八、书面表达。(6分)
乐乐住在阳光街。今天他不舒服,有些牙疼。他乘地铁去医院。医生会给他提什么建议?想一想,写下来。
要求:根据中文提示并发挥合理想象写一段话,不少于6句话。
提示:Sunshine Street, feel, toothache, medicine, He should... He shouldn't...
乐乐住在阳光街。今天他不舒服,有些牙疼。他乘地铁去医院。医生会给他提什么建议?想一想,写下来。
要求:根据中文提示并发挥合理想象写一段话,不少于6句话。
提示:Sunshine Street, feel, toothache, medicine, He should... He shouldn't...
答案
Lele lives on Sunshine Street. He doesn't feel well today. He has a toothache. The hospital is far from his home, so he goes to the hospital by metro. The doctor tells Lele that he should take some medicine and brush his teeth in the morning and before bedtime. He shouldn't eat too many sweets either.
解析
【分析】
解题思路:首先明确题目要求:围绕乐乐牙疼就医的情景,结合给定提示词,用“He should/He shouldn't”结构写不少于6句话的短文。步骤:1. 介绍乐乐的住址、身体不适(牙疼)及去医院的交通方式;2. 展开医生的建议,分“应该做”和“不应该做”两部分,确保内容连贯、符合逻辑,满足句子数量要求。
【解析】
写作时需整合提示信息,运用提建议句型,内容贴近生活:先介绍乐乐的基本情况,再说明就医过程,最后写出医生的合理建议。正确范文如下:
Lele lives on Sunshine Street. He doesn't feel well today. He has a toothache. The hospital is far from his home, so he goes to the hospital by metro. The doctor tells Lele that he should take some medicine and brush his teeth in the morning and before bedtime. He shouldn't eat too many sweets either.
【答案】
Lele lives on Sunshine Street. He doesn't feel well today. He has a toothache. The hospital is far from his home, so he goes to the hospital by metro. The doctor tells Lele that he should take some medicine and brush his teeth in the morning and before bedtime. He shouldn't eat too many sweets either.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、提建议句型
【点评】
本题以日常就医为话题,考查学生对提示信息的整合能力和提建议句型的运用,贴近生活实际,符合小学英语写作的考查要求,需学生合理想象医生的建议,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
解题思路:首先明确题目要求:围绕乐乐牙疼就医的情景,结合给定提示词,用“He should/He shouldn't”结构写不少于6句话的短文。步骤:1. 介绍乐乐的住址、身体不适(牙疼)及去医院的交通方式;2. 展开医生的建议,分“应该做”和“不应该做”两部分,确保内容连贯、符合逻辑,满足句子数量要求。
【解析】
写作时需整合提示信息,运用提建议句型,内容贴近生活:先介绍乐乐的基本情况,再说明就医过程,最后写出医生的合理建议。正确范文如下:
Lele lives on Sunshine Street. He doesn't feel well today. He has a toothache. The hospital is far from his home, so he goes to the hospital by metro. The doctor tells Lele that he should take some medicine and brush his teeth in the morning and before bedtime. He shouldn't eat too many sweets either.
【答案】
Lele lives on Sunshine Street. He doesn't feel well today. He has a toothache. The hospital is far from his home, so he goes to the hospital by metro. The doctor tells Lele that he should take some medicine and brush his teeth in the morning and before bedtime. He shouldn't eat too many sweets either.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、提建议句型
【点评】
本题以日常就医为话题,考查学生对提示信息的整合能力和提建议句型的运用,贴近生活实际,符合小学英语写作的考查要求,需学生合理想象医生的建议,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
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