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十二、每个人都有属于自己的重要日子,你的重要日子是什么呢?请以“My Important Day”为题,根据思维导图,用英语来介绍一下吧。
要求:时态正确,语句通顺,表达有条理,书写规范,不少于5句话。
My Important Day
要求:时态正确,语句通顺,表达有条理,书写规范,不少于5句话。
My Important Day
答案
十二、参考范文:
My Important Day
My important day is the Spring Festival.
It's in January or February. I usually eat jiaozi
with my family. I often get a lot of presents
from my parents and grandparents. I feel
happy. It is important for me because I can get
together with my family. I like the Spring
Festival. How about you?
My Important Day
My important day is the Spring Festival.
It's in January or February. I usually eat jiaozi
with my family. I often get a lot of presents
from my parents and grandparents. I feel
happy. It is important for me because I can get
together with my family. I like the Spring
Festival. How about you?
解析
【分析】
这是一篇提示类英语小作文，我们可以顺着思维导图给出的问题逐步构思：第一步先确定自己要介绍的重要日子，选择熟悉的主题比如春节很容易展开内容；第二步对应回答这个日子的具体时间；第三步列举当天你通常会进行的活动；第四步描述你在当天的心情感受；第五步说明这个日子对你而言很重要的原因，最后补充简单的收尾句，全程使用描述常规活动的一般现在时，保证内容覆盖所有提示点，满足不少于5句话的要求，语句通顺即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：直接说明自己的重要日子是什么，作为全文总起。
2. 交代时间：写出该节日对应的时间，回答思维导图里"When's your important day?"的问题。
3. 描述活动：列举当天和家人共度的常见活动，比如吃饺子、收长辈准备的礼物，回答"What do you do on that day?"的问题。
4. 表达感受：直接说明自己当天的心情，回答"How do you feel on that day?"的问题。
5. 说明原因：解释这个日子重要的核心理由，回答"Why is it important?"的问题。
6. 补充收尾：添加表达自己喜爱、询问对方情况的句子，让内容更完整，满足字数要求，全程核对语法，保证时态统一、语句通顺。
【答案】
My Important Day
My important day is the Spring Festival.
It's in January or February. I usually eat jiaozi with my family. I often get a lot of presents from my parents and grandparents. I feel happy. It is important for me because I can get together with my family. I like the Spring Festival. How about you?
【知识点】
英语命题写作，一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题属于小学阶段的基础英语写作题，思维导图已经把所有写作要点都以问题的形式给出，不需要学生自行构思复杂的内容框架，只需要结合自己熟悉的生活场景，逐个对应回答提示问题，适当补充简单语句，就可以轻松满足写作要求，注意避免单复数、介词类的小语法错误即可。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇提示类英语小作文，我们可以顺着思维导图给出的问题逐步构思：第一步先确定自己要介绍的重要日子，选择熟悉的主题比如春节很容易展开内容；第二步对应回答这个日子的具体时间；第三步列举当天你通常会进行的活动；第四步描述你在当天的心情感受；第五步说明这个日子对你而言很重要的原因，最后补充简单的收尾句，全程使用描述常规活动的一般现在时，保证内容覆盖所有提示点，满足不少于5句话的要求，语句通顺即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：直接说明自己的重要日子是什么，作为全文总起。
2. 交代时间：写出该节日对应的时间，回答思维导图里"When's your important day?"的问题。
3. 描述活动：列举当天和家人共度的常见活动，比如吃饺子、收长辈准备的礼物，回答"What do you do on that day?"的问题。
4. 表达感受：直接说明自己当天的心情，回答"How do you feel on that day?"的问题。
5. 说明原因：解释这个日子重要的核心理由，回答"Why is it important?"的问题。
6. 补充收尾：添加表达自己喜爱、询问对方情况的句子，让内容更完整，满足字数要求，全程核对语法，保证时态统一、语句通顺。
【答案】
My Important Day
My important day is the Spring Festival.
