体育活动是学生生活的重要组成部分。假定你是李华,请根据以下提示内容写一篇英语短文,介绍自己最喜欢的运动并说明喜欢这项运动的原因。→审主题
提示内容:1.说明自己最喜欢的运动;
2.喜欢这项运动的原因(至少三条);→审要点
3.发表感想。→审时态:以一般现在时为主
审人称:第一、三人称
要求:1.包括所有提示信息,可适当增加细节;
2.条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确;
3.词数100 左右。→审词数
写作支架
开头 点明自己最喜欢的运动 Sports are an important part of students' life. Among all sports, I like best. I play it with after school.
中间 阐述喜欢这项运动的原因 There are three main reasons why I love it. (高分句式1)
First, it's a great way to . make me stronger and more energetic.
Second, it teaches me . I learn to communicate and cooperate with my teammates.
Third, is the best way for me to . Whenever I feel tired from homework or exams, lets me relax quickly. (高分句式2)
结尾 发表感想 has brought me lots of joy and growth. It's more than just a sport to me. I'll stick to and enjoy the happiness it brings.
优秀范文
Sports are an important part of students' life. Among all sports, I like basketball best. I play it with my classmates on the school playground every Friday afternoon after school.
There are three main reasons why I love it①. First②, it's a great way to build up my body. Running, jumping and shooting make me stronger and more energetic. Second②, it teaches me how to work as a team. I learn to communicate and cooperate with my teammates. Third②, playing basketball is the best way for me to relieve pressure. Whenever I feel tired from homework or exams①, a basketball game lets me relax quickly.
Playing basketball has brought me lots of joy and growth. It's more than just a sport to me.③ I'll stick to playing basketball and enjoy the happiness it brings.
初中英语 九年级 全一册 人教版
亮点评析
①使用 why 引导的定语从句和 whenever 引导的时间状语从句,让句式更丰富,让表达不单调。
②用 First、Second、Third 清晰划分三条原因,衔接自然,条理清晰。
③升华主题,跳出单纯介绍运动的层面,体现运动带来的精神收获。

【解析】：这是人教版九年级全一册的主题写作题，写作要求如下：1. 体裁为介绍个人喜爱运动的说明文，以第一人称为主，整体使用一般现在时，词数控制在100左右；2. 写作结构分为三部分：①开头直接点明自己最喜欢的运动，补充日常参与这项运动的场景细节；②中间用逻辑衔接词First、Second、Third清晰罗列至少三条喜爱这项运动的原因，合理使用题干给出的高分句式（why引导的定语从句、whenever引导的时间状语从句）丰富表达，避免句式单调；③结尾升华主题，点明运动给自己带来的精神收获，表达坚持运动的想法；3. 内容需要覆盖所有提示要点，保证语句通顺、逻辑连贯，符合九年级英语写作的能力要求。
【答案】：
写作支架填空答案：
1. basketball
2. my classmates on the school playground every Friday afternoon
3. build up my body
4. Running, jumping and shooting
5. how to work as a team
6. playing basketball
7. relieve pressure
8. a basketball game
9. Playing basketball
10. playing basketball
完整参考范文：
Sports are an important part of students' life. Among all sports, I like basketball best. I play it with my classmates on the school playground every Friday afternoon after school.
There are three main reasons why I love it. First, it's a great way to build up my body. Running, jumping and shooting make me stronger and more energetic. Second, it teaches me how to work as a team. I learn to communicate and cooperate with my teammates. Third, playing basketball is the best way for me to relieve pressure. Whenever I feel tired from homework or exams, a basketball game lets me relax quickly.
Playing basketball has brought me lots of joy and growth. It's more than just a sport to me. I'll stick to playing basketball and enjoy the happiness it brings.