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话题概述
本单元的主题是“动物朋友”，要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型介绍动物。与此相关的写作维度有：①介绍自己的宠物；②介绍某一种动物。
考查学生介绍动物的文章的命题方式有多种，如：根据文字叙述、表格信息、发帖、回帖和思维导图等，写一篇说明文或记叙文、回一封信、发一封电子邮件等。通常要介绍：宠物的外貌和生活习性、宠物的特别之处、对宠物的照顾和相互之间的亲密关系、说明某一种动物的现状并呼吁保护动物等。
写作实例
动物与人类的生活息息相关，人类应该关爱动物。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“My animal friend”的征文比赛，请你写一篇90词左右的短文参赛。短文包括以下内容：
1. 动物的名称和外貌 2. 动物的生活习性 3. 你喜欢的原因
My animal friend
审题指导
1. 体裁：说明文 2. 时态：以一般现在时为主 3. 人称：以第三人称为主
4. 必备词汇：①a lovely dog named... 一只名叫……的可爱小狗 ②black and brown fur 黑色与棕色相间的毛 ③like eating chicken and beef 爱吃鸡肉和牛肉 ④take him out for a walk 带它出去散步 ⑤run after 追逐 ⑥the cleverest animal 最聪明的动物 ⑦do wonderful tricks 会表演精彩把戏 ⑧have so much fun together 一起玩得很开心
谋篇布局
佳作剖析
教材原文
P60 And he likes to run after me in the open air.
P61 He is happy all the time.
P58 My dog is the cleverest animal of all...He can do wonderful tricks.
P66 If I am down, Teddy will stay next to me and help me relax...We have so much fun together.
优秀范文
My animal friend
My animal friend is a lovely dog named Teddy①. He has black and brown fur and① his legs are very short.
Teddy likes eating chicken and beef very much. I often take him out for a walk because he doesn't like to stay at home alone. He likes to run after② me in the open air②. He is happy all the time.②
My dog is the cleverest③ animal of all. He can do wonderful tricks. If I am down, Teddy will stay next to me and help me relax.③ We have so much fun together.
亮点评析
①该段恰当地使用过去分词短语以及并列句，介绍动物的名称和外貌。
②该段恰当地使用所学短语和句子，描述动物的特性。
③该段使用最高级和复合句，说明喜欢Teddy的原因。
各空对应答案（按顺序）
1. a lovely dog named Teddy
2. black and brown fur; are short and strong
3. chicken and beef; take him out for a walk; he needs much exercise
4. run after cats; very naughty
5. the cleverest animal; do wonderful tricks
6. feel sad; stay with me and cheer me up; so much fun together
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①colourful feathers 色彩斑斓的羽毛 ②gentle and lovely 温顺可爱 ③enjoy many kinds of fruits 喜欢多种水果 ④feed them 喂它们 ⑤take good care of it 好好照料它 ⑥We should try our best to protect these wonderful birds. 我们应该尽最大的努力保护这些漂亮的鸟类。⑦Rabbits are cute, quiet and easy to look after. 兔子可爱、安静且易于照料。
写作实战
答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D29
「2025江苏连云港月考」
请根据以下要点提示，写一篇关于你最喜欢的动物——大熊猫的短文。要点：
1. 大熊猫是中国的象征之一，黑白相间，看起来很可爱；
2. 它们生活在中国四川、陕西等地的森林和山区；
3. 它们喜欢吃竹子，每天花很多时间吃东西；
4. 大熊猫是中国国宝（national treasure），友谊（friendship）的象征，目前仅存大约2000只，因此我们会尽力保护它们。
要求：1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；2. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My favorite animals—giant pandas
There are many kinds of animals in the world,
本单元的主题是“动物朋友”，要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型介绍动物。与此相关的写作维度有：①介绍自己的宠物；②介绍某一种动物。
考查学生介绍动物的文章的命题方式有多种，如：根据文字叙述、表格信息、发帖、回帖和思维导图等，写一篇说明文或记叙文、回一封信、发一封电子邮件等。通常要介绍：宠物的外貌和生活习性、宠物的特别之处、对宠物的照顾和相互之间的亲密关系、说明某一种动物的现状并呼吁保护动物等。
写作实例
动物与人类的生活息息相关，人类应该关爱动物。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“My animal friend”的征文比赛，请你写一篇90词左右的短文参赛。短文包括以下内容：
1. 动物的名称和外貌 2. 动物的生活习性 3. 你喜欢的原因
My animal friend
审题指导
1. 体裁：说明文 2. 时态：以一般现在时为主 3. 人称：以第三人称为主
4. 必备词汇：①a lovely dog named... 一只名叫……的可爱小狗 ②black and brown fur 黑色与棕色相间的毛 ③like eating chicken and beef 爱吃鸡肉和牛肉 ④take him out for a walk 带它出去散步 ⑤run after 追逐 ⑥the cleverest animal 最聪明的动物 ⑦do wonderful tricks 会表演精彩把戏 ⑧have so much fun together 一起玩得很开心
谋篇布局
佳作剖析
教材原文
P60 And he likes to run after me in the open air.
