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Ⅷ. 书面表达(共15分)
科技给我们的生活也带来了巨变。假如你是九年级一班学生王华，学校正在举办科技节，你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍身边的科技及其优点。
要求:1. 要点齐全,适当发挥;
2. 句子及篇章准确、连贯,书写规范;
3. 词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class 1, Grade 9. It's a great honour for me to speak here.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
科技给我们的生活也带来了巨变。假如你是九年级一班学生王华，学校正在举办科技节，你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍身边的科技及其优点。
要求:1. 要点齐全,适当发挥;
2. 句子及篇章准确、连贯,书写规范;
3. 词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class 1, Grade 9. It's a great honour for me to speak here.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
答案
One possible version:
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class 1, Grade 9. It's a great honour for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions. The smart phones bring both convenience and pleasure to our life. We can shop online, watch movies, and have video chats through them. As for the robots, they can help us with housework, which saves us a lot of time and energy. The high-speed trains greatly improve our travel experience as they travel fast and comfortably. The electric cars have also changed our life. They can not only save energy but also protect the environment to a great extent.
It is our country that brings these technological achievements to us. I'm really proud of my country.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
【审题】本文是一篇材料作文。本文时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主。写作时思维导图的提示全部要涵盖在内,可以从四个方面介绍身边的科技:智能手机、机器人、电动汽车以及高铁。针对细节可适当发挥。
【写作步骤】第一步,引入主题,科技改变生活;第二步,分别介绍四个要点,适当增加细节;第三步,表达自己对“科技改变生活”的看法,总结全文。
【短语积累】①As for 至于
②not only ... but also 不但……而且……
【高分句型】①As for the robots, they can help us with housework, which saves us a lot of time and energy.(定语从句)
②It is our country that brings these technological achievements to us.(强调句型)
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class 1, Grade 9. It's a great honour for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions. The smart phones bring both convenience and pleasure to our life. We can shop online, watch movies, and have video chats through them. As for the robots, they can help us with housework, which saves us a lot of time and energy. The high-speed trains greatly improve our travel experience as they travel fast and comfortably. The electric cars have also changed our life. They can not only save energy but also protect the environment to a great extent.
It is our country that brings these technological achievements to us. I'm really proud of my country.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
【审题】本文是一篇材料作文。本文时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主。写作时思维导图的提示全部要涵盖在内,可以从四个方面介绍身边的科技:智能手机、机器人、电动汽车以及高铁。针对细节可适当发挥。
【写作步骤】第一步,引入主题,科技改变生活;第二步,分别介绍四个要点,适当增加细节;第三步,表达自己对“科技改变生活”的看法,总结全文。
【短语积累】①As for 至于
②not only ... but also 不但……而且……
【高分句型】①As for the robots, they can help us with housework, which saves us a lot of time and energy.(定语从句)
②It is our country that brings these technological achievements to us.(强调句型)
解析
【分析】
本题是英语书面表达题，要求以九年级学生王华的身份参加“科技改变生活”主题演讲。解题思路：首先明确写作主题与身份，开头已给出，需先引入科技发展改变生活的核心；接着结合思维导图的四个要点（智能手机、机器人、高铁、电动汽车）分别介绍其优点，适当补充细节；最后表达对国家科技成就的自豪，符合演讲稿的语境，确保要点齐全、语言连贯、词数达标。
【解析】
1. 引入主题：说明科技发展给生活带来巨大变化，点出智能手机、机器人、高铁、电动汽车这四项核心科技产品；
2. 分述要点：分别介绍智能手机的便利（网购、视频通话等）、机器人帮忙做家务节省时间、高铁高速舒适提升旅行体验、电动车节能环保；
3. 升华总结：表达对国家科技成就的自豪，呼应主题，完成演讲。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class 1, Grade 9. It's a great honour for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions. The smart phones bring both convenience and pleasure to our life. We can shop online, watch movies, and have video chats through them. As for the robots, they can help us with housework, which saves us a lot of time and energy. The high-speed trains greatly improve our travel experience as they travel fast and comfortably. The electric cars have also changed our life. They can not only save energy but also protect the environment to a great extent.
It is our country that brings these technological achievements to us. I'm really proud of my country.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、科技主题写作、思维导图类作文
【点评】
本文紧扣“科技改变生活”主题，完整覆盖思维导图所有要点，运用了定语从句、强调句型等高分句式，语言连贯流畅，符合演讲稿的语境，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语书面表达题，要求以九年级学生王华的身份参加“科技改变生活”主题演讲。解题思路：首先明确写作主题与身份，开头已给出，需先引入科技发展改变生活的核心；接着结合思维导图的四个要点（智能手机、机器人、高铁、电动汽车）分别介绍其优点，适当补充细节；最后表达对国家科技成就的自豪，符合演讲稿的语境，确保要点齐全、语言连贯、词数达标。
【解析】
1. 引入主题：说明科技发展给生活带来巨大变化，点出智能手机、机器人、高铁、电动汽车这四项核心科技产品；
2. 分述要点：分别介绍智能手机的便利（网购、视频通话等）、机器人帮忙做家务节省时间、高铁高速舒适提升旅行体验、电动车节能环保；
3. 升华总结：表达对国家科技成就的自豪，呼应主题，完成演讲。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class 1, Grade 9. It's a great honour for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions. The smart phones bring both convenience and pleasure to our life. We can shop online, watch movies, and have video chats through them. As for the robots, they can help us with housework, which saves us a lot of time and energy. The high-speed trains greatly improve our travel experience as they travel fast and comfortably. The electric cars have also changed our life. They can not only save energy but also protect the environment to a great extent.
It is our country that brings these technological achievements to us. I'm really proud of my country.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、科技主题写作、思维导图类作文
【点评】
本文紧扣“科技改变生活”主题，完整覆盖思维导图所有要点，运用了定语从句、强调句型等高分句式，语言连贯流畅，符合演讲稿的语境，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.5
