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Ⅶ. Writing. 写作。（4分写作 + 3分书写）
要求:1. 根据所给信息,帮Jimmy写一篇介绍家人情况的英文短文；
2. 题目自拟；
3. 信息可以增加,不少于40个单词；
4. 结构合理,文笔流畅。
要求:1. 根据所给信息,帮Jimmy写一篇介绍家人情况的英文短文；
2. 题目自拟；
3. 信息可以增加,不少于40个单词；
4. 结构合理,文笔流畅。
答案
【参考范文】 My family
I am Jimmy. I am 11 years old. I like swimming. I am good at drawing. But I am afraid of spiders. I like cartoons best. They are funny. My father is 40. He likes reading. He is good at writing. But he is afraid of swimming in the sea. He likes sports programmes best. Because he thinks they are exciting. My mother is 36. She loves singing. And she is good at cooking. But she is afraid of big dogs. Her favourite programmes are detective films because they are interesting. We are a happy family!
I am Jimmy. I am 11 years old. I like swimming. I am good at drawing. But I am afraid of spiders. I like cartoons best. They are funny. My father is 40. He likes reading. He is good at writing. But he is afraid of swimming in the sea. He likes sports programmes best. Because he thinks they are exciting. My mother is 36. She loves singing. And she is good at cooking. But she is afraid of big dogs. Her favourite programmes are detective films because they are interesting. We are a happy family!
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务是根据表格信息介绍Jimmy的家人，步骤如下：1. 拟定合适的题目，如My family；2. 先介绍自己（Jimmy的年龄、基本情况），再依次说明自己的爱好、擅长的事、害怕的事物、最喜欢的节目及原因；3. 分别介绍父亲和母亲的对应信息，用清晰的表述串联；4. 添加总结句让文章完整，确保语句连贯、符合字数要求，正确运用相关英语短语和句型。
【解析】
写作时，先提取表格中的关键信息：Jimmy的信息（11岁，爱好swimming，擅长drawing，害怕spiders，最喜欢cartoon，原因funny）；父亲的信息（40岁，爱好reading，擅长writing，害怕swimming in the sea，最喜欢sports programme，原因exciting）；母亲的信息（36岁，爱好singing，擅长cooking，害怕big dogs，最喜欢detective film，原因interesting）。然后用一般现在时态，借助连接词（如I am..., My father is..., My mother is..., But..., Because...）将信息串联成通顺的短文，注意语句流畅，字数不少于40词，结构清晰，最后补充总结家庭的温馨，完成写作。
【答案】
My family
I am Jimmy. I am 11 years old. I like swimming. I am good at drawing. But I am afraid of spiders. I like cartoons best. They are funny. My father is 40. He likes reading. He is good at writing. But he is afraid of swimming in the sea. He likes sports programmes best. Because he thinks they are exciting. My mother is 36. She loves singing. And she is good at cooking. But she is afraid of big dogs. Her favourite programmes are detective films because they are interesting. We are a happy family!
【知识点】
英语写作；常用短语运用；原因状语从句
【点评】
本题为信息类英语写作题，考查学生提取表格信息、组织语言进行书面表达的能力，要求学生准确运用相关短语和句型，语句连贯，符合写作要求，是初中英语基础写作的常见题型，能有效检验学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作任务是根据表格信息介绍Jimmy的家人，步骤如下：1. 拟定合适的题目，如My family；2. 先介绍自己（Jimmy的年龄、基本情况），再依次说明自己的爱好、擅长的事、害怕的事物、最喜欢的节目及原因；3. 分别介绍父亲和母亲的对应信息，用清晰的表述串联；4. 添加总结句让文章完整，确保语句连贯、符合字数要求，正确运用相关英语短语和句型。
【解析】
写作时，先提取表格中的关键信息：Jimmy的信息（11岁，爱好swimming，擅长drawing，害怕spiders，最喜欢cartoon，原因funny）；父亲的信息（40岁，爱好reading，擅长writing，害怕swimming in the sea，最喜欢sports programme，原因exciting）；母亲的信息（36岁，爱好singing，擅长cooking，害怕big dogs，最喜欢detective film，原因interesting）。然后用一般现在时态，借助连接词（如I am..., My father is..., My mother is..., But..., Because...）将信息串联成通顺的短文，注意语句流畅，字数不少于40词，结构清晰，最后补充总结家庭的温馨，完成写作。
【答案】
My family
I am Jimmy. I am 11 years old. I like swimming. I am good at drawing. But I am afraid of spiders. I like cartoons best. They are funny. My father is 40. He likes reading. He is good at writing. But he is afraid of swimming in the sea. He likes sports programmes best. Because he thinks they are exciting. My mother is 36. She loves singing. And she is good at cooking. But she is afraid of big dogs. Her favourite programmes are detective films because they are interesting. We are a happy family!
【知识点】
英语写作；常用短语运用；原因状语从句
【点评】
本题为信息类英语写作题，考查学生提取表格信息、组织语言进行书面表达的能力，要求学生准确运用相关短语和句型，语句连贯，符合写作要求，是初中英语基础写作的常见题型，能有效检验学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