It's in January or February. I usually eat jiaozi with my family. I often get a lot of presents from my parents and grandparents. I feel happy. It is important for me because I can get together with my family. I like the Spring Festival. How about you?
【知识点】
英语命题写作，一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题属于小学阶段的基础英语写作题，思维导图已经把所有写作要点都以问题的形式给出，不需要学生自行构思复杂的内容框架，只需要结合自己熟悉的生活场景，逐个对应回答提示问题，适当补充简单语句，就可以轻松满足写作要求，注意避免单复数、介词类的小语法错误即可。
【难度系数】
0.7
十三、今天是端午节,也是吴凯最喜欢的节日。根据图片,请以“A Happy Dragon Boat Festival”为题,进行合理想象,写一写他们一家人的活动。
要求:语句通顺,意思连贯,不少于5句话。
提示:dragon boat races, rice dumplings, get together
A Happy Dragon Boat Festival
要求:语句通顺,意思连贯,不少于5句话。
提示:dragon boat races, rice dumplings, get together
A Happy Dragon Boat Festival
It's the Dragon Boat Festival today. Wu Kai is very excited because it's his favourite festival.
At nine in the morning, Wu Kai is watching the dragon boat races. He likes watching the races.
At noon, he is having lunch at his grandparents' home.
At 3:00 p. m. , he is making rice dumplings with his family. It's very interesting.
They're having a big dinner at 7:00 in the evening. Wu Kai is very happy today.
答案
十三、参考范文:
A Happy Dragon Boat Festival
It's the Dragon Boat Festival today. Wu Kai
is very excited because it's his favourite festival.
At nine in the morning, Wu Kai is watching the
dragon boat races. He likes watching the races.
At noon, he is having lunch at his grandparents'
home. At 3:00 p. m. , he is making rice dumplings
with his family. It's very interesting. They're
having a big dinner at 7:00 in the evening. Wu
Kai is very happy today.
A Happy Dragon Boat Festival
It's the Dragon Boat Festival today. Wu Kai
is very excited because it's his favourite festival.
At nine in the morning, Wu Kai is watching the
dragon boat races. He likes watching the races.
At noon, he is having lunch at his grandparents'
home. At 3:00 p. m. , he is making rice dumplings
with his family. It's very interesting. They're
having a big dinner at 7:00 in the evening. Wu
Kai is very happy today.
解析
【分析】
首先我们先梳理这道写作题的所有已知条件：主题是端午节，主角是吴凯，给出了三个明确的时间点、三幅对应场景的插图，还有三个核心提示词dragon boat races（龙舟比赛）、rice dumplings（粽子）、get together（团聚）。解题思路非常清晰：第一步先开篇点题，直接交代今天是端午节，呼应题目里“这是吴凯最喜欢的节日”的设定；第二步按照从早到晚的时间顺序，依次把三个时间点和对应的插图活动对应起来，自然融入给出的提示词汇：上午9点对应赛龙舟的图，写观看龙舟比赛的活动；下午3点对应包粽子的图，写和家人一起包粽子的内容；晚上7点对应全家聚餐的图，写全家团聚吃晚餐的场景；最后收尾总结，点出“开心”的核心主题，保证语句通顺，满足不少于5句话的要求即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：先点明节日背景，写出开篇句交代今天是端午节，吴凯很兴奋，这是他最喜欢的节日，直接呼应题干给出的设定，开门见山。
2. 描述上午的活动：结合9:00 in the morning的时间提示和赛龙舟的插图，描述吴凯在观看龙舟比赛，自然使用第一个提示词dragon boat races。
3. 过渡到下午的活动：先简单交代午间行程，再结合3:00 in the afternoon的时间提示和包粽子的插图，描述他和家人一起包粽子，过程十分有趣，自然使用第二个提示词rice dumplings。
4. 描述晚上的活动：结合7:00 in the evening的时间提示和全家聚餐的插图，描述全家人聚在一起享用丰盛的晚餐，体现提示词get together的全家团聚的含义。
5. 收尾点题：最后收尾点明吴凯今天非常开心，呼应标题里的Happy，全文语句连贯，所有要点全部覆盖，满足不少于5句话的写作要求。
【答案】
A Happy Dragon Boat Festival
It's the Dragon Boat Festival today. Wu Kai is very excited because it's his favourite festival. At nine in the morning, Wu Kai is watching the dragon boat races. He likes watching the races. At noon, he is having lunch at his grandparents' home. At 3:00 p. m. , he is making rice dumplings with his family. It's very interesting. They're having a big dinner at 7:00 in the evening. Wu Kai is very happy today.
