improve my ability to solve problems. Besides, I'll read books about policemen to learn more about their work.
I believe that as long as I keep working hard, my dream will come true one day.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文、要点写作
【点评】该范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖思维导图的三个核心要点,条理清晰,语法准确,用词恰当,符合初中英语书面表达的规范,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.7