写作典范
在成长的过程中，我们常常会遇到各种各样的困惑。每当此时，父母、老师或朋友便成了我们依赖与倾诉的对象。请你围绕下图所示的问题，讲述一次你与他（们）沟通的经历，以及你的感受。

注意：词数80左右，标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A Communication Experience
Communicating with people around us is very important in our daily life. If I face a problem，
【审题立意】
1. 审主题：讲述一次沟通经历
2. 审体裁：记叙文
3. 审人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主
4. 审时态：一般过去时
【思路点拨】

【佳作欣赏】
A Communication Experience
Communicating with people around us
is very important in our daily life. If I face a problem，I will share my thoughts and feelings with my parents. They will always help me go through my difficult times.
I still remember one experience last year. When I had English classes，I had difficulties in following my new teacher because she spoke too quickly. I was very worried and didn't know what to do. Luckily，I talked with my parents face to face in time about my problem and they advised me to ask the English teacher for help directly. Soon，my English teacher helped me make a personal study plan. That really worked the best!
I like to communicate with my parents and teachers and I often learn a lot from them. No sentences can fully describe my thanks to them.
写作应用
“A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.”这句谚语让我们体会到了朋友的珍贵之处。交流是我们收获珍贵友谊的重要途径。那么我们应如何与朋友交流，让友谊长存呢？请根据下面的图示，以“How to Communicate with Our Friends”为
题写一篇英语短文。

注意：词数80左右，标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Communicate with Our Friends
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. It's important for us to stick to our friendship with good communication. Here are some tips.

First, we should learn to become a good listener. If we pay attention to their words, we will easily find out our friends’ interests and the common points between us. Second, being polite is one of the keys to making the communication pleasant and meaningful. No one will say no to you if your words are full of respect. Last but not least, confidence from our hearts can offer us great strength to bring out the best in ourselves in front of our friends.
In a word, we should keep improving our skills in communication with our friends to make our friendship stronger.

【分析】
本题为英语建议类写作题，主题是“如何与朋友交流”，要求围绕主题补充内容，词数80左右，开头已给出。解题思路：首先明确文体为建议性议论文，时态用一般现在时；其次围绕核心主题选取合理的建议要点；接着用连接词串联要点，每个要点简单说明作用；最后总结呼应主题，确保语言准确流畅，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 确定文体为建议性议论文，时态采用一般现在时；2. 围绕“如何与朋友交流”的主题，选取三个合理建议点：做倾听者、讲礼貌、有自信；3. 用First、Second、Last but not least等连接词串联，每个要点简要说明其对友谊的作用；4. 结尾总结，呼应主题，控制词数在80左右，语言符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
First, we should learn to become a good listener. If we pay attention to their words, we will easily find out our friends’ interests and the common points between us. Second, being polite is one of the keys to making the communication pleasant and meaningful. No one will say no to you if your words are full of respect. Last but not least, confidence from our hearts can offer us great strength to bring out the best in ourselves in front of our friends.
In a word, we should keep improving our skills in communication with our friends to make our friendship stronger.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、沟通话题表达
【点评】
本题围绕“友谊与沟通”的常见话题，考查学生的英语写作能力，要求学生能围绕主题提出合理建议，逻辑清晰，语言简洁，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，注重实用性和语言组织能力。
【难度系数】
0.5