六、书面表达。(10 分)
学校将开展“玩具分享会”活动,老师让同学们介绍自己心爱的玩具。请以“My lovely toy”为题写一篇作文,分享你的玩具。
要求:1. 语句通顺,书写规范;
2. 描述玩具的外貌(如眼睛、鼻子、头发等,至少 3 处);
3. 不少于 40 词;
4. 注意单词拼写、大小写和标点。
My lovely toy
学校将开展“玩具分享会”活动,老师让同学们介绍自己心爱的玩具。请以“My lovely toy”为题写一篇作文,分享你的玩具。
要求:1. 语句通顺,书写规范;
2. 描述玩具的外貌(如眼睛、鼻子、头发等,至少 3 处);
3. 不少于 40 词;
4. 注意单词拼写、大小写和标点。
My lovely toy
答案
范文:
My lovely toy
I have a lovely doll. Her name is Lily. She has big blue eyes and long golden hair. Her nose is small, and her mouth is like a cherry. She wears a pink dress and white shoes. I often play with her and comb her hair. She is my best friend.
My lovely toy
I have a lovely doll. Her name is Lily. She has big blue eyes and long golden hair. Her nose is small, and her mouth is like a cherry. She wears a pink dress and white shoes. I often play with her and comb her hair. She is my best friend.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“My lovely toy”,需围绕心爱的玩具展开。第一步确定要介绍的玩具(如洋娃娃),第二步按要求描写至少3处外貌(眼睛、头发、鼻子等),第三步补充玩具的穿着、与玩具的互动,最后表达对玩具的喜爱,确保语句通顺、词数达标。
【解析】按照“介绍玩具→外貌描写→穿着/互动→表达情感”的结构写作:先点明拥有的玩具及名字,再具体描写外貌细节,接着写玩具的穿着和日常互动,最后抒发喜爱之情,符合题目各项要求。
【答案】My lovely toy
I have a lovely doll. Her name is Lily. She has big blue eyes and long golden hair. Her nose is small, and her mouth is like a cherry. She wears a pink dress and white shoes. I often play with her and comb her hair. She is my best friend.
【知识点】英语话题书面表达、英语外貌描写运用
【点评】范文紧扣主题,准确描写玩具的多处外貌,语句通顺,符合词数要求,情感真挚,满足题目所有规定。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】按照“介绍玩具→外貌描写→穿着/互动→表达情感”的结构写作:先点明拥有的玩具及名字,再具体描写外貌细节,接着写玩具的穿着和日常互动,最后抒发喜爱之情,符合题目各项要求。
【答案】My lovely toy
I have a lovely doll. Her name is Lily. She has big blue eyes and long golden hair. Her nose is small, and her mouth is like a cherry. She wears a pink dress and white shoes. I often play with her and comb her hair. She is my best friend.
【知识点】英语话题书面表达、英语外貌描写运用
【点评】范文紧扣主题,准确描写玩具的多处外貌,语句通顺,符合词数要求,情感真挚,满足题目所有规定。
【难度系数】0.7
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