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在我们的成长历程中,总会遇到一些如星光般闪耀的朋友,他们的性格、学识与爱好都独具魅力。请结合以下图示,以“My Friend Simon”为题,写一篇英语短文介绍你的朋友Simon。
要求:
1. 词数80—100,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 短文须包含所提供的主要信息,并适当发挥。
My Friend Simon
I am glad to introduce my friend Simon.
在我们的成长历程中,总会遇到一些如星光般闪耀的朋友,他们的性格、学识与爱好都独具魅力。请结合以下图示,以“My Friend Simon”为题,写一篇英语短文介绍你的朋友Simon。
要求:
1. 词数80—100,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 短文须包含所提供的主要信息,并适当发挥。
My Friend Simon
I am glad to introduce my friend Simon.
Simon is the tallest boy in my class. He wears glasses.
Simon is a humorous and patient person. Once, he made everyone laugh by telling funny jokes in a boring class.
He also patiently helped his classmates with difficult math problems. When it comes to studying, Simon is hard-working and never gives up.
He always reviews his notes and asks questions. Simon enjoys playing basketball very much.
I often play basketball with him after school.
Simon is really a good friend. I'm happy to have him as my friend.
答案
My Friend Simon
I am glad to introduce my friend Simon.
Simon is the tallest boy in my class. He wears glasses.
Simon is a humorous and patient person. Once, he made everyone laugh by telling funny jokes in a boring class. He also patiently helped his classmates with difficult math problems. When it comes to studying, Simon is hard-working and never gives up. He always reviews his notes and asks questions. Simon enjoys playing basketball very much. I often play basketball with him after school.
Simon is really a good friend. I'm happy to have him as my friend.
I am glad to introduce my friend Simon.
Simon is the tallest boy in my class. He wears glasses.
Simon is a humorous and patient person. Once, he made everyone laugh by telling funny jokes in a boring class. He also patiently helped his classmates with difficult math problems. When it comes to studying, Simon is hard-working and never gives up. He always reviews his notes and asks questions. Simon enjoys playing basketball very much. I often play basketball with him after school.
Simon is really a good friend. I'm happy to have him as my friend.
解析
【分析】
写作时需围绕题目要求和图示信息，按逻辑顺序介绍Simon：先补充外貌描写，再分别介绍性格（幽默、耐心各举实例）、学习态度（勤奋好学）、爱好（选一项展开），最后总结评价，确保覆盖所有要点且词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 补充外貌：介绍Simon的身高和眼镜特征；
2. 描述性格：用课堂讲笑话体现幽默，帮同学解数学题体现耐心；
3. 说明学习：体现勤奋好学、锲而不舍的态度；
4. 介绍爱好：选择篮球，简单描述日常活动；
5. 结尾总结：表达对Simon的认可，完成短文。
【答案】
My Friend Simon
I am glad to introduce my friend Simon.
Simon is the tallest boy in my class. He wears glasses.
Simon is a humorous and patient person. Once, he made everyone laugh by telling funny jokes in a boring class. He also patiently helped his classmates with difficult math problems. When it comes to studying, Simon is hard-working and never gives up. He always reviews his notes and asks questions. Simon enjoys playing basketball very much. I often play basketball with him after school.
Simon is really a good friend. I'm happy to have him as my friend.
【知识点】
英语写作、人物介绍
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，覆盖图示所有要点，每个要点配具体实例，语言流畅，结构清晰，符合初中英语写作规范，词数达标且适当发挥。
【难度系数】
0.6
写作时需围绕题目要求和图示信息，按逻辑顺序介绍Simon：先补充外貌描写，再分别介绍性格（幽默、耐心各举实例）、学习态度（勤奋好学）、爱好（选一项展开），最后总结评价，确保覆盖所有要点且词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 补充外貌：介绍Simon的身高和眼镜特征；
2. 描述性格：用课堂讲笑话体现幽默，帮同学解数学题体现耐心；
3. 说明学习：体现勤奋好学、锲而不舍的态度；
4. 介绍爱好：选择篮球，简单描述日常活动；
5. 结尾总结：表达对Simon的认可，完成短文。
【答案】
My Friend Simon
I am glad to introduce my friend Simon.
Simon is the tallest boy in my class. He wears glasses.
Simon is a humorous and patient person. Once, he made everyone laugh by telling funny jokes in a boring class. He also patiently helped his classmates with difficult math problems. When it comes to studying, Simon is hard-working and never gives up. He always reviews his notes and asks questions. Simon enjoys playing basketball very much. I often play basketball with him after school.
Simon is really a good friend. I'm happy to have him as my friend.
【知识点】
英语写作、人物介绍
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，覆盖图示所有要点，每个要点配具体实例，语言流畅，结构清晰，符合初中英语写作规范，词数达标且适当发挥。
【难度系数】
0.6
