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我们的祖国地大物博，景色宜人，吸引了不少外国友人，你能在见面会上向他们介绍一下中国吗？请根据下面的思维导图用英语写一篇发言稿。要求语句通顺，书写规范，不少于 50 词。
China is a great country.
China is a great country.
There are lots of interesting places, such as the Great Wall and the Bund.
The scenery is very beautiful.
There are many big cities in China. Beijing is the capital of China.
Shanghai is a big modern city. Lots of visitors come to visit them every year.
You can eat some delicious food, like jiaozi and tangyuan.
Table tennis is very popular throughout China. Many people play table tennis in their spare time. Welcome to China!
答案
写作方法提优
China is a great country. There are lots of interesting places, such as the Great Wall and the Bund. The scenery is very beautiful. There are many big cities in China. Beijing is the capital of China. Shanghai is a big modern city. Lots of visitors come to visit them every year. You can eat some delicious food, like jiaozi and tangyuan. Table tennis is very popular throughout China. Many people play table tennis in their spare time.
Welcome to China!
China is a great country. There are lots of interesting places, such as the Great Wall and the Bund. The scenery is very beautiful. There are many big cities in China. Beijing is the capital of China. Shanghai is a big modern city. Lots of visitors come to visit them every year. You can eat some delicious food, like jiaozi and tangyuan. Table tennis is very popular throughout China. Many people play table tennis in their spare time.
Welcome to China!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先明确写作主题是向外国友人介绍中国的发言稿，语气要友好热情。先梳理思维导图给出的所有核心要点，一共分为四大类：名胜景点、代表城市、特色美食、流行运动。我们可以顺着这个分类顺序组织内容：首先承接题目给出的开头句，先介绍中国的知名景点，举例长城、外滩，简单描述景色优美；接下来介绍中国的代表城市，说明北京是首都、上海是现代化大都市；之后介绍中国的特色美食，举例饺子、汤圆；再介绍中国流行的乒乓球运动；最后补充欢迎大家来中国游玩的收尾句，保证语句通顺，字数达到50词以上，不遗漏核心要点即可。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，先介绍景点类内容：用There be句型引出大量有趣的景点，列举长城、外滩，补充景色优美的简单描述。
2. 接下来介绍城市类内容：引出中国有很多大城市，分别说明北京是中国的首都，上海是现代化大都市，补充每年都有大量游客前来游览的描述。
3. 之后介绍美食类内容：说明中国有很多美味的食物，列举饺子、汤圆两类特色食物。
4. 再介绍运动类内容：说明乒乓球在中国非常受欢迎，很多人会在空闲时间打乒乓球。
5. 最后补充欢迎语收尾，整体连贯流畅，符合发言稿的场景要求。
完整范文如下：
China is a great country. There are lots of interesting places, such as the Great Wall and the Bund. The scenery is very beautiful. There are many big cities in China. Beijing is the capital of China. Shanghai is a big modern city. Lots of visitors come to visit them every year. You can eat some delicious food, like jiaozi and tangyuan. Table tennis is very popular throughout China. Many people play table tennis in their spare time.
Welcome to China!
【答案】
China is a great country. There are lots of interesting places, such as the Great Wall and the Bund. The scenery is very beautiful. There are many big cities in China. Beijing is the capital of China. Shanghai is a big modern city. Lots of visitors come to visit them every year. You can eat some delicious food, like jiaozi and tangyuan. Table tennis is very popular throughout China. Many people play table tennis in their spare time.
Welcome to China!
【知识点】
英语发言稿写作
事物分类表达
基础句型运用
【点评】
本题属于提示类介绍性写作，所有核心要点都在思维导图中明确给出，不需要学生额外构思复杂内容，只需要按照分类逻辑串联要点，适当补充简单的描述性语句，保证语句通顺无语法错误，就能完成符合要求的习作，能够很好地锻炼学生依托给定信息组织语篇的能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先明确写作主题是向外国友人介绍中国的发言稿，语气要友好热情。先梳理思维导图给出的所有核心要点，一共分为四大类：名胜景点、代表城市、特色美食、流行运动。我们可以顺着这个分类顺序组织内容：首先承接题目给出的开头句，先介绍中国的知名景点，举例长城、外滩，简单描述景色优美；接下来介绍中国的代表城市，说明北京是首都、上海是现代化大都市；之后介绍中国的特色美食，举例饺子、汤圆；再介绍中国流行的乒乓球运动；最后补充欢迎大家来中国游玩的收尾句，保证语句通顺，字数达到50词以上，不遗漏核心要点即可。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，先介绍景点类内容：用There be句型引出大量有趣的景点，列举长城、外滩，补充景色优美的简单描述。
2. 接下来介绍城市类内容：引出中国有很多大城市，分别说明北京是中国的首都，上海是现代化大都市，补充每年都有大量游客前来游览的描述。
3. 之后介绍美食类内容：说明中国有很多美味的食物，列举饺子、汤圆两类特色食物。
4. 再介绍运动类内容：说明乒乓球在中国非常受欢迎，很多人会在空闲时间打乒乓球。
5. 最后补充欢迎语收尾，整体连贯流畅，符合发言稿的场景要求。
完整范文如下：
China is a great country. There are lots of interesting places, such as the Great Wall and the Bund. The scenery is very beautiful. There are many big cities in China. Beijing is the capital of China. Shanghai is a big modern city. Lots of visitors come to visit them every year. You can eat some delicious food, like jiaozi and tangyuan. Table tennis is very popular throughout China. Many people play table tennis in their spare time.
Welcome to China!
【答案】
China is a great country. There are lots of interesting places, such as the Great Wall and the Bund. The scenery is very beautiful. There are many big cities in China. Beijing is the capital of China. Shanghai is a big modern city. Lots of visitors come to visit them every year. You can eat some delicious food, like jiaozi and tangyuan. Table tennis is very popular throughout China. Many people play table tennis in their spare time.
Welcome to China!
【知识点】
英语发言稿写作
事物分类表达
基础句型运用
【点评】
本题属于提示类介绍性写作，所有核心要点都在思维导图中明确给出，不需要学生额外构思复杂内容，只需要按照分类逻辑串联要点，适当补充简单的描述性语句，保证语句通顺无语法错误，就能完成符合要求的习作，能够很好地锻炼学生依托给定信息组织语篇的能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
