51. 音乐将世间万物带进了美好的时空。每每听到音乐,我们就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。请你根据以下提示内容,写一篇80词左右的短文参加学校的英语作文竞赛。
提示:(1)音乐使人充满活力,让人快乐;没有音乐,生活就没有乐趣;(2)你喜欢的音乐是什么?(3)……
提示:(1)音乐使人充满活力,让人快乐;没有音乐,生活就没有乐趣;(2)你喜欢的音乐是什么?(3)……
答案
One possible version:
I like music very much.It makes me happy and full of energy.When I am tired, it makes me feel relaxed.Music is very important in our life.If there is no music, our life won't be so interesting.Different people like different kinds of music.I like electronic music that is loud because it makes me excited.I also like music that I can dance to.The Cool Kids is my favourite song.
What about you? What kind of music do you like?
I like music very much.It makes me happy and full of energy.When I am tired, it makes me feel relaxed.Music is very important in our life.If there is no music, our life won't be so interesting.Different people like different kinds of music.I like electronic music that is loud because it makes me excited.I also like music that I can dance to.The Cool Kids is my favourite song.
What about you? What kind of music do you like?
解析
【分析】首先审题,明确题目要求是写一篇80词左右的英语短文参加英语作文竞赛,需涵盖三个提示内容:一是音乐的作用(使人充满活力、快乐,生活因音乐有乐趣);二是自己喜欢的音乐类型;三是补充具体相关内容(如喜欢的歌曲)。解题思路为:先开篇点明对音乐的喜爱,接着阐述音乐的作用,再说明自己喜欢的音乐类型及具体例子,最后可适当提问互动,确保内容完整、符合词数要求。
【解析】按照上述思路组织语言,紧扣提示点,用流畅的英语表达,控制词数在80词左右,形成完整的短文,涵盖所有要求的内容。
【答案】One possible version:
I like music very much.It makes me happy and full of energy.When I am tired, it makes me feel relaxed.Music is very important in our life.If there is no music, our life won't be so interesting.Different people like different kinds of music.I like electronic music that is loud because it makes me excited.I also like music that I can dance to.The Cool Kids is my favourite song.
What about you? What kind of music do you like?
【知识点】英语短文写作、音乐话题作文
【点评】这篇范文紧扣题目提示,结构清晰,语言自然流畅,准确表达了音乐的意义及个人对音乐的喜好,符合英语作文竞赛的写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照上述思路组织语言,紧扣提示点,用流畅的英语表达,控制词数在80词左右,形成完整的短文,涵盖所有要求的内容。
【答案】One possible version:
I like music very much.It makes me happy and full of energy.When I am tired, it makes me feel relaxed.Music is very important in our life.If there is no music, our life won't be so interesting.Different people like different kinds of music.I like electronic music that is loud because it makes me excited.I also like music that I can dance to.The Cool Kids is my favourite song.
What about you? What kind of music do you like?
【知识点】英语短文写作、音乐话题作文
【点评】这篇范文紧扣题目提示,结构清晰,语言自然流畅,准确表达了音乐的意义及个人对音乐的喜好,符合英语作文竞赛的写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6
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