十三、书面表达。(共7分)
王兵正在通过电子邮件向他的美国网友 Peter 介绍他最喜欢的中国传统节日。请你根据思维导图,帮助王兵完成电子邮件。
要求:语句通顺,语法正确,语义连贯,不少于50词。

Dear Peter,
How are you? My favourite Chinese festival is
Love,
王兵正在通过电子邮件向他的美国网友 Peter 介绍他最喜欢的中国传统节日。请你根据思维导图,帮助王兵完成电子邮件。
要求:语句通顺,语法正确,语义连贯,不少于50词。
Dear Peter,
How are you? My favourite Chinese festival is
the Mid-Autumn Festival. It's on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. On that day, all my family get together. We eat mooncakes and have a big dinner together. The mooncakes are delicious. We often enjoy the moon in the evening. We tell stories and read poems. It's a festival for a family reunion.
Love, Wang Bing
Love, Wang Bing
Love,
答案
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
How are you? My favourite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It's on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. On that day, all my family get together. We eat mooncakes and have a big dinner together. The mooncakes are delicious. We often enjoy the moon in the evening. We tell stories and read poems. It's a festival for a family reunion.
Love,
Wang Bing
Dear Peter,
How are you? My favourite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It's on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. On that day, all my family get together. We eat mooncakes and have a big dinner together. The mooncakes are delicious. We often enjoy the moon in the evening. We tell stories and read poems. It's a festival for a family reunion.
Love,
Wang Bing
解析
【分析】
解题时需紧扣题目要求:以邮件形式介绍最喜欢的中国传统节日,结合思维导图的Date(日期)、Food(食物)、Activity(活动)等模块,做到语句通顺、语法正确、语义连贯且不少于50词。第一步,选择熟悉的中国传统节日(如中秋节,具备明确的日期、特色食物和活动,适合写作);第二步,对应思维导图模块组织内容:先点明节日,再依次介绍日期、当天的活动、特色食物,补充相关细节使内容连贯;第三步,检查语法与字数,符合邮件写作格式。
【解析】
首先确定写作对象为中秋节(Mid-Autumn Festival),它是中国核心传统节日之一,有清晰的日期(农历八月十五)、特色食物(月饼)和传统活动。按照邮件结构:开头问候后点明最喜欢的节日,接着说明节日日期,再描述当天家人团聚、吃月饼、赏月、讲故事等活动,最后用礼貌用语收尾。写作时使用一般现在时描述节日常规习俗,确保语句符合英语表达习惯,满足字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
How are you? My favourite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It's on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. On that day, all my family get together. We eat mooncakes and have a big dinner together. The mooncakes are delicious. We often enjoy the moon in the evening. We tell stories and read poems. It's a festival for a family reunion.
Love,
Wang Bing
【知识点】
英语书面表达、中国传统节日英语表达、邮件写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查英语书面表达能力,既考查学生对中国传统节日相关英语词汇、表达的掌握,又要求学生掌握邮件的基本写作格式,引导学生用英语传播中国文化,符合英语学科的交际性与文化性要求,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
解题时需紧扣题目要求:以邮件形式介绍最喜欢的中国传统节日,结合思维导图的Date(日期)、Food(食物)、Activity(活动)等模块,做到语句通顺、语法正确、语义连贯且不少于50词。第一步,选择熟悉的中国传统节日(如中秋节,具备明确的日期、特色食物和活动,适合写作);第二步,对应思维导图模块组织内容:先点明节日,再依次介绍日期、当天的活动、特色食物,补充相关细节使内容连贯;第三步,检查语法与字数,符合邮件写作格式。
【解析】
首先确定写作对象为中秋节(Mid-Autumn Festival),它是中国核心传统节日之一,有清晰的日期(农历八月十五)、特色食物(月饼)和传统活动。按照邮件结构:开头问候后点明最喜欢的节日,接着说明节日日期,再描述当天家人团聚、吃月饼、赏月、讲故事等活动,最后用礼貌用语收尾。写作时使用一般现在时描述节日常规习俗,确保语句符合英语表达习惯,满足字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
How are you? My favourite Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It's on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. On that day, all my family get together. We eat mooncakes and have a big dinner together. The mooncakes are delicious. We often enjoy the moon in the evening. We tell stories and read poems. It's a festival for a family reunion.
Love,
Wang Bing
【知识点】
英语书面表达、中国传统节日英语表达、邮件写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查英语书面表达能力,既考查学生对中国传统节日相关英语词汇、表达的掌握,又要求学生掌握邮件的基本写作格式,引导学生用英语传播中国文化,符合英语学科的交际性与文化性要求,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
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