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七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
本周,学校生物社团交流活动的主题是“Amazing Plants and Animals”。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文,描述你心中最奇妙的植物或动物,谈谈它们与我们的关联,以及我们应该如何保护它们。
What plants or animals do you think are the most amazing?
How are you connected with them?
What can we do to protect them?
Write something more about them.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
There are so many amazing plants and animals.
本周,学校生物社团交流活动的主题是“Amazing Plants and Animals”。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文,描述你心中最奇妙的植物或动物,谈谈它们与我们的关联,以及我们应该如何保护它们。
What plants or animals do you think are the most amazing?
How are you connected with them?
What can we do to protect them?
Write something more about them.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
There are so many amazing plants and animals.
答案
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There are so many amazing plants and animals. In my heart, pandas are the most amazing animals. Pandas have a close connection with us. As China's national treasures, their cuteness attracts countless visitors. Also, seeing pandas in zoos always brings us great joy.
To protect them, we should protect their habitats. That means avoiding cutting down the bamboo forest to ensure they have enough food to eat. We can also support panda protection organisations by donating money.
Moreover, pandas are not only cute but also a symbol of peace. Their gentle nature makes them loved by people globally. Let's work together to give these pretty animals more love and care.
There are so many amazing plants and animals. In my heart, pandas are the most amazing animals. Pandas have a close connection with us. As China's national treasures, their cuteness attracts countless visitors. Also, seeing pandas in zoos always brings us great joy.
To protect them, we should protect their habitats. That means avoiding cutting down the bamboo forest to ensure they have enough food to eat. We can also support panda protection organisations by donating money.
Moreover, pandas are not only cute but also a symbol of peace. Their gentle nature makes them loved by people globally. Let's work together to give these pretty animals more love and care.
解析
【分析】本题是英语话题书面表达题，主题为“Amazing Plants and Animals”，需完成三个核心任务：描述心中最奇妙的动植物、说明其与人类的关联、提出保护措施。解题思路：① 选取熟悉且有丰富内容可写的对象（如大熊猫，是常见写作素材，兼具奇妙性与关联点）；② 承接给定开头，点明所选对象，介绍其奇妙特质（如国宝身份、可爱外形）；③ 阐述与人类的关联（如吸引游客、带来快乐、作为和平象征）；④ 具体说明保护方法（如保护栖息地、支持保护组织）；⑤ 控制词数100左右，语言通顺，不透露个人真实信息。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头句，明确写作对象：In my heart, pandas are the most amazing animals. 2. 说明关联：点明熊猫作为中国国宝，其可爱吸引无数游客，给人带来快乐，还是和平的象征；3. 提出保护措施：保护熊猫的栖息地，避免砍伐竹林以保障食物，支持熊猫保护组织；4. 收尾呼吁，增强感染力。全程注意词数要求，语言准确，结构清晰。
【答案】There are so many amazing plants and animals. In my heart, pandas are the most amazing animals. Pandas have a close connection with us. As China's national treasures, their cuteness attracts countless visitors. Also, seeing pandas in zoos always brings us great joy.
To protect them, we should protect their habitats. That means avoiding cutting down the bamboo forest to ensure they have enough food to eat. We can also support panda protection organisations by donating money.
Moreover, pandas are not only cute but also a symbol of peace. Their gentle nature makes them loved by people globally. Let's work together to give these pretty animals more love and care.
【知识点】英语话题写作；生态保护主题
【点评】本题贴近学生生活，话题明确，考查学生的英语语言运用能力与生态保护意识，是初中英语常见的书面表达题型，符合课标对学生写作能力的要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头句，明确写作对象：In my heart, pandas are the most amazing animals. 2. 说明关联：点明熊猫作为中国国宝，其可爱吸引无数游客，给人带来快乐，还是和平的象征；3. 提出保护措施：保护熊猫的栖息地，避免砍伐竹林以保障食物，支持熊猫保护组织；4. 收尾呼吁，增强感染力。全程注意词数要求，语言准确，结构清晰。
【答案】There are so many amazing plants and animals. In my heart, pandas are the most amazing animals. Pandas have a close connection with us. As China's national treasures, their cuteness attracts countless visitors. Also, seeing pandas in zoos always brings us great joy.
To protect them, we should protect their habitats. That means avoiding cutting down the bamboo forest to ensure they have enough food to eat. We can also support panda protection organisations by donating money.
Moreover, pandas are not only cute but also a symbol of peace. Their gentle nature makes them loved by people globally. Let's work together to give these pretty animals more love and care.
【知识点】英语话题写作；生态保护主题
【点评】本题贴近学生生活，话题明确，考查学生的英语语言运用能力与生态保护意识，是初中英语常见的书面表达题型，符合课标对学生写作能力的要求。
【难度系数】0.5