P61 He is happy all the time.
P58 My dog is the cleverest animal of all...He can do wonderful tricks.
P66 If I am down, Teddy will stay next to me and help me relax...We have so much fun together.
优秀范文
My animal friend
My animal friend is a lovely dog named Teddy①. He has black and brown fur and① his legs are very short.
Teddy likes eating chicken and beef very much. I often take him out for a walk because he doesn't like to stay at home alone. He likes to run after② me in the open air②. He is happy all the time.②
My dog is the cleverest③ animal of all. He can do wonderful tricks. If I am down, Teddy will stay next to me and help me relax.③ We have so much fun together.
亮点评析
①该段恰当地使用过去分词短语以及并列句，介绍动物的名称和外貌。
②该段恰当地使用所学短语和句子，描述动物的特性。
③该段使用最高级和复合句，说明喜欢Teddy的原因。
各空对应答案（按顺序）
1. a lovely dog named Teddy
2. black and brown fur; are short and strong
3. chicken and beef; take him out for a walk; he needs much exercise
4. run after cats; very naughty
5. the cleverest animal; do wonderful tricks
6. feel sad; stay with me and cheer me up; so much fun together
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①colourful feathers 色彩斑斓的羽毛 ②gentle and lovely 温顺可爱 ③enjoy many kinds of fruits 喜欢多种水果 ④feed them 喂它们 ⑤take good care of it 好好照料它 ⑥We should try our best to protect these wonderful birds. 我们应该尽最大的努力保护这些漂亮的鸟类。⑦Rabbits are cute, quiet and easy to look after. 兔子可爱、安静且易于照料。
写作实战
答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D29
「2025江苏连云港月考」
请根据以下要点提示，写一篇关于你最喜欢的动物——大熊猫的短文。要点：
1. 大熊猫是中国的象征之一，黑白相间，看起来很可爱；
2. 它们生活在中国四川、陕西等地的森林和山区；
3. 它们喜欢吃竹子，每天花很多时间吃东西；
4. 大熊猫是中国国宝（national treasure），友谊（friendship）的象征，目前仅存大约2000只，因此我们会尽力保护它们。
要求：1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；2. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My favorite animals—giant pandas
There are many kinds of animals in the world,
but my favorite is the giant panda. Giant pandas are one of China's symbols. They have black and white fur and look very cute. Giant pandas live in forests and mountains in Sichuan, Shaanxi and so on in China. They love eating bamboo. They spend much time eating it every day.
Giant pandas are China's national treasures. They are also a symbol of friendship. But now, there are only about 2,000 giant pandas left. So we must try our best to protect them. Let's work together to keep them safe.
