第4阶 实战演练
[2025 江苏扬州期中]“烟花三月下扬州”,春天正是来扬州游玩的好时节。为了让更多的人了解扬州,某校英语杂志社Travel专栏正面向中学生举行以“Welcome to Yangzhou”为题的征文比赛。请根据下面的图表写一篇英语短文投稿。

要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
3. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实的姓名、校名和地名等。

Welcome to Yangzhou
Yangzhou is an amazing city with many places of interest.
[2025 江苏扬州期中]“烟花三月下扬州”,春天正是来扬州游玩的好时节。为了让更多的人了解扬州,某校英语杂志社Travel专栏正面向中学生举行以“Welcome to Yangzhou”为题的征文比赛。请根据下面的图表写一篇英语短文投稿。
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
3. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实的姓名、校名和地名等。
Welcome to Yangzhou
Yangzhou is an amazing city with many places of interest.
There are a lot of things to see and to do.
In the morning, you can go to a local restaurant to try Yangzhou Morning Tea. It has a history of over 200 years. After that, you can visit Slender West Lake. It is nice to row a boat on the lake. Taking photos is a good choice for you. There are many beautiful flowers there, and you can enjoy them.
In the afternoon, when you feel tired, you can enjoy Yangzhou Opera at one of the local theatres. It is a traditional art form, and it is an important part of Chinese culture.
In the morning, you can go to a local restaurant to try Yangzhou Morning Tea. It has a history of over 200 years. After that, you can visit Slender West Lake. It is nice to row a boat on the lake. Taking photos is a good choice for you. There are many beautiful flowers there, and you can enjoy them.
In the afternoon, when you feel tired, you can enjoy Yangzhou Opera at one of the local theatres. It is a traditional art form, and it is an important part of Chinese culture.
答案
Welcome to Yangzhou
Yangzhou is an amazing city with many places of interest. There are a lot of things to see and to do.
In the morning, you can go to a local restaurant to try Yangzhou Morning Tea. It has a history of over 200 years. After that, you can visit Slender West Lake. It is nice to row a boat on the lake. Taking photos is a good choice for you. There are many beautiful flowers there, and you can enjoy them.
In the afternoon, when you feel tired, you can enjoy Yangzhou Opera at one of the local theatres. It is a traditional art form, and it is an important part of Chinese culture.
Yangzhou is an amazing city with many places of interest. There are a lot of things to see and to do.
In the morning, you can go to a local restaurant to try Yangzhou Morning Tea. It has a history of over 200 years. After that, you can visit Slender West Lake. It is nice to row a boat on the lake. Taking photos is a good choice for you. There are many beautiful flowers there, and you can enjoy them.
In the afternoon, when you feel tired, you can enjoy Yangzhou Opera at one of the local theatres. It is a traditional art form, and it is an important part of Chinese culture.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题,主题是“Welcome to Yangzhou”,要求结合扬州特色文化与景点,承接给定开头,词数约100,需语法正确、上下文连贯。解题思路:1. 承接开头句,引出扬州有诸多可体验的内容;2. 分上午、下午的行程,依次介绍扬州早茶(含历史)、瘦西湖活动(划船、赏花拍照);3. 下午安排扬州戏曲,点明其文化意义,确保涵盖所有要点,适当拓展,符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照写作逻辑,先承接开头引出扬州的多元体验,再分时段展开:① 上午:先尝试有200多年历史的扬州早茶,之后前往瘦西湖,可划船、赏花拍照;② 下午:若疲惫,可去当地剧院欣赏作为中国传统文化一部分的扬州戏曲,使内容连贯,满足题目要求。
【答案】
Welcome to Yangzhou
Yangzhou is an amazing city with many places of interest. There are a lot of things to see and to do.
In the morning, you can go to a local restaurant to try Yangzhou Morning Tea. It has a history of over 200 years. After that, you can visit Slender West Lake. It is nice to row a boat on the lake. Taking photos is a good choice for you. There are many beautiful flowers there, and you can enjoy them.
In the afternoon, when you feel tired, you can enjoy Yangzhou Opera at one of the local theatres. It is a traditional art form, and it is an important part of Chinese culture.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、文化类英语表达、语句连贯写作
【点评】
本题以扬州地方文化为载体,考查中学生英语应用文写作能力,要求整合指定要点并适当拓展,既考查语言运用,又渗透文化认知,符合中学英语写作的命题导向。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作题,主题是“Welcome to Yangzhou”,要求结合扬州特色文化与景点,承接给定开头,词数约100,需语法正确、上下文连贯。解题思路:1. 承接开头句,引出扬州有诸多可体验的内容;2. 分上午、下午的行程,依次介绍扬州早茶(含历史)、瘦西湖活动(划船、赏花拍照);3. 下午安排扬州戏曲,点明其文化意义,确保涵盖所有要点,适当拓展,符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照写作逻辑,先承接开头引出扬州的多元体验,再分时段展开:① 上午:先尝试有200多年历史的扬州早茶,之后前往瘦西湖,可划船、赏花拍照;② 下午:若疲惫,可去当地剧院欣赏作为中国传统文化一部分的扬州戏曲,使内容连贯,满足题目要求。
【答案】
Welcome to Yangzhou
Yangzhou is an amazing city with many places of interest. There are a lot of things to see and to do.
In the morning, you can go to a local restaurant to try Yangzhou Morning Tea. It has a history of over 200 years. After that, you can visit Slender West Lake. It is nice to row a boat on the lake. Taking photos is a good choice for you. There are many beautiful flowers there, and you can enjoy them.
In the afternoon, when you feel tired, you can enjoy Yangzhou Opera at one of the local theatres. It is a traditional art form, and it is an important part of Chinese culture.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、文化类英语表达、语句连贯写作
【点评】
本题以扬州地方文化为载体,考查中学生英语应用文写作能力,要求整合指定要点并适当拓展,既考查语言运用,又渗透文化认知,符合中学英语写作的命题导向。
【难度系数】
0.5
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