为了丰富自己的生活,每个人都可以收藏一些有意义的东西,你喜欢收藏什么呢? 请你以 “I like collecting ”为题,写一篇不少于80词的短文,介绍你最喜欢的收藏品。
提示:
1.What do you like collecting?
2.When did you start collecting it?
3.Why do you like collecting it?
I like collecting

教材原文
P124▶My hobby is a bit unusual.
P124▶I started collecting them when I was 8.
P124▶This is how I started my collection.
P124▶Finally, they make me think of happy moments in life together with family and friends.
优秀范文
I like collecting tickets
My hobby is a bit unusual. I love collecting different kinds of② tickets, such as train tickets and tickets to museums and other places.①
I started collecting them when I was 8. When I got a ticket for the first time, I found that it was beautiful. Therefore②, I began collecting tickets. This is how I started my collection. I often go traveling with my parents during the holidays, so I have a lot of tickets.
I enjoy collecting tickets, because they not only help me remember different beautiful places clearly, but also③ make me think of happy moments in life together with my family.
亮点评析
①文章开门见山,交代了作者最喜欢收藏的东西。
②亮点词汇 different kinds of、Therefore 的使用为文章增色不少。
③not only... but also... 这一固定搭配的使用提升了文章的档次。

1. My hobby is a bit unusual. I love collecting different kinds of tickets, such as train tickets and tickets to museums and other places.
2. I started collecting them when I was 8. When I got a ticket for the first time, I found that it was beautiful. Therefore, I began collecting tickets. This is how I started my collection. I often go traveling with my parents during the holidays, so I have a lot of tickets.
3. I enjoy collecting tickets, because they not only help me remember different beautiful places clearly, but also make me think of happy moments in life together with my family.

【分析】
本题为英语写作题，要求围绕“喜欢的收藏品”完成短文，需结合思维导图的结构（开头介绍收藏物品、中间说明开始收藏的时间与经历、结尾阐述收藏原因），紧扣题目提示的三个核心问题（收藏物品、开始时间、收藏原因），同时运用高分句式提升作文质量。解题时，先确定具体收藏物品，再对应思维导图的每个空填写合适内容，保证语法正确、逻辑连贯、字数达标。
【解析】
写作需遵循以下步骤：
1. 开头：点明爱好特点，说明收藏的物品及举例，对应思维导图开头的两个句子；
2. 中间：说明开始收藏的时间，描述首次接触藏品的感受，说明开始收藏的原因，补充日常获取藏品的方式，对应思维导图中间的所有句子；
3. 结尾：运用高分句式not only...but also...阐述收藏原因，对应思维导图结尾的句子。
最终形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】
My hobby is a bit unusual. I love collecting different kinds of tickets, such as train tickets and tickets to museums and other places.
I started collecting them when I was 8. When I got a ticket for the first time, I found that it was beautiful. Therefore, I began collecting tickets. This is how I started my collection. I often go traveling with my parents during the holidays, so I have a lot of tickets.
I enjoy collecting tickets, because they not only help me remember different beautiful places clearly, but also make me think of happy moments in life together with my family.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、固定句式运用、词汇运用
【点评】
本文结构清晰，严格遵循开头、中间、结尾的逻辑展开，紧扣题目要求，准确回答了核心问题；运用了高分句式not only...but also...，词汇丰富，内容充实，符合初中英语写作的优秀标准。
【难度系数】
0.4