【知识点】
节日英文表达
现在进行时用法
时间状语表述
【点评】
本题是小学英语情景叙事写作题，给出了明确的时间线索、插图提示和核心词汇，大幅降低了写作门槛，既考察学生对端午相关文化词汇的掌握，也锻炼学生按时间顺序组织叙事内容的逻辑能力，参考范文完全覆盖所有给定素材，逻辑流畅，符合小学阶段英语写作的表达要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先我们先梳理这道写作题的所有已知条件：主题是端午节，主角是吴凯，给出了三个明确的时间点、三幅对应场景的插图，还有三个核心提示词dragon boat races（龙舟比赛）、rice dumplings（粽子）、get together（团聚）。解题思路非常清晰：第一步先开篇点题，直接交代今天是端午节，呼应题目里“这是吴凯最喜欢的节日”的设定；第二步按照从早到晚的时间顺序，依次把三个时间点和对应的插图活动对应起来，自然融入给出的提示词汇：上午9点对应赛龙舟的图，写观看龙舟比赛的活动；下午3点对应包粽子的图，写和家人一起包粽子的内容；晚上7点对应全家聚餐的图，写全家团聚吃晚餐的场景；最后收尾总结，点出“开心”的核心主题，保证语句通顺，满足不少于5句话的要求即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：先点明节日背景，写出开篇句交代今天是端午节，吴凯很兴奋，这是他最喜欢的节日，直接呼应题干给出的设定，开门见山。
2. 描述上午的活动：结合9:00 in the morning的时间提示和赛龙舟的插图，描述吴凯在观看龙舟比赛，自然使用第一个提示词dragon boat races。
3. 过渡到下午的活动：先简单交代午间行程，再结合3:00 in the afternoon的时间提示和包粽子的插图，描述他和家人一起包粽子，过程十分有趣，自然使用第二个提示词rice dumplings。
4. 描述晚上的活动：结合7:00 in the evening的时间提示和全家聚餐的插图，描述全家人聚在一起享用丰盛的晚餐，体现提示词get together的全家团聚的含义。
5. 收尾点题：最后收尾点明吴凯今天非常开心，呼应标题里的Happy，全文语句连贯，所有要点全部覆盖，满足不少于5句话的写作要求。
【答案】
A Happy Dragon Boat Festival
It's the Dragon Boat Festival today. Wu Kai is very excited because it's his favourite festival. At nine in the morning, Wu Kai is watching the dragon boat races. He likes watching the races. At noon, he is having lunch at his grandparents' home. At 3:00 p. m. , he is making rice dumplings with his family. It's very interesting. They're having a big dinner at 7:00 in the evening. Wu Kai is very happy today.
【知识点】
节日英文表达
现在进行时用法
时间状语表述
【点评】
本题是小学英语情景叙事写作题，给出了明确的时间线索、插图提示和核心词汇，大幅降低了写作门槛，既考察学生对端午相关文化词汇的掌握，也锻炼学生按时间顺序组织叙事内容的逻辑能力，参考范文完全覆盖所有给定素材，逻辑流畅，符合小学阶段英语写作的表达要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
