2026年考必胜江苏省小学毕业升学考试试卷精选六年级英语第35页答案
十、书面表达。(共7分)
每个人心中都会有梦想。请给你的朋友Jim写一封电子邮件,介绍你的梦想,并简单说说原
因以及如何努力实现梦想。
要求:1.条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,书写规范;
2.完成电子邮件所有内容;
3.邮件正文不少于7句话不包括已给出的句子。

答案

One possible version:
To: jim@example.com
Subject: My Dream of Being an Astronaut
Dear Jim,
I'm very happy to write this email to you.
My dream is to be an astronaut in the future.
I'm really interested in the mysterious space. I
want to fly a spaceship and see the beautiful
stars and planets. It must be amazing!
To make my dream come true, I will study
hard at school. I'll also do more sport to keep
my body strong. What's more, I'll read lots of
books about space.
I believe if I try my best, my dream will
come true one day.
Love,
Anna

解析

【分析】首先明确题目要求:给朋友Jim写电子邮件,需介绍自己的梦想,包含梦想内容、原因、实现方法,同时要符合邮件格式(填写To和Subject),正文不少于7句话,语句通顺、条理清晰。解题思路:第一步,确定邮件的收件人(To)和主题(Subject);第二步,承接已给出的开头句,点明自己的梦想;第三步,说明拥有该梦想的原因;第四步,阐述实现梦想的具体行动;第五步,结尾表达对梦想实现的信心,最后完成署名。
【解析】按照题目要求及邮件格式,具体写作步骤如下:1. 填写收件人(To)为jim@example.com;2. 填写主题(Subject)为My Dream of Being an Astronaut;3. 正文承接开头句,依次说明梦想是成为宇航员、原因是对神秘太空感兴趣、想驾驶飞船看星星和行星,以及实现方法是努力学习、锻炼身体、读太空相关书籍,最后表达信心;4. 结尾署名Anna。
【答案】To: jim@example.com
Subject: My Dream of Being an Astronaut
Dear Jim,
I'm very happy to write this email to you.
My dream is to be an astronaut in the future. I'm really interested in the mysterious space. I want to fly a spaceship and see the beautiful stars and planets. It must be amazing!
To make my dream come true, I will study hard at school. I'll also do more sport to keep my body strong. What's more, I'll read lots of books about space.
I believe if I try my best, my dream will come true one day.
Love,
Anna
【知识点】英语书面表达;电子邮件写作;梦想话题写作
【点评】本题围绕“梦想”话题考查学生的英语写作能力,要求学生掌握电子邮件的基本格式,清晰表达想法,包含梦想内容、原因及实现路径,符合初中英语写作的考查要求,注重语言的条理性与连贯性。
【难度系数】0.5