十二、(地域特色) Liu Xiang计划制作英文短视频,并在分享会后续的线上展示环节介绍自己的家乡。请根据思维导图,以"Welcome to Yangzhou"为题撰写视频解说稿。(8分)
要求:1.内容丰富,条理清晰,选择2~3个方面来写,不少于5句话;
2.语句通顺,语法正确,不少于2种时态;
3.不能出现真实的人名和校名。

Welcome to Yangzhou
Yangzhou is a beautiful city in Jiangsu.
要求:1.内容丰富,条理清晰,选择2~3个方面来写,不少于5句话;
2.语句通顺,语法正确,不少于2种时态;
3.不能出现真实的人名和校名。
Welcome to Yangzhou
Yangzhou is a beautiful city in Jiangsu.
There are four seasons in Yangzhou. Spring is warm. Summer is hot. Autumn is cool. Winter is cold.
Yangzhou has many interesting places. Slender West Lake is very famous. Ge Garden is also a great place to visit.
Yangzhou has lots of delicious food, for example, Yangzhou fried rice and Fuchun steamed buns.
People in Yangzhou are very kind.
Welcome to Yangzhou!
答案
参考范文:
Welcome to Yangzhou
Yangzhou is a beautiful city in Jiangsu.
There are four seasons in Yangzhou. Spring
is warm. Summer is hot. Autumn is cool.
Winter is cold.
Yangzhou has many interesting places.
Slender West Lake is very famous. Ge
Garden is also a great place to visit.
Yangzhou has lots of delicious food,
for example, Yangzhou fried rice and
Fuchun steamed buns.
People in Yangzhou are very kind.
Welcome to Yangzhou!
Welcome to Yangzhou
Yangzhou is a beautiful city in Jiangsu.
There are four seasons in Yangzhou. Spring
is warm. Summer is hot. Autumn is cool.
Winter is cold.
Yangzhou has many interesting places.
Slender West Lake is very famous. Ge
Garden is also a great place to visit.
Yangzhou has lots of delicious food,
for example, Yangzhou fried rice and
Fuchun steamed buns.
People in Yangzhou are very kind.
Welcome to Yangzhou!
解析
【分析】本题要求以“Welcome to Yangzhou”为题撰写英文解说稿,需结合思维导图的三个核心方面(季节、景点、美食),满足内容丰富、条理清晰,不少于5句话,使用不少于2种时态,且不能出现真实人名和校名。解题思路:1. 开篇点明扬州的地理位置,引出写作主题;2. 选择2-3个方面展开,每个方面对应思维导图的具体内容,如季节介绍四季特点、景点列举瘦西湖和个园、美食提及扬州炒饭和富春汤包;3. 运用正确时态(以一般现在时为主),确保语句通顺,符合写作要求。
【解析】首先开篇介绍扬州的基本情况:Yangzhou is a beautiful city in Jiangsu.;接着从季节维度展开,介绍扬州四季的特点:There are four seasons in Yangzhou. Spring is warm. Summer is hot. Autumn is cool. Winter is cold.;然后介绍扬州的著名景点,结合思维导图内容:Yangzhou has many interesting places. Slender West Lake is very famous. Ge Garden is also a great place to visit.;再介绍扬州的特色美食,对应思维导图的内容:Yangzhou has lots of delicious food, for example, Yangzhou fried rice and Fuchun steamed buns.;最后发出邀请,呼应主题:Welcome to Yangzhou! 全文使用一般现在时,满足时态要求,内容覆盖思维导图要点,符合题目各项要求。
【答案】Welcome to Yangzhou
Yangzhou is a beautiful city in Jiangsu.
There are four seasons in Yangzhou. Spring is warm. Summer is hot. Autumn is cool. Winter is cold.
Yangzhou has many interesting places. Slender West Lake is very famous. Ge Garden is also a great place to visit.
Yangzhou has lots of delicious food, for example, Yangzhou fried rice and Fuchun steamed buns.
People in Yangzhou are very kind.
Welcome to Yangzhou!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时
【点评】本题结合地域特色,以思维导图为载体考察学生的英语写作能力,要求学生整合信息、组织语言,符合初中英语写作的考察方向,注重内容的贴合性与语言的规范性。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先开篇介绍扬州的基本情况:Yangzhou is a beautiful city in Jiangsu.;接着从季节维度展开,介绍扬州四季的特点:There are four seasons in Yangzhou. Spring is warm. Summer is hot. Autumn is cool. Winter is cold.;然后介绍扬州的著名景点,结合思维导图内容:Yangzhou has many interesting places. Slender West Lake is very famous. Ge Garden is also a great place to visit.;再介绍扬州的特色美食,对应思维导图的内容:Yangzhou has lots of delicious food, for example, Yangzhou fried rice and Fuchun steamed buns.;最后发出邀请,呼应主题:Welcome to Yangzhou! 全文使用一般现在时,满足时态要求,内容覆盖思维导图要点,符合题目各项要求。
【答案】Welcome to Yangzhou
Yangzhou is a beautiful city in Jiangsu.
There are four seasons in Yangzhou. Spring is warm. Summer is hot. Autumn is cool. Winter is cold.
Yangzhou has many interesting places. Slender West Lake is very famous. Ge Garden is also a great place to visit.
Yangzhou has lots of delicious food, for example, Yangzhou fried rice and Fuchun steamed buns.
People in Yangzhou are very kind.
Welcome to Yangzhou!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时
【点评】本题结合地域特色,以思维导图为载体考察学生的英语写作能力,要求学生整合信息、组织语言,符合初中英语写作的考察方向,注重内容的贴合性与语言的规范性。
【难度系数】0.5
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