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十二、Writing. 书面表达。(9分)
学校即将举办主题为“All about me”的校园征文活动，同学们踊跃报名。以下是Li Ming的个人信息卡，请你和他一起完成本次征文活动的写稿工作吧！
要求:1. 语句通顺,语法正确,用词准确。2.参考信息卡内容,适当发挥。3.不少于50个词。
All about me
学校即将举办主题为“All about me”的校园征文活动，同学们踊跃报名。以下是Li Ming的个人信息卡，请你和他一起完成本次征文活动的写稿工作吧！
要求:1. 语句通顺,语法正确,用词准确。2.参考信息卡内容,适当发挥。3.不少于50个词。
All about me
Hello, my name is Li Ming. I am eleven years old. I was born in July. I like playing sports very much.
On weekends, I often play basketball with my friends.
Sometimes I watch TV at home.
My favourite programmes are sports programmes.
I like watching basketball games, and my favourite basketball star is Yao Ming.
Do you want to be my friend?
答案
【参考范文】 All about me
Hello, my name is Li Ming. I am eleven years old. I was born in July. I like playing sports very much. On weekends, I often play basketball with my friends. Sometimes I watch TV at home. My favourite programmes are sports programmes. I like watching basketball games, and my favourite basketball star is Yao Ming. Do you want to be my friend?
Hello, my name is Li Ming. I am eleven years old. I was born in July. I like playing sports very much. On weekends, I often play basketball with my friends. Sometimes I watch TV at home. My favourite programmes are sports programmes. I like watching basketball games, and my favourite basketball star is Yao Ming. Do you want to be my friend?
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求：以“All about me”为主题写校园征文，需结合Li Ming的信息卡内容，做到语句通顺、语法正确，不少于50词，可适当拓展内容。写作思路：1. 开头介绍核心个人基本信息（姓名、年龄、出生月份）；2. 围绕信息卡的爱好、周末活动展开，适当补充细节让内容更丰富；3. 介绍最喜欢的节目，添加相关细节；4. 结尾可邀请他人互动，完善文章结构，确保符合字数要求。
【解析】按照写作思路依次组织语言：先用问候语引出姓名，接着说明年龄和出生月份；然后结合信息卡的爱好“play sports”、周末活动“play basketball”，补充“和朋友一起打篮球”的细节；再介绍最喜欢的节目“sports programmes”，补充“喜欢篮球比赛、喜欢的球星”的内容；最后以邀请他人做朋友收尾，使文章完整，满足各项要求。
【答案】All about me
Hello, my name is Li Ming. I am eleven years old. I was born in July. I like playing sports very much. On weekends, I often play basketball with my friends. Sometimes I watch TV at home. My favourite programmes are sports programmes. I like watching basketball games, and my favourite basketball star is Yao Ming. Do you want to be my friend?
【知识点】英语书面表达；个人信息介绍；一般现在时
【点评】该作文紧扣主题，完整覆盖信息卡的所有内容，适当拓展了合理细节，语句通顺、语法正确，用词准确，符合征文的各项要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】按照写作思路依次组织语言：先用问候语引出姓名，接着说明年龄和出生月份；然后结合信息卡的爱好“play sports”、周末活动“play basketball”，补充“和朋友一起打篮球”的细节；再介绍最喜欢的节目“sports programmes”，补充“喜欢篮球比赛、喜欢的球星”的内容；最后以邀请他人做朋友收尾，使文章完整，满足各项要求。
【答案】All about me
Hello, my name is Li Ming. I am eleven years old. I was born in July. I like playing sports very much. On weekends, I often play basketball with my friends. Sometimes I watch TV at home. My favourite programmes are sports programmes. I like watching basketball games, and my favourite basketball star is Yao Ming. Do you want to be my friend?
【知识点】英语书面表达；个人信息介绍；一般现在时
【点评】该作文紧扣主题，完整覆盖信息卡的所有内容，适当拓展了合理细节，语句通顺、语法正确，用词准确，符合征文的各项要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.3