答案
【解析】：这是一篇说明文写作题，需按照“名称外貌-生活习性-喜欢的原因”的三段式结构完成创作，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。写作时要结合题目给出的框架提示和必备词汇，贴合译林版七年级下册Unit5的知识点，保证语句通顺、逻辑连贯，字数控制在90词左右。【答案】：完整作文My animal friendMy animal friend is a lovely dog named Teddy.He has black and brown fur and his legs are short and strong.Teddy likes eating chicken and beef. I often take him out for a walk because he needs much exercise.He likes to run after cats. He is very naughty.My dog is the cleverest animal of all. He can do wonderful tricks.If I feel sad, Teddy will stay with me and cheer me up. We have so much fun together.各空对应答案（按顺序）1. a lovely dog named Teddy2. black and brown fur; are short and strong3. chicken and beef; take him out for a walk; he needs much exercise4. run after cats; very naughty5. the cleverest animal; do wonderful tricks6. feel sad; stay with me and cheer me up; so much fun together
@@Unit 5 主题写作专项基础版范文My favorite animals—giant pandasThere are many kinds of animals in the world, but my favorite is the giant panda. Giant pandas are one of China's symbols. They have black and white fur and look very cute. Giant pandas live in forests and mountains in Sichuan, Shaanxi and so on in China. They love eating bamboo. They spend much time eating it every day.Giant pandas are China's national treasures. They are also a symbol of friendship. But now, there are only about 2,000 giant pandas left. So we must try our best to protect them. Let's work together to keep them safe.进阶版范文My favorite animals—giant pandasThere are many kinds of animals in the world, but my favorite is the giant panda. Giant pandas are one of China's symbols, with their cute black-and-white fur. They mainly live in the forests and mountains of Sichuan and Shaanxi in China.Bamboo is their favorite food. They spend most of their time eating every day. They are China's national treasures and represent friendship. Sadly, there are only about 2,000 giant pandas left in the world, so we must do our best to protect them. Saving them is important for everyone. I hope these lovely animals can live happily forever!
@@Unit 5 主题写作专项基础版范文My favorite animals—giant pandasThere are many kinds of animals in the world, but my favorite is the giant panda. Giant pandas are one of China's symbols. They have black and white fur and look very cute. Giant pandas live in forests and mountains in Sichuan, Shaanxi and so on in China. They love eating bamboo. They spend much time eating it every day.Giant pandas are China's national treasures. They are also a symbol of friendship. But now, there are only about 2,000 giant pandas left. So we must try our best to protect them. Let's work together to keep them safe.进阶版范文My favorite animals—giant pandasThere are many kinds of animals in the world, but my favorite is the giant panda. Giant pandas are one of China's symbols, with their cute black-and-white fur. They mainly live in the forests and mountains of Sichuan and Shaanxi in China.Bamboo is their favorite food. They spend most of their time eating every day. They are China's national treasures and represent friendship. Sadly, there are only about 2,000 giant pandas left in the world, so we must do our best to protect them. Saving them is important for everyone. I hope these lovely animals can live happily forever!
解析
【分析】首先审题，明确体裁为说明文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主；需覆盖所有给定要点：大熊猫是中国的象征之一、黑白外貌、生活在中国四川/陕西等地的森林山区、爱吃竹子且每天花大量时间进食、是中国国宝及友谊象征、现存数量少需保护；再按逻辑顺序组织内容，确保语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】承接开头引出最喜欢的动物是大熊猫，依次介绍其外貌特征、生活区域、食性，再说明其身份意义及保护呼吁，运用一般现在时准确表达，串联要点形成连贯短文。
【答案】My favorite animals—giant pandas
There are many kinds of animals in the world, but my favorite is the giant panda. Giant pandas are one of China's symbols. They have black and white fur and look very cute. Giant pandas live in forests and mountains in Sichuan, Shaanxi and so on in China. They love eating bamboo. They spend much time eating it every day. Giant pandas are China's national treasures. They are also a symbol of friendship. But now, there are only about 2,000 giant pandas left. So we must try our best to protect them. Let's work together to keep them safe.
【知识点】英语说明文写作；动物话题词汇；一般现在时运用
【点评】本题考查学生对动物主题的写作能力，要求覆盖所有给定要点，语言通顺连贯，符合单元知识点要求，能体现学生对动物相关话题的表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】承接开头引出最喜欢的动物是大熊猫，依次介绍其外貌特征、生活区域、食性，再说明其身份意义及保护呼吁，运用一般现在时准确表达，串联要点形成连贯短文。
【答案】My favorite animals—giant pandas
There are many kinds of animals in the world, but my favorite is the giant panda. Giant pandas are one of China's symbols. They have black and white fur and look very cute. Giant pandas live in forests and mountains in Sichuan, Shaanxi and so on in China. They love eating bamboo. They spend much time eating it every day. Giant pandas are China's national treasures. They are also a symbol of friendship. But now, there are only about 2,000 giant pandas left. So we must try our best to protect them. Let's work together to keep them safe.
【知识点】英语说明文写作；动物话题词汇；一般现在时运用
【点评】本题考查学生对动物主题的写作能力，要求覆盖所有给定要点，语言通顺连贯，符合单元知识点要求，能体现学生对动物相关话题的表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5
